【主题写作实践】
假设你是Emma,请用英语给你的朋友Alice写一封email介绍你现在的学校生活。请根据以下的提示用英语给Alice回信。包括以下内容:
1. 学校课程的安排;
2. 你对课程、老师的喜好以及原因;
3. 你对学校生活的感觉。
要求:
语句连贯,词数60左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Thank you for telling me something
about your new school.
Yours,
Emma
写作提纲:

规范作文:
Dear Alice,
Thank your for telling me something about your new school.
Yours,
Emma
假设你是Emma,请用英语给你的朋友Alice写一封email介绍你现在的学校生活。请根据以下的提示用英语给Alice回信。包括以下内容:
1. 学校课程的安排;
2. 你对课程、老师的喜好以及原因;
3. 你对学校生活的感觉。
要求:
语句连贯,词数60左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
Thank you for telling me something
about your new school.
Yours,
Emma
写作提纲:
规范作文:
Dear Alice,
Thank your for telling me something about your new school.
Yours,
Emma
答案
参考范文:
...I want to share my school life with you too.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. This term, I have eight subjects. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. Classes begin at 8 o'clock in the morning and finish at 5 o'clock in the afternoon. My favourite subject is English because it's interesting. I like my English teacher too. She is very nice, and we all enjoy her classes. But I don't like maths because it's too difficult. After class, I can do sport with my classmates.
I like my school life so much. I am happy to study at school.
...I want to share my school life with you too.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. This term, I have eight subjects. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. Classes begin at 8 o'clock in the morning and finish at 5 o'clock in the afternoon. My favourite subject is English because it's interesting. I like my English teacher too. She is very nice, and we all enjoy her classes. But I don't like maths because it's too difficult. After class, I can do sport with my classmates.
I like my school life so much. I am happy to study at school.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题,要求以Emma的身份给朋友Alice写邮件介绍学校生活。解题思路:首先承接已给出的开头,引出分享学校生活的话题;接着围绕课程安排、喜好的科目及原因、学校生活感受三个核心要点展开,结合思维导图的结构(引出话题、文章主体、表达感受)组织内容,确保语句连贯,符合词数要求,最后完成书信。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头后,用“I want to share my school life with you too.”引出分享学校生活的话题;2. 介绍课程安排:说明上学时间、本学期的科目数量、每日课程数量及上课下课时间;3. 阐述喜好的科目及原因:点明最喜欢英语,原因是有趣,同时提及喜欢英语老师,老师很好;4. 说明不喜欢的科目及原因:指出不喜欢数学,原因是太难;5. 补充课后活动使内容更丰富;6. 表达对学校生活的喜爱与开心的感受,最后完成书信。
【答案】
I want to share my school life with you too.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. This term, I have eight subjects. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. Classes begin at 8 o'clock in the morning and finish at 5 o'clock in the afternoon. My favourite subject is English because it's interesting. I like my English teacher too. She is very nice, and we all enjoy her classes. But I don't like maths because it's too difficult. After class, I can do sport with my classmates.
I like my school life so much. I am happy to study at school.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题表达、句子连贯
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了课程安排、喜好及原因、学校生活感受等全部要点,结构清晰,语句连贯,符合初中英语写作的规范,内容充实,词数合适。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作题,要求以Emma的身份给朋友Alice写邮件介绍学校生活。解题思路:首先承接已给出的开头,引出分享学校生活的话题;接着围绕课程安排、喜好的科目及原因、学校生活感受三个核心要点展开,结合思维导图的结构(引出话题、文章主体、表达感受)组织内容,确保语句连贯,符合词数要求,最后完成书信。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头后,用“I want to share my school life with you too.”引出分享学校生活的话题;2. 介绍课程安排:说明上学时间、本学期的科目数量、每日课程数量及上课下课时间;3. 阐述喜好的科目及原因:点明最喜欢英语,原因是有趣,同时提及喜欢英语老师,老师很好;4. 说明不喜欢的科目及原因:指出不喜欢数学,原因是太难;5. 补充课后活动使内容更丰富;6. 表达对学校生活的喜爱与开心的感受,最后完成书信。
【答案】
I want to share my school life with you too.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. This term, I have eight subjects. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. Classes begin at 8 o'clock in the morning and finish at 5 o'clock in the afternoon. My favourite subject is English because it's interesting. I like my English teacher too. She is very nice, and we all enjoy her classes. But I don't like maths because it's too difficult. After class, I can do sport with my classmates.
I like my school life so much. I am happy to study at school.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题表达、句子连贯
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了课程安排、喜好及原因、学校生活感受等全部要点,结构清晰,语句连贯,符合初中英语写作的规范,内容充实,词数合适。
【难度系数】
0.5
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