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【书面表达】
假设几位外国友人准备从合肥出发去黄山旅游，请你根据下图提示向他们作简单的介绍。词数为80～100左右。
参考词汇:云海 the sea of clouds;奇松 wondrous pines;怪石 unique rocks;温泉 hot springs
假设几位外国友人准备从合肥出发去黄山旅游，请你根据下图提示向他们作简单的介绍。词数为80～100左右。
参考词汇:云海 the sea of clouds;奇松 wondrous pines;怪石 unique rocks;温泉 hot springs
答案
One possible version:
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It is not far from Hefei. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei. You don't need to take a plane or train. While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you. In the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very beautiful.
Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world. You can enjoy yourselves here.
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It is not far from Hefei. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei. You don't need to take a plane or train. While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you. In the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very beautiful.
Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world. You can enjoy yourselves here.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇面向外国友人的景点介绍类英语书面表达，需结合图片给出的黄山位置（安徽南部）、交通（从合肥乘公交3小时），以及参考词汇（云海、奇松、怪石、温泉）完成写作。解题思路：1. 开篇点明黄山的知名度，引出介绍对象；2. 说明黄山的地理位置和从合肥前往的交通方式，对应图片信息；3. 描述在黄山可欣赏的特色景观，运用参考词汇；4. 结尾总结推荐，表达赞美，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：点明黄山的地位，如“Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China.”；
2. 位置与交通：对应图片信息，说明黄山在安徽南部，从合肥坐公交需约3小时，如“It lies in the south of Anhui Province. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei.”；
3. 景观描述：结合参考词汇，介绍可欣赏的云海、奇松、怪石、温泉，如“While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you.”；
4. 结尾：总结黄山值得游览，表达赞美，如“Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world.”，确保词数在80-100左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It is not far from Hefei. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei. You don't need to take a plane or train. While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you. In the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very beautiful.
Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world. You can enjoy yourselves here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；景点介绍写作
【点评】
本题结合图片信息与参考词汇，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行景点介绍的能力，贴近实际交流场景，结构清晰，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇面向外国友人的景点介绍类英语书面表达，需结合图片给出的黄山位置（安徽南部）、交通（从合肥乘公交3小时），以及参考词汇（云海、奇松、怪石、温泉）完成写作。解题思路：1. 开篇点明黄山的知名度，引出介绍对象；2. 说明黄山的地理位置和从合肥前往的交通方式，对应图片信息；3. 描述在黄山可欣赏的特色景观，运用参考词汇；4. 结尾总结推荐，表达赞美，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇：点明黄山的地位，如“Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China.”；
2. 位置与交通：对应图片信息，说明黄山在安徽南部，从合肥坐公交需约3小时，如“It lies in the south of Anhui Province. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei.”；
3. 景观描述：结合参考词汇，介绍可欣赏的云海、奇松、怪石、温泉，如“While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you.”；
4. 结尾：总结黄山值得游览，表达赞美，如“Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world.”，确保词数在80-100左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Mount Huangshan is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui Province. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit it. It is not far from Hefei. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus from Hefei. You don't need to take a plane or train. While you are climbing the mountain,you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines, unique rocks and hot springs around you. In the early morning when the sun rises,the sky looks very beautiful.
Mount Huangshan is worth visiting. It is really a wonder of the natural world. You can enjoy yourselves here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；景点介绍写作
【点评】
本题结合图片信息与参考词汇，考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行景点介绍的能力，贴近实际交流场景，结构清晰，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
