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主题词网
优选词汇
· breakfast · lunch · meat · fish · egg · fruit
· vegetable · dinner · milk · snack · junk food · diet
· walk · run · swim · exercise · go hiking · ride a bike
· strong · full of energy · keep fit · jogging · healthy · relax
· sleep · stay up · go to bed · enough · eight hours · less than
写作实例
审主题
如今,健康问题越来越引起人们的重视。你校将进行一次题为“My healthy lifestyle”的演讲比赛,以此鼓励更多的同学拥有健康的生活方式。请你根据下面的思维导图完成一篇演讲稿,介绍自己健康的生活方式。词数80左右。
审人称:以第一人称为主
审词数
My healthy lifestyle
写作支架
开头 — 引出话题：Hello, everyone. Today I’m going to talk about
For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about
中间 — 具体介绍：Firstly, I drink
I never eat
Secondly, I often
Lastly, I get
结尾 — 发出倡议：By having
主题词网
优选词汇
· breakfast · lunch · meat · fish · egg · fruit
· vegetable · dinner · milk · snack · junk food · diet
· walk · run · swim · exercise · go hiking · ride a bike
· strong · full of energy · keep fit · jogging · healthy · relax
· sleep · stay up · go to bed · enough · eight hours · less than
写作实例
审主题
如今,健康问题越来越引起人们的重视。你校将进行一次题为“My healthy lifestyle”的演讲比赛,以此鼓励更多的同学拥有健康的生活方式。请你根据下面的思维导图完成一篇演讲稿,介绍自己健康的生活方式。词数80左右。
审人称:以第一人称为主
审词数
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
Firstly, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health.
Secondly, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit.
Lastly, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life.
Thank you for listening!
写作支架
开头 — 引出话题：Hello, everyone. Today I’m going to talk about
my healthy lifestyle
.For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about
a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest
.中间 — 具体介绍：Firstly, I drink
milk
every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables
.I never eat
junk food
because I think it is bad for my health
.（高分句式1）Secondly, I often
do exercise like running or playing football
. Besides, I go swimming once a week
. Sport helps me keep fit
.Lastly, I get
nine hours of sleep every night
, so I am always full of energy
.结尾 — 发出倡议：By having
good habits
, I believe all of us can live a healthy life
.（高分句式2）答案
佳作剖析
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教材原文
P57 I drink milk every day.
P58 I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
P66 For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
P66 Sport helps me keep fit.
优秀范文
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest. ①
Firstly②, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health③.
Secondly②, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly②, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life③. Thank you for listening!
亮点评析
①恰当使用了本单元所学内容，体现了学以致用的能力。
②使用Firstly、Secondly和Lastly依次介绍自己的健康生活方式，使文章条理清晰，层次分明。
③使用原因状语从句和宾语从句，使文章句式更加丰富，提高文章档次。
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教材原文
P57 I drink milk every day.
P58 I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
P66 For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
P66 Sport helps me keep fit.
优秀范文
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest. ①
Firstly②, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health③.
Secondly②, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly②, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life③. Thank you for listening!
亮点评析
①恰当使用了本单元所学内容，体现了学以致用的能力。
②使用Firstly、Secondly和Lastly依次介绍自己的健康生活方式，使文章条理清晰，层次分明。
③使用原因状语从句和宾语从句，使文章句式更加丰富，提高文章档次。
解析
【分析】
本题要求写题为“My healthy lifestyle”的英语演讲稿，需用第一人称，词数80左右，需结合给定的主题词汇网与写作支架完成。解题思路：1. 开头用写作支架引出演讲主题，点明健康生活方式的核心；2. 中间分饮食、运动、睡眠三个方面，用连接词（Firstly/Secondly/Lastly）串联，结合给定词汇具体介绍健康习惯；3. 结尾发出倡议，用高分句式总结，符合演讲稿的礼貌表达。
【解析】
按照写作支架结构，结合优秀范文规范写法：
1. 开头：Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
2. 中间：Firstly, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health. Secondly, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
3. 结尾：By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life. Thank you for listening!
【答案】
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
Firstly, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health.
Secondly, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康主题词汇运用、英语写作结构搭建
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，用连接词串联内容，层次分明；恰当运用单元所学词汇与句式，符合演讲稿的格式和语气，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写题为“My healthy lifestyle”的英语演讲稿，需用第一人称，词数80左右，需结合给定的主题词汇网与写作支架完成。解题思路：1. 开头用写作支架引出演讲主题，点明健康生活方式的核心；2. 中间分饮食、运动、睡眠三个方面，用连接词（Firstly/Secondly/Lastly）串联，结合给定词汇具体介绍健康习惯；3. 结尾发出倡议，用高分句式总结，符合演讲稿的礼貌表达。
【解析】
按照写作支架结构，结合优秀范文规范写法：
1. 开头：Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
2. 中间：Firstly, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health. Secondly, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
3. 结尾：By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life. Thank you for listening!
【答案】
My healthy lifestyle
Hello, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about my healthy lifestyle. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest.
Firstly, I drink milk every day. I also eat lots of fruit and vegetables. I never eat junk food because I think it is bad for my health.
Secondly, I often do exercise like running or playing football. Besides, I go swimming once a week. Sport helps me keep fit. Lastly, I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy.
By having good habits, I believe all of us can live a healthy life. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康主题词汇运用、英语写作结构搭建
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，用连接词串联内容，层次分明；恰当运用单元所学词汇与句式，符合演讲稿的格式和语气，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
