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(二) 书面表达
假如你是亚明，你的美国笔友Tina下周要去上海并受邀参加家宴，但她对中国习俗了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助，请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件介绍相关习俗。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
人称：
(2) 思路构建
假如你是亚明，你的美国笔友Tina下周要去上海并受邀参加家宴，但她对中国习俗了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助，请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件介绍相关习俗。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
应用文
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：
第一人称和第二人称为主
(2) 思路构建
One possible version:
Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
答案
(1) 应用文；一般现在时为主；第一人称和第二人称为主
One possible version:
Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
One possible version:
Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
解析
【分析】首先审题确定文体为电子邮件（应用文），时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主；接着根据思维导图提示的见面礼仪、带礼物、聊天话题、餐桌礼仪等方面，构思内容：开头问候Tina来访，中间分点介绍相关习俗，结尾表达期待与祝福，注意词数70左右，语句连贯。
【解析】1. 审题定调：明确文体为电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一、第二人称为主；2. 内容构建：开头问候Tina来上海的消息，依次介绍见面握手、带小礼物（如美国零食或花）、聊中国历史/文化/美食、餐桌礼仪（筷子不能插饭里）等习俗；3. 语言组织：使用连贯语句，遵循书信格式，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
【知识点】英语应用文写作；中国文化习俗表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合具体场景介绍中国习俗，兼顾语言运用与文化意识，是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 审题定调：明确文体为电子邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一、第二人称为主；2. 内容构建：开头问候Tina来上海的消息，依次介绍见面握手、带小礼物（如美国零食或花）、聊中国历史/文化/美食、餐桌礼仪（筷子不能插饭里）等习俗；3. 语言组织：使用连贯语句，遵循书信格式，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】Dear Tina,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Shanghai next week! I can't wait to see you. Now, let me tell you something about Chinese customs.
Firstly, it's common to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, it's good manners to bring something for the host family. You can choose some American snacks or some flowers. Thirdly, you can talk about Chinese history, culture, or the delicious local food. People here are usually proud of these and will be happy to share more. Last but not least, it's of great importance to pay attention to your table manners. Remember, don't stick your chopsticks in the rice bowl.
I hope my advice will help you have a great time in China. Looking forward to your arrival.
Best wishes,
Yaming
【知识点】英语应用文写作；中国文化习俗表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合具体场景介绍中国习俗，兼顾语言运用与文化意识，是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5
