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七、书面表达。
假如你叫李华，你们班正在进行主题为“My Favourite Book”的读书分享活动。请你根据下面提示内容，写一篇发言稿，在课堂上分享你最喜欢的一本书。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
假如你叫李华，你们班正在进行主题为“My Favourite Book”的读书分享活动。请你根据下面提示内容，写一篇发言稿，在课堂上分享你最喜欢的一本书。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
答案
One possible version:
My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White. It tells a story about a pig named Wilbur and his spider friend Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger, Charlotte writes words in her web to save him. The story also shows the love between Wilbur and Fern, a kind girl who raises him from a baby pig.
I love this book because it shows how powerful friendship can be. Charlotte's actions teach me to care for friends without expecting anything back. Also, the book makes me feel warm with its lively descriptions of farm life. Every time I read it, I realize life is full of love, and we should treasure every person and moment that matter to us.
My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White. It tells a story about a pig named Wilbur and his spider friend Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger, Charlotte writes words in her web to save him. The story also shows the love between Wilbur and Fern, a kind girl who raises him from a baby pig.
I love this book because it shows how powerful friendship can be. Charlotte's actions teach me to care for friends without expecting anything back. Also, the book makes me feel warm with its lively descriptions of farm life. Every time I read it, I realize life is full of love, and we should treasure every person and moment that matter to us.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语书面表达发言稿，主题为“My Favourite Book”。解题思路是：紧扣思维导图的三个核心要点（书的作者、书的内容、自己的阅读感受）展开写作；注意词数控制在80左右，语句连贯，不得出现真实校名、地名和姓名；适当拓展细节，贴合发言稿的语境。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的书及作者，如“My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White.”；
2. 简述书籍主要内容，围绕思维导图的“这本书讲述了……”，介绍故事主角（小猪Wilbur和蜘蛛Charlotte）及核心情节（Charlotte救Wilbur）；
3. 表达阅读感受，结合思维导图的“我读这本书的感受”，阐述对友谊、生活的感悟；
4. 检查语句连贯，词数符合要求，避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White. It tells a story about a pig named Wilbur and his spider friend Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger, Charlotte writes words in her web to save him. The story also shows the love between Wilbur and Fern, a kind girl who raises him from a baby pig.
I love this book because it shows how powerful friendship can be. Charlotte's actions teach me to care for friends without expecting anything back. Also, the book makes me feel warm with its lively descriptions of farm life. Every time I read it, I realize life is full of love, and we should treasure every person and moment that matter to us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；发言稿写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图要点，内容完整，情感真挚，语言连贯，符合发言稿要求，词数达标，是优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语书面表达发言稿，主题为“My Favourite Book”。解题思路是：紧扣思维导图的三个核心要点（书的作者、书的内容、自己的阅读感受）展开写作；注意词数控制在80左右，语句连贯，不得出现真实校名、地名和姓名；适当拓展细节，贴合发言稿的语境。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的书及作者，如“My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White.”；
2. 简述书籍主要内容，围绕思维导图的“这本书讲述了……”，介绍故事主角（小猪Wilbur和蜘蛛Charlotte）及核心情节（Charlotte救Wilbur）；
3. 表达阅读感受，结合思维导图的“我读这本书的感受”，阐述对友谊、生活的感悟；
4. 检查语句连贯，词数符合要求，避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite book is Charlotte's Web, written by E. B. White. It tells a story about a pig named Wilbur and his spider friend Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger, Charlotte writes words in her web to save him. The story also shows the love between Wilbur and Fern, a kind girl who raises him from a baby pig.
I love this book because it shows how powerful friendship can be. Charlotte's actions teach me to care for friends without expecting anything back. Also, the book makes me feel warm with its lively descriptions of farm life. Every time I read it, I realize life is full of love, and we should treasure every person and moment that matter to us.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；发言稿写作
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图要点，内容完整，情感真挚，语言连贯，符合发言稿要求，词数达标，是优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
