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八、书面表达(计30分)
A. 句子翻译(共5小题;每小题2分,计10分)
91. 我的表弟经常熬夜看短视频。
92. 穿着红色连衣裙的那个女孩爱吃甜食。
93. 许多青少年喜欢穿汉服来传播中国文化。
94. 让我们轮流帮助这些设计师准备这场时装秀。
95. 在春节期间,人们走亲访友并祝彼此好运。
B. 写作(计20分)
A. 句子翻译(共5小题;每小题2分,计10分)
91. 我的表弟经常熬夜看短视频。
My cousin often stays up late to watch short videos.
92. 穿着红色连衣裙的那个女孩爱吃甜食。
The girl in a red dress has a sweet tooth.
93. 许多青少年喜欢穿汉服来传播中国文化。
Many teenagers like wearing Hanfu to spread Chinese culture.
94. 让我们轮流帮助这些设计师准备这场时装秀。
Let's take turns to help these designers(to) prepare for the fashion show.
95. 在春节期间,人们走亲访友并祝彼此好运。
During the Spring Festival, people visit relatives and friends and wish each other good luck.
B. 写作(计20分)
答案
91. My cousin often stays up late to watch short videos. [解析]My cousin 意为"我的表弟"，作主语；often 意为"经常"，是频度副词；stay up late 意为"熬夜"；watch short videos 意为"看短视频"。结合中文"经常"可知，句子的时态是一般现在时，主语是第三人称单数，所以谓语动词 stay 要变成第三人称单数形式 stays；此处应用动词不定式 to watch short videos 作目的状语。
92. The girl in a red dress has a sweet tooth. [解析]girl 意为"女孩"，前面需加定冠词 the 表特指，the 位于句首，首字母要大写；in a red dress 意为"穿着红色连衣裙"；have a sweet tooth 意为"喜欢吃甜食"。句子描述的是当前的一种饮食习惯，时态为一般现在时，主语是"The girl"，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式 has。
93. Many teenagers like wearing Hanfu to spread Chinese culture. [解析]many teenagers 意为"许多青少年"，作主语，句首首字母要大写；like doing sth 意为"喜欢做某事"，表示习惯性、长期的爱好；wearing Hanfu 意为"穿汉服"；spread Chinese culture 意为"传播中国文化"。"传播中国文化"是目的，用动词不定式结构。
94. Let's take turns to help these designers(to) prepare for the fashion show. [解析]根据汉语意思可知，本句为祈使句。"让我们"英文为"Let's"，后接动词原形；"轮流"英文为"take turns"，take turns to do sth 为固定搭配，意为"轮流做某事"；"帮助这些设计师准备这场时装秀"翻译为"help these designers (to) prepare for the fashion show"；help sb (to) do sth 为固定搭配，意为"帮助某人做某事"；prepare for 意为"为……做准备"。
95. During the Spring Festival, people visit relatives and friends and wish each other good luck. [解析]本句的时态为一般现在时，表示春节期间的传统活动。"在春节期间"英文为"During the Spring Festival"，是介词短语作时间状语，置于句首（句首单词首字母大写，后加逗号与主句分隔）；"人们走亲访友并祝彼此好运"翻译为"people visit relatives and friends and wish each other good luck"，其中"people"作主语，"visit relatives and friends"和"wish each other good luck"是并列的谓语结构（用 and 连接两个并列谓语动词 visit 和 wish）。
92. The girl in a red dress has a sweet tooth. [解析]girl 意为"女孩"，前面需加定冠词 the 表特指，the 位于句首，首字母要大写；in a red dress 意为"穿着红色连衣裙"；have a sweet tooth 意为"喜欢吃甜食"。句子描述的是当前的一种饮食习惯，时态为一般现在时，主语是"The girl"，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式 has。
93. Many teenagers like wearing Hanfu to spread Chinese culture. [解析]many teenagers 意为"许多青少年"，作主语，句首首字母要大写；like doing sth 意为"喜欢做某事"，表示习惯性、长期的爱好；wearing Hanfu 意为"穿汉服"；spread Chinese culture 意为"传播中国文化"。"传播中国文化"是目的，用动词不定式结构。
94. Let's take turns to help these designers(to) prepare for the fashion show. [解析]根据汉语意思可知，本句为祈使句。"让我们"英文为"Let's"，后接动词原形；"轮流"英文为"take turns"，take turns to do sth 为固定搭配，意为"轮流做某事"；"帮助这些设计师准备这场时装秀"翻译为"help these designers (to) prepare for the fashion show"；help sb (to) do sth 为固定搭配，意为"帮助某人做某事"；prepare for 意为"为……做准备"。
95. During the Spring Festival, people visit relatives and friends and wish each other good luck. [解析]本句的时态为一般现在时，表示春节期间的传统活动。"在春节期间"英文为"During the Spring Festival"，是介词短语作时间状语，置于句首（句首单词首字母大写，后加逗号与主句分隔）；"人们走亲访友并祝彼此好运"翻译为"people visit relatives and friends and wish each other good luck"，其中"people"作主语，"visit relatives and friends"和"wish each other good luck"是并列的谓语结构（用 and 连接两个并列谓语动词 visit 和 wish）。
96. 亲爱的同学们,期待已久的寒假即将来临。为倡导同学们过一个愉快而有意义的寒假,学校建议每个同学对自己的寒假进行规划。请你根据下方流程图中的内容,用英语写一篇规划寒假的文章。
流程图要点:
要求:(1)作文需包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;(2)词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My Plan for This Winter Holiday
This year's winter holiday is coming. I think it's meaningful to make a plan for it. Now I'll share my plan with you.
That's all for my plan. I hope each of us can have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
流程图要点:
要求:(1)作文需包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;(2)词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My Plan for This Winter Holiday
This year's winter holiday is coming. I think it's meaningful to make a plan for it. Now I'll share my plan with you.
That's all for my plan. I hope each of us can have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁：说明文。②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示：结合提示内容要点进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对寒假计划的介绍；第二步，具体介绍自己的寒假计划；第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①plan to do sth 计划做某事 ②drink enough water 喝足够的水
③I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents.（动词不定式表目的）
④It's also a good time to read some books.（it 作形式主语）
One possible version:
My Plan for This Winter Holiday
This year's winter holiday is coming. I think it's meaningful to make a plan for it. Now I'll share my plan with you.
Firstly, I plan to have healthy food. I will eat various food for each meal. Between meals, I will have some fruit and drink enough water.
Secondly, doing sports is necessary, so I will exercise for about an hour a day. I plan to go jogging every morning.
Thirdly, the Spring Festival is an important festival in China. I will celebrate it with my family. I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents. After dinner, we'll watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
Finally, I will manage my time well and do my homework. It's also a good time to read some books.
That's all for my plan. I hope each of us can have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
[审题步骤]
①体裁：说明文。②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示：结合提示内容要点进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对寒假计划的介绍；第二步，具体介绍自己的寒假计划；第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①plan to do sth 计划做某事 ②drink enough water 喝足够的水
③I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents.（动词不定式表目的）
④It's also a good time to read some books.（it 作形式主语）
One possible version:
My Plan for This Winter Holiday
This year's winter holiday is coming. I think it's meaningful to make a plan for it. Now I'll share my plan with you.
Firstly, I plan to have healthy food. I will eat various food for each meal. Between meals, I will have some fruit and drink enough water.
Secondly, doing sports is necessary, so I will exercise for about an hour a day. I plan to go jogging every morning.
Thirdly, the Spring Festival is an important festival in China. I will celebrate it with my family. I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents. After dinner, we'll watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
Finally, I will manage my time well and do my homework. It's also a good time to read some books.
That's all for my plan. I hope each of us can have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：第一，必须覆盖流程图给出的全部三个要点：吃健康食物、做运动、庆祝春节，还要适当补充符合学生身份的合理内容；第二，确定体裁是个人寒假计划的说明文，用第一人称书写，时态以一般将来时为主；第三，用合适的过渡词比如firstly、secondly来分层衔接，让文章逻辑清晰，同时控制总词数在100左右，避开真实校名、人名。我们可以顺着要点逐个补充细节：给健康饮食加具体的用餐、饮水安排，给运动加每日的锻炼时长和具体运动项目，给春节庆祝加走亲访友、看春晚的常见活动，最后补充完成作业、阅读的学习安排，就能顺理成章写出符合要求的文章。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：明确写作主题为寒假规划，体裁属于计划类说明文，人称使用第一人称，核心时态为一般将来时，需全部包含题干给出的三个提示要点，词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实个人信息。
2. 搭建行文框架：使用过渡词分层串联内容，让逻辑更清晰：
① 第一层对应第一个要点：介绍自己健康饮食的计划，补充多吃蔬果、足量饮水的细节；
② 第二层对应第二个要点：介绍运动安排，补充每日锻炼时长、具体运动项目的细节；
③ 第三层对应第三个要点：介绍春节庆祝的安排，补充返乡看望长辈、看春晚的相关活动；
④ 最后补充合理延伸内容：安排时间完成寒假作业、阅读课外书，让计划更完整。
3. 润色语句：使用plan to do、it's a good time to等常用表达，保证语句通顺连贯，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
Firstly, I plan to have healthy food. I will eat various food for each meal. Between meals, I will have some fruit and drink enough water.
Secondly, doing sports is necessary, so I will exercise for about an hour a day. I plan to go jogging every morning.
Thirdly, the Spring Festival is an important festival in China. I will celebrate it with my family. I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents. After dinner, we'll watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
Finally, I will manage my time well and do my homework. It's also a good time to read some books.
【知识点】
计划类英语写作，一般将来时运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题贴合学生的寒假生活实际，写作提示清晰明确，难度适中。重点考察学生将给定要点转化为通顺英文表达的能力，引导学生学会分层梳理写作逻辑，结合生活常识补充合理细节，避免生硬直译要点，只要不遗漏核心要点、语句连贯就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：第一，必须覆盖流程图给出的全部三个要点：吃健康食物、做运动、庆祝春节，还要适当补充符合学生身份的合理内容；第二，确定体裁是个人寒假计划的说明文，用第一人称书写，时态以一般将来时为主；第三，用合适的过渡词比如firstly、secondly来分层衔接，让文章逻辑清晰，同时控制总词数在100左右，避开真实校名、人名。我们可以顺着要点逐个补充细节：给健康饮食加具体的用餐、饮水安排，给运动加每日的锻炼时长和具体运动项目，给春节庆祝加走亲访友、看春晚的常见活动，最后补充完成作业、阅读的学习安排，就能顺理成章写出符合要求的文章。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：明确写作主题为寒假规划，体裁属于计划类说明文，人称使用第一人称，核心时态为一般将来时，需全部包含题干给出的三个提示要点，词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实个人信息。
2. 搭建行文框架：使用过渡词分层串联内容，让逻辑更清晰：
① 第一层对应第一个要点：介绍自己健康饮食的计划，补充多吃蔬果、足量饮水的细节；
② 第二层对应第二个要点：介绍运动安排，补充每日锻炼时长、具体运动项目的细节；
③ 第三层对应第三个要点：介绍春节庆祝的安排，补充返乡看望长辈、看春晚的相关活动；
④ 最后补充合理延伸内容：安排时间完成寒假作业、阅读课外书，让计划更完整。
3. 润色语句：使用plan to do、it's a good time to等常用表达，保证语句通顺连贯，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
Firstly, I plan to have healthy food. I will eat various food for each meal. Between meals, I will have some fruit and drink enough water.
Secondly, doing sports is necessary, so I will exercise for about an hour a day. I plan to go jogging every morning.
Thirdly, the Spring Festival is an important festival in China. I will celebrate it with my family. I think we'll go back to our hometown to see my grandparents. After dinner, we'll watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.
Finally, I will manage my time well and do my homework. It's also a good time to read some books.
【知识点】
计划类英语写作，一般将来时运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题贴合学生的寒假生活实际，写作提示清晰明确，难度适中。重点考察学生将给定要点转化为通顺英文表达的能力，引导学生学会分层梳理写作逻辑，结合生活常识补充合理细节，避免生硬直译要点，只要不遗漏核心要点、语句连贯就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
