Ⅶ. Read and write. 选择一位你熟悉的“平凡伟人”,根据提示写一写他的工作和伟大的原因。

There are many ordinary people around us.
I believe everyone can be great in their own way.
There are many ordinary people around us.
I believe everyone can be great in their own way.
答案
One of the greatest ordinary people around me is my aunt. She is a doctor. She works in the hospital. She is very responsible for every patient, and she always tries her best to help sick people get better. She is not a famous star, but she brings hope and warmth to lots of people.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语写作题,要求结合给定关键词,描述一位平凡伟人的工作与伟大原因。解题思路:1. 从给定关键词的职业(doctor/doctor, farmer, teacher)中选一个熟悉的职业;2. 对应职业匹配工作地点(如医生对应in the hospital);3. 用给定短语(如help...get better)描述核心工作内容;4. 点明平凡人的价值,最后呼应主题。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 确定写作对象:选择熟悉的平凡人(如阿姨);
2. 介绍职业与工作地点:She is a doctor. She works in the hospital.;
3. 阐述工作内容与意义:She is responsible for every patient, and always tries her best to help sick people get better.;
4. 点明平凡人的伟大之处:She is not a famous star, but she brings hope and warmth to lots of people.;
5. 收尾呼应主题:I believe everyone can be great in their own way.
【答案】
One of the greatest ordinary people around me is my aunt. She is a doctor. She works in the hospital. She is very responsible for every patient, and she always tries her best to help sick people get better. She is not a famous star, but she brings hope and warmth to lots of people.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、职业相关表达、句子组织
【点评】
本题结合生活实际,提供关键词降低写作难度,考查学生运用英语表达职业价值的能力,贴近学生生活,易于发挥。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语写作题,要求结合给定关键词,描述一位平凡伟人的工作与伟大原因。解题思路:1. 从给定关键词的职业(doctor/doctor, farmer, teacher)中选一个熟悉的职业;2. 对应职业匹配工作地点(如医生对应in the hospital);3. 用给定短语(如help...get better)描述核心工作内容;4. 点明平凡人的价值,最后呼应主题。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 确定写作对象:选择熟悉的平凡人(如阿姨);
2. 介绍职业与工作地点:She is a doctor. She works in the hospital.;
3. 阐述工作内容与意义:She is responsible for every patient, and always tries her best to help sick people get better.;
4. 点明平凡人的伟大之处:She is not a famous star, but she brings hope and warmth to lots of people.;
5. 收尾呼应主题:I believe everyone can be great in their own way.
【答案】
One of the greatest ordinary people around me is my aunt. She is a doctor. She works in the hospital. She is very responsible for every patient, and she always tries her best to help sick people get better. She is not a famous star, but she brings hope and warmth to lots of people.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、职业相关表达、句子组织
【点评】
本题结合生活实际,提供关键词降低写作难度,考查学生运用英语表达职业价值的能力,贴近学生生活,易于发挥。
【难度系数】
0.3
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