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（2025·江苏南京第二十九中学调研改编）4月23日是世界读书日（World Reading Day），为进一步提升学生的阅读意识，培养良好的阅读习惯，我校英文俱乐部开展了以“Reading makes me better”为题的研讨活动，旨在鼓励更多学生爱上阅读。请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
【要点】1. What type of books do you like best? Why?
2. Why do you need to read more books?
3. What reading advice can you give to your classmates? (time, habits, ...)
【注意】1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
（2025·江苏南京第二十九中学调研改编）4月23日是世界读书日（World Reading Day），为进一步提升学生的阅读意识，培养良好的阅读习惯，我校英文俱乐部开展了以“Reading makes me better”为题的研讨活动，旨在鼓励更多学生爱上阅读。请根据要点提示写一篇英文短文，分享你对阅读的看法和建议。
【要点】1. What type of books do you like best? Why?
2. Why do you need to read more books?
3. What reading advice can you give to your classmates? (time, habits, ...)
【注意】1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world.
Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
答案
One possible version
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
Reading makes me better
Reading ten thousand books is like travelling ten thousand miles.
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作的核心要求：需要覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人信息。第一步先回应第一个要点：先明确说出自己最喜欢的书籍类型，再补充合理的喜欢的理由，选择历史类、文学类这类常见的书籍类型很容易展开表述；第二步回应第二个要点，从知识获取、视野拓展、能力提升等角度说明多读书的意义，把阅读的好处说清楚；第三步回应第三个要点，围绕题干提示的时间安排、阅读习惯两个方向给出具体可行的建议，最后把所有内容用合适的衔接词串起来，保证语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开篇语句，首先点明自己最喜爱的书籍类型是历史类书籍，紧接着说明喜欢的原因：可以了解过去的经验，用来解决当下遇到的问题，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来论述多阅读的必要性，使用not only...but also...的并列结构，说明阅读既可以帮助我们获取知识和生活技能，也能拓宽眼界，充分覆盖第二个要点。
3. 最后给出具体的阅读建议，呼吁大家坚持每日阅读，养成边阅读边记笔记的好习惯，覆盖第三个要点，整体调整语句流畅度，控制总词数符合要求，无语法错误。
【答案】
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
【知识点】
话题类英语写作
作文要点覆盖
常用英语句式运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个要点，内容贴合学生日常学习生活，理由和建议都真实合理，运用了not only...but also...等加分亮点句式，衔接自然流畅，词数符合80左右的要求，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规内容，完全符合该题的评分标准，学生写作时可以参考该思路，逐个对应要点搭建内容，适当补充简单的亮点结构即可获得不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作的核心要求：需要覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人信息。第一步先回应第一个要点：先明确说出自己最喜欢的书籍类型，再补充合理的喜欢的理由，选择历史类、文学类这类常见的书籍类型很容易展开表述；第二步回应第二个要点，从知识获取、视野拓展、能力提升等角度说明多读书的意义，把阅读的好处说清楚；第三步回应第三个要点，围绕题干提示的时间安排、阅读习惯两个方向给出具体可行的建议，最后把所有内容用合适的衔接词串起来，保证语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯即可。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开篇语句，首先点明自己最喜爱的书籍类型是历史类书籍，紧接着说明喜欢的原因：可以了解过去的经验，用来解决当下遇到的问题，完成第一个要点的表述。
2. 接下来论述多阅读的必要性，使用not only...but also...的并列结构，说明阅读既可以帮助我们获取知识和生活技能，也能拓宽眼界，充分覆盖第二个要点。
3. 最后给出具体的阅读建议，呼吁大家坚持每日阅读，养成边阅读边记笔记的好习惯，覆盖第三个要点，整体调整语句流畅度，控制总词数符合要求，无语法错误。
【答案】
I like books on history best. From these books, I can learn about the past and find that many problems we face now are similar to those in the past and that their solutions are also useful for the problems today.
Reading more books can not only help us learn more knowledge and new skills to deal with the difficulties in life, but also broaden our horizons and let us know more about the world. Therefore, we should read more books every day and take notes while reading.
【知识点】
话题类英语写作
作文要点覆盖
常用英语句式运用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个要点，内容贴合学生日常学习生活，理由和建议都真实合理，运用了not only...but also...等加分亮点句式，衔接自然流畅，词数符合80左右的要求，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规内容，完全符合该题的评分标准，学生写作时可以参考该思路，逐个对应要点搭建内容，适当补充简单的亮点结构即可获得不错的得分。
【难度系数】
0.7
