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Ⅵ. Writing（作文）
Your school newspaper Green Voice is collecting passages for a special page called “My Action for the Earth”. The editor invites all students to share what they have done or will do to fight pollution.
Write a short passage to introduce your action in about 80 words. Your passage should include:
• the kind of pollution that worries you most and why；
• ONE action you have already taken or will take；
• what you hope to see in the future.
My Action for the Earth
Your school newspaper Green Voice is collecting passages for a special page called “My Action for the Earth”. The editor invites all students to share what they have done or will do to fight pollution.
Write a short passage to introduce your action in about 80 words. Your passage should include:
• the kind of pollution that worries you most and why；
• ONE action you have already taken or will take；
• what you hope to see in the future.
My Action for the Earth
As a student living in a big city, what worries me most is plastic pollution. Every day, I see plastic bottles and bags lying on the streets. They not only make our city dirty but also can hurt sea animals.
So I decided to do something for the city. Last month, for example, I joined a clean-up activity with my classmates. We picked up over 200 pieces of plastic packing by the river in just two hours.
After the activity, I know that my effort, though little, can make a difference.
Now I always bring my own cloth bag when going shopping.
Looking ahead, I hope our city will become cleaner and greener, and that less plastic waste will be thrown away.
答案
One possible version:
My Action for the Earth
As a student living in a big city, what worries me most is plastic pollution. Every day, I see plastic bottles and bags lying on the streets. They not only make our city dirty but also can hurt sea animals. So I decided to do something for the city. Last month, for example, I joined a clean-up activity with my classmates. We picked up over 200 pieces of plastic packing by the river in just two hours. After the activity, I know that my effort, though little, can make a difference. Now I always bring my own cloth bag when going shopping. Looking ahead, I hope our city will become cleaner and greener, and that less plastic waste will be thrown away.
My Action for the Earth
As a student living in a big city, what worries me most is plastic pollution. Every day, I see plastic bottles and bags lying on the streets. They not only make our city dirty but also can hurt sea animals. So I decided to do something for the city. Last month, for example, I joined a clean-up activity with my classmates. We picked up over 200 pieces of plastic packing by the river in just two hours. After the activity, I know that my effort, though little, can make a difference. Now I always bring my own cloth bag when going shopping. Looking ahead, I hope our city will become cleaner and greener, and that less plastic waste will be thrown away.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语要点式写作题，需围绕“我为地球的行动”完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确题目要求的三个核心要点：最担忧的污染类型及原因、一个具体环保行动、未来期望；2. 选择贴近学生生活的污染类型，结合现象说明原因；3. 选取具体可感的行动，补充细节增强真实性；4. 组织语言，控制在约80词，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇点明最担忧的污染为塑料污染，说明原因：城市随处可见塑料瓶、塑料袋，既污染环境又伤害海洋生物；
2. 列举已采取的行动：参加同学组织的河边塑料清理活动，补充具体细节（两小时捡200多件塑料）；
3. 表达未来期望：希望城市更干净，塑料垃圾减少；
4. 整合语言，调整字数至约80词，确保逻辑连贯。
【答案】
My Action for the Earth
As a student living in a big city, what worries me most is plastic pollution. Every day, I see plastic bottles and bags lying on the streets. They not only make our city dirty but also can hurt sea animals. Last month, I joined a clean-up activity with my classmates. We picked up over 200 pieces of plastic packing by the river in just two hours. Now I always bring my own cloth bag when going shopping. Looking ahead, I hope our city will become cleaner and greener, and that less plastic waste will be thrown away.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体有细节，语言通顺自然，符合学生写作水平，传递了积极的环保意识，是一篇优秀的要点式作文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语要点式写作题，需围绕“我为地球的行动”完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确题目要求的三个核心要点：最担忧的污染类型及原因、一个具体环保行动、未来期望；2. 选择贴近学生生活的污染类型，结合现象说明原因；3. 选取具体可感的行动，补充细节增强真实性；4. 组织语言，控制在约80词，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇点明最担忧的污染为塑料污染，说明原因：城市随处可见塑料瓶、塑料袋，既污染环境又伤害海洋生物；
2. 列举已采取的行动：参加同学组织的河边塑料清理活动，补充具体细节（两小时捡200多件塑料）；
3. 表达未来期望：希望城市更干净，塑料垃圾减少；
4. 整合语言，调整字数至约80词，确保逻辑连贯。
【答案】
My Action for the Earth
As a student living in a big city, what worries me most is plastic pollution. Every day, I see plastic bottles and bags lying on the streets. They not only make our city dirty but also can hurt sea animals. Last month, I joined a clean-up activity with my classmates. We picked up over 200 pieces of plastic packing by the river in just two hours. Now I always bring my own cloth bag when going shopping. Looking ahead, I hope our city will become cleaner and greener, and that less plastic waste will be thrown away.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体有细节，语言通顺自然，符合学生写作水平，传递了积极的环保意识，是一篇优秀的要点式作文。
【难度系数】
0.4
