任务情境
假如你是阳光中学的七年级学生李海，你收到了英国朋友Sam的邮件。他在邮件中询问你在新学校的情况。请你写一篇60词左右的英语邮件回复。邮件首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email. Everything is going well here.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai

My new school is big and beautiful.
There are some modern buildings in my school. The classroom building is in front of the library. The classrooms are clean and bright. We spend most of the time in the classroom building. There is a big sports field across from the classroom building. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team.
My new teachers and classmates are all friendly to me. I really have a good time at school.

【分析】
本题是七年级英语应用文写作题，要求以李海的身份回复英国朋友Sam关于新学校的邮件，需补充60词左右的内容（首尾已给出）。解题思路：1. 承接开头的“Everything is going well here.”，围绕“新学校情况”展开；2. 从学校环境（建筑、设施）和人际关系（老师同学）两个方面组织内容，选用七年级学过的简单词汇和句式；3. 确保内容连贯、语气自然，符合邮件的交流语境，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，先介绍新学校的整体印象（My new school is big and beautiful.）；2. 描述学校具体设施：教学楼、图书馆、运动场，结合自身活动（如打篮球）让内容真实；3. 提及老师同学的友好，表达在学校的愉快感受；4. 全程使用一般现在时，用简单句，符合七年级英语水平，控制词数达标。
【答案】
My new school is big and beautiful. There are some modern buildings in my school. The classroom building is in front of the library. The classrooms are clean and bright. We spend most of the time in the classroom building. There is a big sports field across from the classroom building. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team. My new teachers and classmates are all friendly to me. I really have a good time at school.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、日常话题英语表达、简单句运用
【点评】
本题考查七年级学生用英语介绍日常校园生活的书面表达能力，情境贴近学生实际，要求内容紧扣主题，语言准确简洁，符合七年级英语学习要求，能有效考查学生的基础表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7

思路点拨
审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
写作框架
开头：引出话题 ...My new school is big...
中间：详细介绍 There are some modern uildings... The classrooms are... There is a ...
结尾：表达感受 My new teachers and classmates are... I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon!
逐步突破——三步训练法
（一）短语翻译——根据写作要点翻译短语。
1. 在对面
2. 运动场
3. 在(……)前面
4. 在学校
5. 打篮球
（二）句子翻译——结合(一)中短语和括号内的提示完成句子。
1. 我的学校里有一些现代建筑。(there be)

2. 教学楼在图书馆的前面。(in front of)

3. 我经常在那里打篮球，因为我是校篮球队的一员。(a member of...)

（三）篇章展示——运用(二)中句子组成语段。
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email. Everything is going well here.







I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai

（一）
1. across from
2. sports field
3. in front of
4. at school
5. play basketball
（二）
1. There are some modern buildings in my school.
2. The classroom building is in front of the library.
3. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team.
（三）
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email. Everything is going well here. My new school is big and beautiful.
There are some modern buildings in my school. The classroom building is in front of the library. The classrooms are clean and bright. We spend most of the time in the classroom building. There is a big sports field across from the classroom building. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team.
My new teachers and classmates are all friendly to me. I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai

【分析】
本题为英语写作分步训练题，需分三步完成：第一步短语翻译要掌握常用英语固定搭配；第二步句子翻译需运用给定短语和提示，遵循语法规则（如there be句型、介词短语用法）；第三步篇章写作要符合审题要求（应用文、第一人称、一般现在时），结合写作框架（开头引出学校、中间详细介绍校园设施、结尾表达感受），将前面的内容串联成通顺语段。
【解析】
（一）短语翻译：根据常用英语固定搭配，依次对应翻译；
（二）句子翻译：结合给定短语和提示，注意句子结构和时态，如there be句型的正确使用、in front of的搭配、a member of的用法；
（三）篇章展示：衔接前面的句子，补充符合写作框架的内容，使语段完整，符合应用文写作要求。
【答案】
（一）
1. across from
2. sports field
3. in front of
4. at school
5. play basketball
（二）
1. There are some modern buildings in my school.
2. The classroom building is in front of the library.
3. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team.
（三）
Dear Sam,
I'm happy to get your email. Everything is going well here. My new school is big and beautiful.
There are some modern buildings in my school. The classroom building is in front of the library. The classrooms are clean and bright. We spend most of the time in the classroom building. There is a big sports field across from the classroom building. I often play basketball there because I'm a member of the school basketball team.
My new teachers and classmates are all friendly to me. I really have a good time at school.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hai
【知识点】
英语短语翻译、there be句型、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题采用分步训练的方式，从基础短语到句子再到篇章写作，循序渐进引导学生掌握英语应用文写作方法，符合审题和写作框架要求，有助于巩固英语基础并提升写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.3