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素材积累 ＞＞
[开头句]
1. I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-class activities.（写信目的，下同）
2. I am writing to make some suggestions to improve our school life.
[中间句]
1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables.（提出建议，下同）
2. I think we should have more books in the library.
3. What's more, we need more computers in the library.
[结尾句]
1. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.（表达期待，下同）
2. I am looking forward to more colourful school life.
[名言警句]
1. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜于言辞。
2. Education is our passport to the future.
教育是我们通往未来的通行证。
写作演练 ＞＞
近期你校的餐厅将会进行改善，假设你是王军，请代表你们班同学给校长写一封信，就改善学校餐厅提出几点建议，内容如下：1. 增加食物的多样性；2. 改善就餐氛围，如播放音乐等；3. 提升餐厅工作人员的服务质量。
要求:90词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序，先从食物、就餐氛围、餐厅员工的服务三个方面提出建议，最后表达希望个人的建议有帮助。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. I am writing this letter to make suggestions on the after-class activities.（写信目的，下同）
2. I am writing to make some suggestions to improve our school life.
[中间句]
1. First, I would like to suggest that our school should provide more ping-pong tables.（提出建议，下同）
2. I think we should have more books in the library.
3. What's more, we need more computers in the library.
[结尾句]
1. I hope my suggestions help improve our school life.（表达期待，下同）
2. I am looking forward to more colourful school life.
[名言警句]
1. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜于言辞。
2. Education is our passport to the future.
教育是我们通往未来的通行证。
写作演练 ＞＞
近期你校的餐厅将会进行改善，假设你是王军，请代表你们班同学给校长写一封信，就改善学校餐厅提出几点建议，内容如下：1. 增加食物的多样性；2. 改善就餐氛围，如播放音乐等；3. 提升餐厅工作人员的服务质量。
要求:90词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:以一般现在时为主;③ 写作时要注意顺序，先从食物、就餐氛围、餐厅员工的服务三个方面提出建议，最后表达希望个人的建议有帮助。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to
make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy different tastes.
Moreover, improving the dining environment would be great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing.
Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a better dining experience.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy different tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment would be great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a better dining experience.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy different tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment would be great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a better dining experience.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作（建议信），要求以学生王军的身份给校长写信，就改善学校餐厅提出3点具体建议。解题思路：1. 遵循书信格式，包含称呼、正文、结尾敬语；2. 正文按三段结构展开：第一段点明写信目的（提出改善餐厅的建议）；第二段分三点依次阐述建议：增加食物多样性、改善就餐氛围（如播放音乐）、提升餐厅工作人员服务质量；第三段表达对建议的期待；3. 结合素材积累的开头、中间、结尾句，确保时态以一般现在时为主、人称以第一人称为主，词数约90词。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：选用素材中合适的写信目的句，即“I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.”；2. 中间段分三点：① 建议增加食物多样性，举例说明不同食物可满足不同口味需求；② 建议改善就餐氛围，如播放轻柔背景音乐让环境更放松；③ 建议提升员工服务，培训其更友好高效；3. 结尾：表达希望建议对餐厅改善有帮助；4. 检查内容是否覆盖所有要求，词数符合要求，语言通顺。
【答案】Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy different tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment would be great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a better dining experience.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】范文结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，分点明确，语言通顺自然，符合学生身份和书信格式，完整覆盖了所有建议要点，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：选用素材中合适的写信目的句，即“I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.”；2. 中间段分三点：① 建议增加食物多样性，举例说明不同食物可满足不同口味需求；② 建议改善就餐氛围，如播放轻柔背景音乐让环境更放松；③ 建议提升员工服务，培训其更友好高效；3. 结尾：表达希望建议对餐厅改善有帮助；4. 检查内容是否覆盖所有要求，词数符合要求，语言通顺。
【答案】Dear Headmaster,
I am writing this letter to make suggestions on improving our school dining hall.
First, I suggest adding more food varieties. Different kinds of food can make us healthier. Offering different food, like Italian pasta or spicy Sichuan dishes, will surely satisfy different tastes. Moreover, improving the dining environment would be great. Playing soft background music can make the atmosphere more relaxing. Finally, I have a suggestion for staff service. Training them to be more friendly and efficient will give students a better dining experience.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful in making our dining hall better.
Best wishes,
Wang Jun
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类应用文写作、校园话题表达
【点评】范文结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，分点明确，语言通顺自然，符合学生身份和书信格式，完整覆盖了所有建议要点，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.3
