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Ⅶ.书面表达（满分20分）
假如你是李华，你的好朋友Judy经常脖子痛。请你根据要点提示，给她写封邮件。不少于80词。
要点如下:1.不要过多玩电脑;2.不要长时间低头看书;3.要注意适当休息;4.适当锻炼。
要求:1.短文中要包括以上所有提示信息;
2.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅。
假如你是李华，你的好朋友Judy经常脖子痛。请你根据要点提示，给她写封邮件。不少于80词。
要点如下:1.不要过多玩电脑;2.不要长时间低头看书;3.要注意适当休息;4.适当锻炼。
要求:1.短文中要包括以上所有提示信息;
2.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First,you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second,don't read with your head down for too long. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading.
Besides,it's important to take proper breaks. For example,take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least,doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First,you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second,don't read with your head down for too long. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading.
Besides,it's important to take proper breaks. For example,take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least,doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】首先明确写作身份为李华，收信人是好友Judy，核心是针对Judy脖子痛的问题给出合理建议。写作思路：1. 开头点明事由（听说Judy常脖子痛），引出建议；2. 分四点逐一落实提示要点，每点可补充细节让内容更具体；3. 结尾表达祝福。需注意书信格式，涵盖所有要求要点，语言通顺，词数达标。
【解析】按照标准书信格式写作：开头写称呼Dear Judy，接着说明听说Judy常脖子痛，引出建议；然后分层次呈现建议：①避免过多玩电脑，解释长时间固定姿势会给脖子施压；②不要长时间低头看书，保持颈部舒适姿势；③要适当休息，举例每小时休息10分钟拉伸身体；④适当锻炼如颈部拉伸，增强颈部肌肉、促进血液循环；最后结尾表达希望Judy早日康复，落款为Yours, Li Hua。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First,you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second,don't read with your head down for too long. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading.
Besides,it's important to take proper breaks. For example,take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least,doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、建议类书信写作
【点评】该范文严格紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（总-分-总），语言流畅自然，适当补充细节（如解释玩电脑的危害、休息的例子、锻炼的作用）使内容更丰富合理，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照标准书信格式写作：开头写称呼Dear Judy，接着说明听说Judy常脖子痛，引出建议；然后分层次呈现建议：①避免过多玩电脑，解释长时间固定姿势会给脖子施压；②不要长时间低头看书，保持颈部舒适姿势；③要适当休息，举例每小时休息10分钟拉伸身体；④适当锻炼如颈部拉伸，增强颈部肌肉、促进血液循环；最后结尾表达希望Judy早日康复，落款为Yours, Li Hua。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I'm sorry to hear that you often have a sore neck. Here is my advice.
First,you should avoid playing computer games too much. Spending hours in front of the screen with your head in a fixed position can put great pressure on your neck. Second,don't read with your head down for too long. Try to keep your neck in a comfortable position while reading.
Besides,it's important to take proper breaks. For example,take a 10-minute break every hour to stretch your body. Last but not least,doing proper exercise like neck-stretching exercises can strengthen your neck muscles and improve blood circulation.
I hope you will feel better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、建议类书信写作
【点评】该范文严格紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（总-分-总），语言流畅自然，适当补充细节（如解释玩电脑的危害、休息的例子、锻炼的作用）使内容更丰富合理，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】0.7
