Exercise E Writing

Exercise E Writing

【分析】本题为英语写作练习类题目，需对应题目要求完成相关写作任务，参考答案为Exercise E Writing，匹配题目给出的写作练习内容。
【解析】本题属于英语写作题型，参考答案直接对应题目给出的写作练习相关内容，无需额外拓展。
【答案】Exercise E Writing
【知识点】英语写作
【点评】本题为常规英语写作练习，主要考查学生的英语写作基础应用能力。
【难度系数】0.6

Ⅰ. Complete the table（完成下列表格）
Your school’s English Club is going to hold a discussion named “Old Buildings vs. New Buildings: Which do you prefer?”. Before the discussion, fill in the table below to organize your ideas.

I.（供参考）
| Aspects | Old buildings | New buildings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Main materials | clay, stone and timber, etc. | brick, concrete, metals and plastics |
| Look and design | traditional styles with carved details, curved roofs and unique cultural features | simple, modern lines, very tall, using glass frequently |
续表
| Aspects | Old buildings | New buildings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Energy use | poor heat preservation, waste much energy for cooling or heating | equipped with solar panels and thermal insulation, energy-saving |
| Your own feelings | full of history and cultural charm, peaceful to stay in | bright, convenient, equipped with modern facilities |

【分析】本题要求完成新旧建筑对比的表格，需围绕四个维度（主要材料、外观设计、能源使用、个人感受），结合新旧建筑的典型特征对应填写内容。解题时先明确各维度旧建筑的特点，再匹配新建筑的对应特点，确保符合常识与英语表达习惯。
【解析】根据新旧建筑的典型特征，逐一填写各维度内容：
1. 主要材料：旧建筑使用黏土、石头、木材等，新建筑常用砖、混凝土、金属、塑料等；
2. 外观设计：旧建筑是带雕刻细节、曲线屋顶的传统风格，具备独特文化特征；新建筑是简洁现代线条、高度较高，频繁使用玻璃；
3. 能源使用：旧建筑保温性差，制冷或制热时浪费大量能源；新建筑配备太阳能板与保温设计，节能；
4. 个人感受：旧建筑充满历史文化魅力，待着宁静；新建筑明亮、便利，配备现代设施。
【答案】
| Aspects | Old buildings | New buildings |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
| Main materials | clay, stone and timber, etc. | brick, concrete, metals and plastics |
| Look and design | traditional styles with carved details, curved roofs and unique cultural features | simple, modern lines, very tall, using glass frequently |
| Energy use | poor heat preservation, waste much energy for cooling or heating | equipped with solar panels and thermal insulation, energy-saving |
| Your own feelings | full of history and cultural charm, peaceful to stay in | bright, convenient, equipped with modern facilities |
【知识点】英语词汇运用、事物对比表达、建筑常识
【点评】本题结合生活常识与英语知识，通过对比新旧建筑帮助学生拓展话题词汇，练习对比类表达，实用性较强，适合英语话题讨论前的准备。
【难度系数】0.3

Ⅱ. Writing (写作)
Based on the table above, write a short passage for your school’s English Club magazine with the title of “Old Buildings vs. New Buildings” in about 80 words.
In the passage, you should:
◆ compare old buildings and new buildings from 2 – 3 aspects in the table;
◆ give clear reasons or examples for each aspect;
◆ say which kind of building you prefer and explain why.
Old Buildings vs. New Buildings

II. One possible version:
Old Buildings vs. New Buildings
Walking around Shanghai, we can see old and new buildings, each with unique charm.
Old buildings such as Yu Garden's pavilions are built with wood and stone. Delicate carvings and upturned roofs carry our long history and traditional culture. On the contrary, modern skyscrapers in Lujiazui are made of steel and glass. Most are equipped with solar panels and heat-insulating walls to cut energy waste.
I prefer old buildings for their deep cultural value. Meanwhile, I hope more eco-friendly modern buildings will be built, making Shanghai a city mixing tradition and green modernity.

【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作要求：需对比新旧建筑2-3个方面、为每个方面提供例子、说明自身偏好；其次选择合适的对比角度（如建筑材料、文化价值、环保性能）；接着结合具体实例（如老建筑豫园、新建筑陆家嘴）支撑观点；最后控制字数约80词，符合校园杂志短文的语气。
【解析】按照写作要求分步完成：1. 拟定标题为“Old Buildings vs. New Buildings”；2. 开篇引出身边的新旧建筑，点明各有独特魅力；3. 从建筑材料与文化内涵、环保性能两个方面对比：老建筑（如豫园）用木石打造，带传统雕刻，承载历史；新建筑（如陆家嘴）用钢玻璃，配备节能设施；4. 表达偏好：喜欢老建筑的文化价值，同时希望有环保新建筑，融合传统与现代；5. 调整语句，控制在80词左右，符合要求。
【答案】II. One possible version:
Old Buildings vs. New Buildings
Walking around Shanghai, we can see old and new buildings, each with unique charm.
Old buildings such as Yu Garden's pavilions are built with wood and stone. Delicate carvings and upturned roofs carry our long history and traditional culture. On the contrary, modern skyscrapers in Lujiazui are made of steel and glass. Most are equipped with solar panels and heat-insulating walls to cut energy waste.
I prefer old buildings for their deep cultural value. Meanwhile, I hope more eco-friendly modern buildings will be built, making Shanghai a city mixing tradition and green modernity.
【知识点】英语短文写作、对比类话题写作
【点评】本题贴近校园生活，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求完成对比说明、举例论证和观点表达，是常见的英语写作题型，注重实用性与表达逻辑性。
【难度系数】0.5