请以“My shopping plan”为题,写一写自己的购物计划,60词左右。
My shopping plan
I’d like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan. I want to use fifty yuan for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser. They are useful. I’d also like this pencil case. It looks nice. I want to buy a notebook too.
I will spend all my money. I hope I can buy these things wisely.
My shopping plan
I’d like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan. I want to use fifty yuan for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser. They are useful. I’d also like this pencil case. It looks nice. I want to buy a notebook too.
I will spend all my money. I hope I can buy these things wisely.
答案
My shopping plan
I'd like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan, and I will use all the money for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser first. They are very useful. I also want a nice pencil case and a new notebook. I hope I can buy all these things well.
I'd like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan, and I will use all the money for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser first. They are very useful. I also want a nice pencil case and a new notebook. I hope I can buy all these things well.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“My shopping plan”,需围绕“新学期购买学习用品的计划”展开,需涵盖核心要点:说明购物目的(为新学期购置学习用品)、预算情况(50元全部用于学习用品)、所需物品(两支笔、一块橡皮、好看的铅笔盒、笔记本),最后表达合理购物的期望,语言要简洁,符合60词左右的要求,语句通顺自然。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次组织内容:先点明购物目的,再说明预算安排,接着列出所需物品,最后表达合理购物的期望,确保语句连贯,符合英语表达习惯,字数达标。
【答案】
My shopping plan
I'd like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan, and I will use all the money for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser first. They are very useful. I also want a nice pencil case and a new notebook. I hope I can buy all these things well.
【知识点】
英语写作、计划类表达、基础词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,清晰阐述了新学期的购物计划,涵盖预算、所需物品及合理购物的期望,语言简洁通顺,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作主题为“My shopping plan”,需围绕“新学期购买学习用品的计划”展开,需涵盖核心要点:说明购物目的(为新学期购置学习用品)、预算情况(50元全部用于学习用品)、所需物品(两支笔、一块橡皮、好看的铅笔盒、笔记本),最后表达合理购物的期望,语言要简洁,符合60词左右的要求,语句通顺自然。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次组织内容:先点明购物目的,再说明预算安排,接着列出所需物品,最后表达合理购物的期望,确保语句连贯,符合英语表达习惯,字数达标。
【答案】
My shopping plan
I'd like to buy some school things for the new term. This is my shopping plan. I have fifty yuan, and I will use all the money for school things.
I need two pens and an eraser first. They are very useful. I also want a nice pencil case and a new notebook. I hope I can buy all these things well.
【知识点】
英语写作、计划类表达、基础词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,清晰阐述了新学期的购物计划,涵盖预算、所需物品及合理购物的期望,语言简洁通顺,符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
请仿照上面的范文,想一想自己最近是否有需要置办的物品,然后写一写自己的购物计划吧。
要求:1. 主题明确,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,书写规范,60词左右。
My shopping plan
要求:1. 主题明确,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,书写规范,60词左右。
My shopping plan
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy some new clothes for winter.
First, I need a pair of shoes. My old shoes are broken. I like white shoes because they look cool. Then, I want a sweater. It is cold now, so a sweater is very useful. I like red sweaters.
I will spend 90 yuan. I think this is a good plan.
答案
(三)写作专项训练
One possible version:
My shopping plan
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy some new clothes for winter.
First, I need a pair of shoes. My old shoes are broken. I like white shoes because they look cool. Then, I want a sweater. It is cold now, so a sweater is very useful. I like red sweaters.
I will spend 90 yuan. I think this is a good plan.
One possible version:
My shopping plan
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy some new clothes for winter.
First, I need a pair of shoes. My old shoes are broken. I like white shoes because they look cool. Then, I want a sweater. It is cold now, so a sweater is very useful. I like red sweaters.
I will spend 90 yuan. I think this is a good plan.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求撰写购物计划,需围绕自身需求展开,明确预算、购物物品及原因,做到主题清晰、语句通顺、词数达标。解题思路:1.确定核心内容:预算、购物目的、具体物品及理由;2.搭建结构:开头点明预算与购物目的,中间分述购物细节,结尾总结评价;3.运用合适的时态(表计划的表达),确保语言准确。
【解析】
写作时,首先点明自身预算与购物目的(如100元买冬季衣物);接着分述需购买的物品及原因:旧鞋损坏需买白色鞋子,天气冷需买红色毛衣;最后说明总花费并评价计划合理性,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
My shopping plan
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy some new clothes for winter.
First, I need a pair of shoes. My old shoes are broken. I like white shoes because they look cool. Then, I want a sweater. It is cold now, so a sweater is very useful. I like red sweaters.
I will spend 90 yuan. I think this is a good plan.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,购物计划表达,一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的实用英语写作能力,要求学生围绕主题合理组织内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合词数要求,能有效锻炼学生的日常英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求撰写购物计划,需围绕自身需求展开,明确预算、购物物品及原因,做到主题清晰、语句通顺、词数达标。解题思路:1.确定核心内容:预算、购物目的、具体物品及理由;2.搭建结构:开头点明预算与购物目的,中间分述购物细节,结尾总结评价;3.运用合适的时态(表计划的表达),确保语言准确。
【解析】
写作时,首先点明自身预算与购物目的(如100元买冬季衣物);接着分述需购买的物品及原因:旧鞋损坏需买白色鞋子,天气冷需买红色毛衣;最后说明总花费并评价计划合理性,确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【答案】
My shopping plan
I have 100 yuan. I want to buy some new clothes for winter.
First, I need a pair of shoes. My old shoes are broken. I like white shoes because they look cool. Then, I want a sweater. It is cold now, so a sweater is very useful. I like red sweaters.
I will spend 90 yuan. I think this is a good plan.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,购物计划表达,一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的实用英语写作能力,要求学生围绕主题合理组织内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合词数要求,能有效锻炼学生的日常英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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