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今天是星期五,为了了解茶文化,学校为学生们安排了一次研学旅行——茶园之旅。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英文日记,记录此次活动。
要求:
(1)包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)70词左右。日记的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:tea garden 茶园；tea leaves 茶叶
Friday, 24th May
Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea.
今天是星期五,为了了解茶文化,学校为学生们安排了一次研学旅行——茶园之旅。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英文日记,记录此次活动。
要求:
(1)包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
(3)70词左右。日记的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:tea garden 茶园；tea leaves 茶叶
Friday, 24th May
Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea.
To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves.
After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there.
Today was really a day to remember.
答案
参考范文：
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇英文日记，需遵循日记格式，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定时态，日记记录过去的活动，使用一般过去时；2. 梳理活动流程：集合出发→参观茶园（听茶农讲解茶的历史）→学习摘茶叶→学习制茶→结束；3. 结尾表达对活动的感受，确保包含了解茶文化的核心内容，符合70词左右的要求，语句通顺、语法正确。
【解析】
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
【答案】
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
【知识点】
英文日记写作；一般过去时；场景描述
【点评】
本文符合日记格式，时态运用准确，条理清晰地记录了茶园研学的全过程，涵盖了了解茶文化的核心内容，语句通顺、表达自然，符合字数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇英文日记，需遵循日记格式，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定时态，日记记录过去的活动，使用一般过去时；2. 梳理活动流程：集合出发→参观茶园（听茶农讲解茶的历史）→学习摘茶叶→学习制茶→结束；3. 结尾表达对活动的感受，确保包含了解茶文化的核心内容，符合70词左右的要求，语句通顺、语法正确。
【解析】
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
【答案】
Friday, 24th May Sunny
China is known as the home town of tea. To learn more about tea, we went on a school trip to a tea garden today. We met at 7:30 a.m. at the school gate and took the school bus there.
The tea farmer, Mr Li, is very friendly. He showed us around the tea garden and taught us about the long history of tea. We also learned about how to pick tea leaves. After a quick lunch, we spent about two hours learning to make tea. Finally, the trip finished at 3:00 p.m.
What an interesting trip it was! All in all, all of us learned a lot and enjoyed ourselves there. Today was really a day to remember.
【知识点】
英文日记写作；一般过去时；场景描述
【点评】
本文符合日记格式，时态运用准确，条理清晰地记录了茶园研学的全过程，涵盖了了解茶文化的核心内容，语句通顺、表达自然，符合字数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
