美的故事、介绍著名音乐家的故事,以及以书信等格式介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
写作指导
假设你是希望中学一名九年级的学生,请以“My Music Story”为题,写一篇英语短文,阐述你的音乐故事及音乐给你带来的成长。
写作提示:
1. 故事发生的背景;
2. 描述这段经历的过程;
3. 音乐给你的生活带来的影响。
写作要求:
1. 根据写作提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
My Music Story
写作指导
假设你是希望中学一名九年级的学生,请以“My Music Story”为题,写一篇英语短文,阐述你的音乐故事及音乐给你带来的成长。
写作提示:
1. 故事发生的背景;
2. 描述这段经历的过程;
3. 音乐给你的生活带来的影响。
写作要求:
1. 根据写作提示,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右。
My Music Story
答案
My Music Story
I am a Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School. Last semester, I failed several important exams and felt so upset that I almost lost heart in my study.
One day my father gave me a small guitar as my birthday gift. I spent half an hour practicing simple soft music every day after finishing my homework, and soon I could play my favorite songs well.
Now music is an important part of my life. It not only helps me relax from busy study, but also teaches me to keep trying when I meet difficulties.
I am a Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School. Last semester, I failed several important exams and felt so upset that I almost lost heart in my study.
One day my father gave me a small guitar as my birthday gift. I spent half an hour practicing simple soft music every day after finishing my homework, and soon I could play my favorite songs well.
Now music is an important part of my life. It not only helps me relax from busy study, but also teaches me to keep trying when I meet difficulties.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务:以希望中学九年级学生的身份,围绕“My Music Story”写英语短文,需涵盖故事背景、经历过程、音乐带来的影响三个要点,词数约80。解题思路:1. 开篇点明身份与故事背景(考试失利、情绪低落),引出音乐的契机;2. 中间叙述核心经历(父亲送吉他、日常练习);3. 结尾阐述音乐对生活和成长的积极影响,语言贴合初中生水平,简洁流畅。
【解析】按照写作提示分三部分组织内容:① 开篇介绍身份(Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School)与背景(考试失利、沮丧);② 中间讲述经历(父亲送吉他,课后练习);③ 结尾说明音乐的影响(放松、教会坚持),控制词数符合要求,逻辑连贯。
【答案】My Music Story
I am a Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School. Last semester, I failed several important exams and felt so upset that I almost lost heart in my study.
One day my father gave me a small guitar as my birthday gift. I spent half an hour practicing simple soft music every day after finishing my homework, and soon I could play my favorite songs well.
Now music is an important part of my life. It not only helps me relax from busy study, but also teaches me to keep trying when I meet difficulties.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,情感真实,准确传达了音乐对个人成长的积极作用,语言简洁流畅,符合九年级学生的写作水平与词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照写作提示分三部分组织内容:① 开篇介绍身份(Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School)与背景(考试失利、沮丧);② 中间讲述经历(父亲送吉他,课后练习);③ 结尾说明音乐的影响(放松、教会坚持),控制词数符合要求,逻辑连贯。
【答案】My Music Story
I am a Grade 9 student from Hope Middle School. Last semester, I failed several important exams and felt so upset that I almost lost heart in my study.
One day my father gave me a small guitar as my birthday gift. I spent half an hour practicing simple soft music every day after finishing my homework, and soon I could play my favorite songs well.
Now music is an important part of my life. It not only helps me relax from busy study, but also teaches me to keep trying when I meet difficulties.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,情感真实,准确传达了音乐对个人成长的积极作用,语言简洁流畅,符合九年级学生的写作水平与词数要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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