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动物是我们的朋友，它们和我们共享一个地球，但有一些动物却已经灭绝。假如你是李明，你校英语报正在征集“保护野生动物”的文章，请你以“An Extinct Animal”为题，根据以下提示内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文进行投稿，呼吁大家保护野生动物。
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast.
But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
答案
第八课时 Writing
标准提分版：
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast. But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
进阶优化版：
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Today I want to tell you about the passenger pigeon, a bird that no longer lives on the earth.
The passenger pigeon lived in North America. It had grey feathers and was about 40 cm long. It liked living in huge groups, ate lots of plants and could fly very fast. But sadly, humans cut down the forest and hunted it for food. What's worse, other animals often ate its eggs. Finally, this lovely bird went extinct.
It's a pity we can't see it now. Animals share the earth with us. Let's stop destroying their homes and hunting them. Small acts like planting trees can help. Let's protect wild animals—don't let more friends disappear!
标准提分版：
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast. But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
进阶优化版：
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Today I want to tell you about the passenger pigeon, a bird that no longer lives on the earth.
The passenger pigeon lived in North America. It had grey feathers and was about 40 cm long. It liked living in huge groups, ate lots of plants and could fly very fast. But sadly, humans cut down the forest and hunted it for food. What's worse, other animals often ate its eggs. Finally, this lovely bird went extinct.
It's a pity we can't see it now. Animals share the earth with us. Let's stop destroying their homes and hunting them. Small acts like planting trees can help. Let's protect wild animals—don't let more friends disappear!
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李明的身份，根据表格提供的旅鸽相关信息，写一篇80词左右的短文呼吁保护野生动物。解题思路：首先开头点明主题，介绍自己要谈论的已灭绝动物（旅鸽）；接着按表格内容，依次介绍旅鸽的栖息地、外形、习性；然后说明其灭绝的原因；最后表达对保护野生动物的看法，发出呼吁，确保内容完整，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份与写作主题：I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
2. 介绍旅鸽的基本信息：It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast.
3. 说明灭绝原因：But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
4. 结尾发出保护呼吁：Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
【答案】
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast. But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、野生动物保护话题
【点评】
本题结合表格信息考查英语写作能力，要求学生提取关键信息并组织成通顺的短文，同时传递保护野生动物的意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李明的身份，根据表格提供的旅鸽相关信息，写一篇80词左右的短文呼吁保护野生动物。解题思路：首先开头点明主题，介绍自己要谈论的已灭绝动物（旅鸽）；接着按表格内容，依次介绍旅鸽的栖息地、外形、习性；然后说明其灭绝的原因；最后表达对保护野生动物的看法，发出呼吁，确保内容完整，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明身份与写作主题：I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
2. 介绍旅鸽的基本信息：It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast.
3. 说明灭绝原因：But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
4. 结尾发出保护呼吁：Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
【答案】
An Extinct Animal
I'm Li Ming. Let's talk about the passenger pigeon—it's an extinct animal.
It lived in North America. It was grey and about 40 cm long. It lived in big groups, ate plants and flew fast. But humans cut down trees and hunted it. Other animals ate its eggs, too. So it died out.
Animals are our friends. We must stop cutting down trees and hunting. Let's protect wild animals together!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、野生动物保护话题
【点评】
本题结合表格信息考查英语写作能力，要求学生提取关键信息并组织成通顺的短文，同时传递保护野生动物的意识，是初中英语常见的写作题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
