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最近，阳光中学英文校报正在举行以“My school life”为题的征文活动。假如你是阳光中学七年级的新生李敏，请根据下面表格中的内容，介绍一下你自己的学校生活。
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，省略号处可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. My school is not very big, but it’s very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，省略号处可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. My school is not very big, but it’s very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library.
I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team.
We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
答案
One possible version
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级新生李敏的身份介绍学校生活，需覆盖表格中学习、活动、同学、感受的所有内容，适当发挥省略部分，语句通顺、意思连贯，词数80左右且开头已给出。解题思路：1. 按“学习→活动→同学→感受”的逻辑梳理要点，对应表格内容；2. 学习部分补充喜欢历史的原因（如有趣、能了解世界）；3. 活动部分明确借书的来源、篮球队的练习时间；4. 同学部分体现友善互助的特点；5. 感受部分补充自己对学校生活的喜爱；6. 采用一般现在时，确保语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，依次展开内容：1. 学习方面：说明上课时间为早上8点，科目多样，点明最喜欢历史并补充原因（it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world）；2. 活动方面：说明喜欢读书，常从学校图书馆借书，是校篮球队成员，周五下午练习；3. 同学方面：表达同学友善，互相帮助；4. 感受方面：总结自己在学校很开心，享受学校生活。全程使用一般现在时，用词符合七年级英语水平，语句连贯自然。
【答案】
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校生活话题表达
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语句通顺、意思连贯，适当发挥了省略部分，符合七年级学生的英语写作水平，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以七年级新生李敏的身份介绍学校生活，需覆盖表格中学习、活动、同学、感受的所有内容，适当发挥省略部分，语句通顺、意思连贯，词数80左右且开头已给出。解题思路：1. 按“学习→活动→同学→感受”的逻辑梳理要点，对应表格内容；2. 学习部分补充喜欢历史的原因（如有趣、能了解世界）；3. 活动部分明确借书的来源、篮球队的练习时间；4. 同学部分体现友善互助的特点；5. 感受部分补充自己对学校生活的喜爱；6. 采用一般现在时，确保语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头，依次展开内容：1. 学习方面：说明上课时间为早上8点，科目多样，点明最喜欢历史并补充原因（it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world）；2. 活动方面：说明喜欢读书，常从学校图书馆借书，是校篮球队成员，周五下午练习；3. 同学方面：表达同学友善，互相帮助；4. 感受方面：总结自己在学校很开心，享受学校生活。全程使用一般现在时，用词符合七年级英语水平，语句连贯自然。
【答案】
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校生活话题表达
【点评】
本文完全覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语句通顺、意思连贯，适当发挥了省略部分，符合七年级学生的英语写作水平，是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
