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八、书面表达(满分 25 分)
南通有情，温暖如春；南通有请，诚意满满。“中国南通江海国际文化旅游节”拉开帷幕，向世界各地的游客发出“常游南通、乐享南通、爱上南通”的邀约。假如你是张华，你的外国朋友 Amy 想了解南通，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点，给 Amy 写一封电子邮件，介绍南通。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右，短文开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名和校名等。
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
南通有情，温暖如春；南通有请，诚意满满。“中国南通江海国际文化旅游节”拉开帷幕，向世界各地的游客发出“常游南通、乐享南通、爱上南通”的邀约。假如你是张华，你的外国朋友 Amy 想了解南通，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点，给 Amy 写一封电子邮件，介绍南通。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右，短文开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名和校名等。
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Nantong is a city in Jiangsu, China. It's in the Yangtze River Delta and is a big transportation hub. It's easy to get to Nantong by plane or high - speed train.
Nantong has many cool places. Wolf Hill is green with old temples and gives a peaceful rest from the city. The Nantong Museum shows old traditions. The Nantong Ocean Park has fish and fun activities for sea lovers.
Nantong has a long - standing culture. It is famous for blue - and - white porcelain, paper cutting, and embroidery. The city has beautiful parks and clean rivers. It's also known for its tasty steamed buns and fried rice cakes.
In short, Nantong is a great place with easy travel, fun history and culture, clean environment, and lots of tasty food. No matter what you like, Nantong has something for you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Nantong is a city in Jiangsu, China. It's in the Yangtze River Delta and is a big transportation hub. It's easy to get to Nantong by plane or high - speed train.
Nantong has many cool places. Wolf Hill is green with old temples and gives a peaceful rest from the city. The Nantong Museum shows old traditions. The Nantong Ocean Park has fish and fun activities for sea lovers.
Nantong has a long - standing culture. It is famous for blue - and - white porcelain, paper cutting, and embroidery. The city has beautiful parks and clean rivers. It's also known for its tasty steamed buns and fried rice cakes.
In short, Nantong is a great place with easy travel, fun history and culture, clean environment, and lots of tasty food. No matter what you like, Nantong has something for you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以张华的身份给外国朋友Amy写一封介绍南通的电子邮件，需结合思维导图的四个维度（交通、景点、文化、自拟）选取至少两个要点，词数90左右，开头和落款已给出。解题思路：先明确写作核心是向外国友人介绍南通的特色，接着挑选易表达且贴合主题的要点（如交通便利、知名景点、特色文化），用简单易懂的英语组织内容，确保语法正确、语句连贯，符合邮件的亲切语气，最后控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍南通的基本情况，重点说明交通优势（作为交通枢纽，可乘飞机或高铁抵达）；2. 介绍特色景点，如狼山、南通博物馆等，展现南通的旅游魅力；3. 补充特色文化，如蓝白瓷、剪纸等，丰富内容；4. 收尾总结，邀请对方来南通。全程使用一般现在时，避免复杂句式，保证表达清晰，符合邮件格式。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Nantong is a city in Jiangsu, China. It's in the Yangtze River Delta and is a big transportation hub. It's easy to get to Nantong by plane or high-speed train.
Nantong has many cool places. Wolf Hill is green with old temples and gives a peaceful rest from the city. The Nantong Museum shows old traditions. The Nantong Ocean Park has fish and fun activities for sea lovers.
Nantong has a long-standing culture. It is famous for blue-and-white porcelain, paper cutting, and embroidery. The city has beautiful parks and clean rivers. It's also known for its tasty steamed buns and fried rice cakes.
In short, Nantong is a great place with easy travel, fun history and culture, clean environment, and lots of tasty food. No matter what you like, Nantong has something for you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达；电子邮件写作；介绍类话题
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，围绕南通的交通、景点、文化等要点展开，内容充实，语言流畅自然，符合邮件的表达风格，准确传达了南通的特色，满足各项写作要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，介绍南通的基本情况，重点说明交通优势（作为交通枢纽，可乘飞机或高铁抵达）；2. 介绍特色景点，如狼山、南通博物馆等，展现南通的旅游魅力；3. 补充特色文化，如蓝白瓷、剪纸等，丰富内容；4. 收尾总结，邀请对方来南通。全程使用一般现在时，避免复杂句式，保证表达清晰，符合邮件格式。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Amy,
Learning that you are interested in my hometown, Nantong, I am glad to introduce it to you.
Nantong is a city in Jiangsu, China. It's in the Yangtze River Delta and is a big transportation hub. It's easy to get to Nantong by plane or high-speed train.
Nantong has many cool places. Wolf Hill is green with old temples and gives a peaceful rest from the city. The Nantong Museum shows old traditions. The Nantong Ocean Park has fish and fun activities for sea lovers.
Nantong has a long-standing culture. It is famous for blue-and-white porcelain, paper cutting, and embroidery. The city has beautiful parks and clean rivers. It's also known for its tasty steamed buns and fried rice cakes.
In short, Nantong is a great place with easy travel, fun history and culture, clean environment, and lots of tasty food. No matter what you like, Nantong has something for you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达；电子邮件写作；介绍类话题
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，围绕南通的交通、景点、文化等要点展开，内容充实，语言流畅自然，符合邮件的表达风格，准确传达了南通的特色，满足各项写作要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
