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五、书面表达。
家庭时光是美妙的，和家人在一起是快乐的。假设你是王娟，请根据写作要求用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下你和家人在周末的快乐时光。
写作要求：
1) 介绍你家的主要成员；
2) 介绍你和你的家人在周末经常做的事情；
3) 写出你的感受；
4) 词数60个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示词：a big meal 大餐，green trees 绿树，under 在……下面
My name is Wang Juan.
家庭时光是美妙的，和家人在一起是快乐的。假设你是王娟，请根据写作要求用英文写一篇短文，介绍一下你和家人在周末的快乐时光。
写作要求：
1) 介绍你家的主要成员；
2) 介绍你和你的家人在周末经常做的事情；
3) 写出你的感受；
4) 词数60个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示词：a big meal 大餐，green trees 绿树，under 在……下面
My name is Wang Juan.
There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. Most of the time, my parents are very busy. But on weekends, we usually do many things together.
In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park.
My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there.
My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book.
I usually take pictures of my parents. I enjoy the time with my family.
答案
My name is Wang Juan. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. Most of the time, my parents are very busy. But on weekends, we usually do many things together.
In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. I enjoy the time with my family.
In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. I enjoy the time with my family.
解析
【分析】首先审题，明确写作身份为“王娟”，主题是介绍与家人的周末快乐时光，需满足三个核心要求：①介绍家庭成员；②说明周末常做的事；③表达自身感受，同时要用到提示词，词数60左右（开头已给出）。接着构思内容：先点明家庭成员数量与构成，再按时间顺序写周末活动（结合提示词），最后抒发和家人相处的快乐感受，确保覆盖所有要点且符合词数要求。
【解析】先介绍家庭成员：There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. 再写周末活动：In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. 最后表达感受：I enjoy the time with my family.
【答案】My name is Wang Juan. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. Most of the time, my parents are very busy. But on weekends, we usually do many things together. In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. I enjoy the time with my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家庭话题写作、周末活动描述
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，合理运用提示词，内容具体生动，情感真挚自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先介绍家庭成员：There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. 再写周末活动：In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. 最后表达感受：I enjoy the time with my family.
【答案】My name is Wang Juan. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. Most of the time, my parents are very busy. But on weekends, we usually do many things together. In the morning, my mother cooks a big meal and we eat together. Then we go to the park. My mother likes to walk in the park. She enjoys the green trees and beautiful flowers there. My father usually sits under a tree and reads a book. I usually take pictures of my parents. I enjoy the time with my family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、家庭话题写作、周末活动描述
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，合理运用提示词，内容具体生动，情感真挚自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
