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八、翻译句子(本题共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
91. 我们学习许多生物,认识自然。
92. 我喜爱蓝色这样的冷色。它们使我觉得心绪平和。
93. 一晚良好的睡眠为我第二天提供充沛的精力。
94. 这能帮我规划好如何支配它,并培养良好的消费习惯。
95. 重阳节也是向我们的长辈表达尊重和爱意的时刻。
91. 我们学习许多生物,认识自然。
We study many living things and learn about nature.
92. 我喜爱蓝色这样的冷色。它们使我觉得心绪平和。
I love cool colours like blue. They make me feel calm.
93. 一晚良好的睡眠为我第二天提供充沛的精力。
A good night's sleep gives me lots of energy for the next day.
94. 这能帮我规划好如何支配它,并培养良好的消费习惯。
It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
95. 重阳节也是向我们的长辈表达尊重和爱意的时刻。
The Double Ninth Festival is also a time to show respect and love for our elders.
答案
八、91. We study many living things and learn about nature.
[解析]we 意为“我们”;study 意为“学习”;many living things 意为“很多生物”;and 意为“并且”;learn about nature 意为“认识自然”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
92. I love cool colours like blue. They make me feel calm.
[解析]I 意为“我”，作主语;love 意为“喜爱”，作谓语动词;cool colours 意为“冷色”;like blue 意为“像蓝色”;they 意为“它们”;make me feel calm 意为“使我觉得心绪平和”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
93. A good night's sleep gives me lots of energy for the next day.
[解析]a good night's sleep 意为“一晚良好的睡眠”，作主语;gives me lots of energy 意为“给我提供充沛的精力”;for the next day 意为“第二天”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
94. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
[解析]it 意为“这”;can 意为“能”;help me plan 意为“帮助我计划”;what to do with it 意为“如何支配它”;and 意为“并且”;have good spending habits 意为“培养好的消费习惯”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
95. The Double Ninth Festival is also a time to show respect and love for our elders.
[解析]the Double Ninth Festival 意为“重阳节”;is 意为“是”;also 意为“也”;a time 意为“时刻”;to show respect and love for our elders 意为“向我们的长辈表达尊重和爱意”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
[解析]we 意为“我们”;study 意为“学习”;many living things 意为“很多生物”;and 意为“并且”;learn about nature 意为“认识自然”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
92. I love cool colours like blue. They make me feel calm.
[解析]I 意为“我”，作主语;love 意为“喜爱”，作谓语动词;cool colours 意为“冷色”;like blue 意为“像蓝色”;they 意为“它们”;make me feel calm 意为“使我觉得心绪平和”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
93. A good night's sleep gives me lots of energy for the next day.
[解析]a good night's sleep 意为“一晚良好的睡眠”，作主语;gives me lots of energy 意为“给我提供充沛的精力”;for the next day 意为“第二天”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
94. It helps me plan what to do with it and have good spending habits.
[解析]it 意为“这”;can 意为“能”;help me plan 意为“帮助我计划”;what to do with it 意为“如何支配它”;and 意为“并且”;have good spending habits 意为“培养好的消费习惯”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
95. The Double Ninth Festival is also a time to show respect and love for our elders.
[解析]the Double Ninth Festival 意为“重阳节”;is 意为“是”;also 意为“也”;a time 意为“时刻”;to show respect and love for our elders 意为“向我们的长辈表达尊重和爱意”。句子陈述一般事实，用一般现在时。
九、书面表达(本题满分20分)
假如你是 Tom,一位来自英国的交换生。请根据下面的思维导图,写一封电子邮件给你的好友 Daniel,介绍你在南通的生活情况。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,并展开合理想象,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
假如你是 Tom,一位来自英国的交换生。请根据下面的思维导图,写一封电子邮件给你的好友 Daniel,介绍你在南通的生活情况。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,并展开合理想象,适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
答案
九、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:应用文。②时态:以“一般现在时”为主。③提示:写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏思维导图中的关键信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，向对方介绍自己在南通的生活;第二步，具体阐述内容，从学校、生活方式、爱好、喜欢的节日等方面具体介绍自己在南通的生活情况;第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①the whole afternoon 整个下午 ②be a member of...
是……的一员 ③get together 聚会 ④set off fireworks 燃放烟花
⑤I like doing sports to keep fit. (动词不定式作目的状语)
⑥It's one of the most important festivals in China. (one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for your email. I'm glad to tell you about my life here in Nantong.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoons. We read lots of interesting books there.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. This meal gives me energy for the whole afternoon.
I like doing sports to keep fit. I spend about half an hour practising playing basketball every day. I'm a member of the school basketball team now.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food. That's really wonderful.
I think Nantong is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Nantong? I'll show you around.
All the best,
Tom
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:应用文。②时态:以“一般现在时”为主。③提示:写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏思维导图中的关键信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，向对方介绍自己在南通的生活;第二步，具体阐述内容，从学校、生活方式、爱好、喜欢的节日等方面具体介绍自己在南通的生活情况;第三步，书写结语。
[词句积累]
①the whole afternoon 整个下午 ②be a member of...
是……的一员 ③get together 聚会 ④set off fireworks 燃放烟花
⑤I like doing sports to keep fit. (动词不定式作目的状语)
⑥It's one of the most important festivals in China. (one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for your email. I'm glad to tell you about my life here in Nantong.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoons. We read lots of interesting books there.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. This meal gives me energy for the whole afternoon.
I like doing sports to keep fit. I spend about half an hour practising playing basketball every day. I'm a member of the school basketball team now.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food. That's really wonderful.
I think Nantong is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Nantong? I'll show you around.
All the best,
Tom
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先明确核心要求：要以英国交换生Tom的身份，给好友Daniel写邮件介绍自己在南通的生活。首先确定体裁是应用文电子邮件，全文以一般现在时作为主时态，符合介绍日常现状的语境。接下来梳理所有需要覆盖的写作要点：学校作息与课后安排、健康的日常饮食生活方式、运动爱好与校队经历、最喜爱的节日春节的相关习俗。题目已经给出了邮件的开头和结尾，不需要额外创作，只需要把上述几个要点用连贯的语句串联起来，适当补充合理的小细节，控制正文词数符合要求，避开真实校名姓名即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：体裁为私人电子邮件，人称使用第一人称，主时态为一般现在时，需完整覆盖所有给定要点，逻辑连贯，词数符合要求。
2. 搭建写作框架：
① 承接给定开头，直接切入介绍南通生活的主题；
② 依次展开四个核心模块：先介绍学校的上课时间、周五下午和同学去图书馆阅读的校园日常；再介绍自己的三餐搭配，说明健康饮食给自己提供充足能量；接着介绍自己日常坚持打篮球、是校篮球队成员的运动爱好；最后介绍自己最喜欢的春节的特色习俗，表达对节日的喜爱；
③ 承接给定的结尾，自然带出对南通的好感、邀请好友来访的内容。
3. 润色优化：合理使用积累的短语（如the whole afternoon、get together等）和特色句式（动词不定式作目的状语、one of+最高级+名词复数结构），避免逐字翻译要点，让行文更流畅自然，符合给好友写信的轻松语气。
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for your email. I'm glad to tell you about my life here in Nantong.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoons. We read lots of interesting books there.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. This meal gives me energy for the whole afternoon.
I like doing sports to keep fit. I spend about half an hour practising playing basketball every day. I'm a member of the school basketball team now.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food. That's really wonderful.
I think Nantong is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Nantong? I'll show you around.
All the best,
Tom
【知识点】
1. 英文邮件写作
2. 一般现在时
3. 提纲类书面表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的提纲类应用文写作题，思维导图给出的写作维度清晰明确，降低了学生的构思难度，学生只需要完整覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充细节、串联语句，注意句式的丰富性，避免出现语法错误和无关真实信息，就可以拿到不错的分数，同时也考察了学生对日常校园、生活类话题的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先明确核心要求：要以英国交换生Tom的身份，给好友Daniel写邮件介绍自己在南通的生活。首先确定体裁是应用文电子邮件，全文以一般现在时作为主时态，符合介绍日常现状的语境。接下来梳理所有需要覆盖的写作要点：学校作息与课后安排、健康的日常饮食生活方式、运动爱好与校队经历、最喜爱的节日春节的相关习俗。题目已经给出了邮件的开头和结尾，不需要额外创作，只需要把上述几个要点用连贯的语句串联起来，适当补充合理的小细节，控制正文词数符合要求，避开真实校名姓名即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题确认：体裁为私人电子邮件，人称使用第一人称，主时态为一般现在时，需完整覆盖所有给定要点，逻辑连贯，词数符合要求。
2. 搭建写作框架：
① 承接给定开头，直接切入介绍南通生活的主题；
② 依次展开四个核心模块：先介绍学校的上课时间、周五下午和同学去图书馆阅读的校园日常；再介绍自己的三餐搭配，说明健康饮食给自己提供充足能量；接着介绍自己日常坚持打篮球、是校篮球队成员的运动爱好；最后介绍自己最喜欢的春节的特色习俗，表达对节日的喜爱；
③ 承接给定的结尾，自然带出对南通的好感、邀请好友来访的内容。
3. 润色优化：合理使用积累的短语（如the whole afternoon、get together等）和特色句式（动词不定式作目的状语、one of+最高级+名词复数结构），避免逐字翻译要点，让行文更流畅自然，符合给好友写信的轻松语气。
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for your email. I'm glad to tell you about my life here in Nantong.
We start lessons at 8 a. m. from Monday to Friday. I often go to the library with my classmates on Friday afternoons. We read lots of interesting books there.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I usually have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables, meat and rice. This meal gives me energy for the whole afternoon.
I like doing sports to keep fit. I spend about half an hour practising playing basketball every day. I'm a member of the school basketball team now.
The Spring Festival is my favourite festival. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together. People set off fireworks and enjoy delicious food. That's really wonderful.
I think Nantong is a great place to study and live.
Would you like to come to Nantong? I'll show you around.
All the best,
Tom
【知识点】
1. 英文邮件写作
2. 一般现在时
3. 提纲类书面表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的提纲类应用文写作题，思维导图给出的写作维度清晰明确，降低了学生的构思难度，学生只需要完整覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充细节、串联语句，注意句式的丰富性，避免出现语法错误和无关真实信息，就可以拿到不错的分数，同时也考察了学生对日常校园、生活类话题的英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
