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写作指导
1. 写作任务
假设你是弗兰克(Frank),你和你的家人正在海南度假。请你根据图片及提示内容,描述一下海南的天气以及你和你家人的活动。
要求:80个词左右。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)I'm with my family in Hainan,China.
我和我的家人正在中国海南度假。
(2)Let me the weather here and what we are doing now.
让我告诉你这里的天气情况以及我们现在正在做什么。
中间句:
(1)The weather is .
天气晴朗而炎热。
(2)My father on the beach. 我爸爸正在沙滩上散步。
(3)It's the beach.
躺在沙滩上很放松。
(4)My sister Rose and I are . 我妹妹罗丝和我情绪高涨。
结尾句:
(1)We are here.
我们在这里玩得很开心。
(2)Everyone and .
每个人都感到很放松,也很享受这种体验。
名言名句:
(1)Save for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。
(2)Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass,but about learning to dance in the rain.
生活不是等待暴风雨过去,而是学会在雨中起舞。
(3)No matter how long winter is, spring is sure to follow.
不管冬天多长,春天总会到来。
1. 写作任务
假设你是弗兰克(Frank),你和你的家人正在海南度假。请你根据图片及提示内容,描述一下海南的天气以及你和你家人的活动。
要求:80个词左右。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)I'm with my family in Hainan,China.
我和我的家人正在中国海南度假。
(2)Let me the weather here and what we are doing now.
让我告诉你这里的天气情况以及我们现在正在做什么。
中间句:
(1)The weather is .
天气晴朗而炎热。
(2)My father on the beach. 我爸爸正在沙滩上散步。
(3)It's the beach.
躺在沙滩上很放松。
(4)My sister Rose and I are . 我妹妹罗丝和我情绪高涨。
结尾句:
(1)We are here.
我们在这里玩得很开心。
(2)Everyone and .
每个人都感到很放松,也很享受这种体验。
名言名句:
(1)Save for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。
(2)Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass,but about learning to dance in the rain.
生活不是等待暴风雨过去,而是学会在雨中起舞。
(3)No matter how long winter is, spring is sure to follow.
不管冬天多长,春天总会到来。
答案
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 记叙文 人称: 第一人称和第三人称 时态: 现在进行时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)I'm having a holiday with
my family in Hainan,China.
我和我的家人正在中国海南度假。
(2)Let me tell you something
about the weather here and what we
are doing now.
让我告诉你这里的天气情况以及我们
现在正在做什么。
中间句:
(1) The weather is $\underline{sunny}$ $\underline{and}$ $\underline{hot}$.
天气晴朗而炎热。
(2) My father $\underline{is}$ $\underline{walking}$ on the beach.
我爸爸正在沙滩上散步。
(3) It's $\underline{relaxing}$ $\underline{to}$ $\underline{lie}$ $\underline{on}$ the beach.
躺在沙滩上很放松。
(4) My sister Rose and I are $\underline{in}$ $\underline{high}$ $\underline{spirits}$.
我妹妹罗丝和我情绪高涨。
结尾句：
(1) We are $\underline{having}$ $\underline{a}$ $\underline{great}$
$\underline{time}$ here.
我们在这里玩得很开心。
(2) Everyone $\underline{feels}$ $\underline{relaxed}$ and
$\underline{enjoys}$ $\underline{the}$ $\underline{experience}$.
每个人都感到很放松，也很享受这种
体验。
I'm having a holiday with my family in Hainan, China. Let me tell you something about the weather here and what we are doing now.
The weather is sunny and hot. My father is walking on the beach. My mother is sunbathing on the beach. It's relaxing. My sister Rose is building a sandcastle on the beach. I'm playing beach volleyball with my friends.
We are having a wonderful time here. Everyone feels happy and enjoys the trip.
第一步:审题 体裁: 记叙文 人称: 第一人称和第三人称 时态: 现在进行时
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)I'm having a holiday with
my family in Hainan,China.
我和我的家人正在中国海南度假。
(2)Let me tell you something
about the weather here and what we
are doing now.
让我告诉你这里的天气情况以及我们
现在正在做什么。
中间句:
(1) The weather is $\underline{sunny}$ $\underline{and}$ $\underline{hot}$.
天气晴朗而炎热。
(2) My father $\underline{is}$ $\underline{walking}$ on the beach.
我爸爸正在沙滩上散步。
(3) It's $\underline{relaxing}$ $\underline{to}$ $\underline{lie}$ $\underline{on}$ the beach.
躺在沙滩上很放松。
(4) My sister Rose and I are $\underline{in}$ $\underline{high}$ $\underline{spirits}$.
我妹妹罗丝和我情绪高涨。
结尾句：
(1) We are $\underline{having}$ $\underline{a}$ $\underline{great}$
$\underline{time}$ here.
我们在这里玩得很开心。
(2) Everyone $\underline{feels}$ $\underline{relaxed}$ and
$\underline{enjoys}$ $\underline{the}$ $\underline{experience}$.
每个人都感到很放松，也很享受这种
体验。
I'm having a holiday with my family in Hainan, China. Let me tell you something about the weather here and what we are doing now.
The weather is sunny and hot. My father is walking on the beach. My mother is sunbathing on the beach. It's relaxing. My sister Rose is building a sandcastle on the beach. I'm playing beach volleyball with my friends.
We are having a wonderful time here. Everyone feels happy and enjoys the trip.
