二、写作
假定你是张红,想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营(summer camp)活动,请你用英语写一份申请,申请的格式已给出。
内容应包括:
1. 你参加此次活动的目的;
2. 你的兴趣、特长;
3. 你希望住在什么样的家庭里。
要求:80 词左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Zhang Hong
假定你是张红,想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营(summer camp)活动,请你用英语写一份申请,申请的格式已给出。
内容应包括:
1. 你参加此次活动的目的;
2. 你的兴趣、特长;
3. 你希望住在什么样的家庭里。
要求:80 词左右。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Zhang Hong
答案
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to join in the summer camp. It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.
I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. So we can study and play together. Maybe we can cook together, and I can teach them about Chinese cooking. I'm sure we'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
I want to join in the summer camp. It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.
I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. So we can study and play together. Maybe we can cook together, and I can teach them about Chinese cooking. I'm sure we'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
解析
【分析】
写作时需遵循申请信的格式,围绕题目要求的三个核心要点展开:首先点明参加“走进美国家庭”夏令营的意愿,说明参加目的;其次介绍自身的兴趣与特长;最后说明希望居住的家庭类型,补充细节让内容更充实,同时控制词数在80左右,语言需礼貌自然。
【解析】
按照申请信结构分三段书写:第一段直接表明申请意愿,说明参加活动的目的是提升英语、了解美国文化;第二段介绍个人情况:兴趣为上网、运动、流行音乐,特长是英语流利,能与外国人自由交流;第三段说明期望的住宿家庭:有3-4个孩子的大家庭,可共同学习玩耍,还能教对方中国烹饪,最后礼貌收尾。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to join in the summer camp. It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.
I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. So we can study and play together. Maybe we can cook together, and I can teach them about Chinese cooking. I'm sure we'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】
该申请信格式正确,完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,语言流畅自然,补充了教中国烹饪的细节让内容更具体,符合80词左右的要求,清晰展现了申请的合理性,是一篇符合要求的优秀申请作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作时需遵循申请信的格式,围绕题目要求的三个核心要点展开:首先点明参加“走进美国家庭”夏令营的意愿,说明参加目的;其次介绍自身的兴趣与特长;最后说明希望居住的家庭类型,补充细节让内容更充实,同时控制词数在80左右,语言需礼貌自然。
【解析】
按照申请信结构分三段书写:第一段直接表明申请意愿,说明参加活动的目的是提升英语、了解美国文化;第二段介绍个人情况:兴趣为上网、运动、流行音乐,特长是英语流利,能与外国人自由交流;第三段说明期望的住宿家庭:有3-4个孩子的大家庭,可共同学习玩耍,还能教对方中国烹饪,最后礼貌收尾。
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I want to join in the summer camp. It's a good way to improve my English and can help me know more about the American culture.
I often surf on the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do quite well in English and can talk with foreigners freely.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children. So we can study and play together. Maybe we can cook together, and I can teach them about Chinese cooking. I'm sure we'll have a great time together.
Yours,
Zhang Hong
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】
该申请信格式正确,完整覆盖题目要求的所有内容要点,语言流畅自然,补充了教中国烹饪的细节让内容更具体,符合80词左右的要求,清晰展现了申请的合理性,是一篇符合要求的优秀申请作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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