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[开头句]
1. There are many traditional festivals in China. （节日总述）
2. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. （点明话题,下同）
3. Let's see how people all over the world are celebrating it.
[中间句]
1. It is also a time to show love for our elders. （节日意义）
2. On this day, we wish our elders a long and happy life. （节日习俗,下同）
3. Usually, people clean their homes and put up Spring Festival couplets.
[结尾句]
1. I love celebrating New Year. （节日感受）
2. But wherever you are, Happy New Year! （节日祝福）
[名言警句]
1. A new heart for a New Year, always! 新年新心,永远如此!
2. Festivals bring families together. 节日让家人团聚。
写作演练＞＞
中国传统节日是我们中华民族悠久历史与丰富文化的组成部分,请以“An unforgettable festival”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文分享你曾经度过的一个难忘的节日。
提示: 1. What is your unforgettable festival? 2. Why is this festival unforgettable to you? 3. What is your feeling?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:以一般过去时为主。② 人称:第一人称、第三人称。③ 首先介绍最难忘的节日是什么,然后具体阐述节日活动,最后表明自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
An unforgettable festival
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. There are many traditional festivals in China. （节日总述）
2. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. （点明话题,下同）
3. Let's see how people all over the world are celebrating it.
[中间句]
1. It is also a time to show love for our elders. （节日意义）
2. On this day, we wish our elders a long and happy life. （节日习俗,下同）
3. Usually, people clean their homes and put up Spring Festival couplets.
[结尾句]
1. I love celebrating New Year. （节日感受）
2. But wherever you are, Happy New Year! （节日祝福）
[名言警句]
1. A new heart for a New Year, always! 新年新心,永远如此!
2. Festivals bring families together. 节日让家人团聚。
写作演练＞＞
中国传统节日是我们中华民族悠久历史与丰富文化的组成部分,请以“An unforgettable festival”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文分享你曾经度过的一个难忘的节日。
提示: 1. What is your unforgettable festival? 2. Why is this festival unforgettable to you? 3. What is your feeling?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:以一般过去时为主。② 人称:第一人称、第三人称。③ 首先介绍最难忘的节日是什么,然后具体阐述节日活动,最后表明自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food.
My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi.
At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully.
Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
解析
【分析】这是一道英语话题写作题，要求以“An unforgettable festival”为题，写80词左右的短文。解题思路：首先确定难忘的节日为春节；第一段点明去年的春节是难忘的；第二段描述父母为节日做的准备（买新衣、做饭、装饰房子），以及自己尽力学做饺子的过程（体现努力与进步）；第三段说明自己开心的原因（能独立做饺子）。写作时需注意用一般过去时，第一人称叙述，覆盖所有提示要点，语言简洁通顺。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：明确去年的春节是自己难忘的节日；2. 中间段：具体描述父母的准备工作，以及自己尝试学做饺子的经历（体现“尽力”）；3. 结尾段：说明开心的原因，表达感受。注意控制词数，时态正确，语句连贯。
【答案】An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般过去时、节日话题表达
【点评】本题围绕中国传统节日展开写作，既考察学生的英语语言运用能力，又融入了传统文化内涵，要求清晰，要点明确，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：明确去年的春节是自己难忘的节日；2. 中间段：具体描述父母的准备工作，以及自己尝试学做饺子的经历（体现“尽力”）；3. 结尾段：说明开心的原因，表达感受。注意控制词数，时态正确，语句连贯。
【答案】An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般过去时、节日话题表达
【点评】本题围绕中国传统节日展开写作，既考察学生的英语语言运用能力，又融入了传统文化内涵，要求清晰，要点明确，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
