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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 来信说他对中国和英国的一些文化差异很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍你所了解的文化差异。
要点提示:1. 问候方式差异;
2. 餐桌礼仪差异。
要求:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;
2. 词数 100 左右;邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in cultural differences between China and the UK.
These differences make our cultures special. Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mike 来信说他对中国和英国的一些文化差异很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍你所了解的文化差异。
要点提示:1. 问候方式差异;
2. 餐桌礼仪差异。
要求:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;
2. 词数 100 左右;邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in cultural differences between China and the UK.
These differences make our cultures special. Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in
cultural differences between China and the UK. Let
me share some with you.
There are interesting differences in greeting
ways. In China, we usually shake hands or nod
when meeting. We often say "Have you eaten?" as
a greeting. However, in the UK, people often hug
or kiss cheeks when meeting friends. They like
talking about weather when greeting.
Table manners are also different. We Chinese
use chopsticks to eat. The host will warmly ask
guests to eat more food. It's okay to make some
sounds while eating. But in Britain, people use
knives and forks. They eat quietly and don't push
others to eat more.
These differences make our cultures special.
Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in
cultural differences between China and the UK. Let
me share some with you.
There are interesting differences in greeting
ways. In China, we usually shake hands or nod
when meeting. We often say "Have you eaten?" as
a greeting. However, in the UK, people often hug
or kiss cheeks when meeting friends. They like
talking about weather when greeting.
Table manners are also different. We Chinese
use chopsticks to eat. The host will warmly ask
guests to eat more food. It's okay to make some
sounds while eating. But in Britain, people use
knives and forks. They eat quietly and don't push
others to eat more.
These differences make our cultures special.
Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作要求：身份是李华，收信人是英国笔友，核心主题是介绍中英文化差异，指定要点为问候方式差异、餐桌礼仪差异，开头结尾已给出无需自行创作，词数控制在100左右。首先第一步，承接给定的开头，用短句自然引出要分享差异的内容；第二步，围绕第一个要点“问候差异”，分别说明中英两国见面时的常见动作、常用问候内容，用转折词体现对比；第三步，用过渡句引出第二个要点“餐桌礼仪差异”，分别说明两国的餐具使用、待客习惯、用餐注意事项的不同，同样用转折体现对比；最后直接衔接题干给出的结尾即可，全程注意语气轻松贴合笔友交流的场景，不要出现真实人名校名，保证要点无遗漏。
【解析】
写作按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 开篇过渡：承接题干给出的开头句，添加"Let me share some with you."自然引出后续介绍内容。
2. 阐述问候差异：先总起点明问候方式存在不同，之后分别介绍中国见面时通常握手、点头，常把“你吃了吗”作为问候语；英国见面时好友常拥抱、贴面，问候时喜欢聊天气，用however衔接两国差异，逻辑清晰。
3. 阐述餐桌礼仪差异：用过渡句"Table manners are also different."引出第二个要点，分别说明中国人用筷子，主人会热情劝客人多吃，用餐时发出一点声音是正常的；英国人用刀叉，用餐安静，不会劝他人多吃，用but衔接两国不同点。
4. 直接衔接题干给出的结尾内容，整体行文连贯，所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in cultural differences between China and the UK. Let me share some with you.
There are interesting differences in greeting ways. In China, we usually shake hands or nod when meeting. We often say "Have you eaten?" as a greeting. However, in the UK, people often hug or kiss cheeks when meeting friends. They like talking about weather when greeting.
Table manners are also different. We Chinese use chopsticks to eat. The host will warmly ask guests to eat more food. It's okay to make some sounds while eating. But in Britain, people use knives and forks. They eat quietly and don't push others to eat more.
These differences make our cultures special. Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
文化差异表达
对比逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目要求，两个指定要点全部完整覆盖，行文用also、however、but等衔接词串联内容，对比关系清晰明了，语气自然符合笔友日常交流的场景，用词准确地道，词数控制在要求范围内，没有出现无关信息和违规内容，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀参考例文。学生写作时可以注意将两个要点分开阐述，用对比连接词凸显两国差异，避免内容混杂逻辑混乱。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先明确写作要求：身份是李华，收信人是英国笔友，核心主题是介绍中英文化差异，指定要点为问候方式差异、餐桌礼仪差异，开头结尾已给出无需自行创作，词数控制在100左右。首先第一步，承接给定的开头，用短句自然引出要分享差异的内容；第二步，围绕第一个要点“问候差异”，分别说明中英两国见面时的常见动作、常用问候内容，用转折词体现对比；第三步，用过渡句引出第二个要点“餐桌礼仪差异”，分别说明两国的餐具使用、待客习惯、用餐注意事项的不同，同样用转折体现对比；最后直接衔接题干给出的结尾即可，全程注意语气轻松贴合笔友交流的场景，不要出现真实人名校名，保证要点无遗漏。
【解析】
写作按照以下规范步骤完成：
1. 开篇过渡：承接题干给出的开头句，添加"Let me share some with you."自然引出后续介绍内容。
2. 阐述问候差异：先总起点明问候方式存在不同，之后分别介绍中国见面时通常握手、点头，常把“你吃了吗”作为问候语；英国见面时好友常拥抱、贴面，问候时喜欢聊天气，用however衔接两国差异，逻辑清晰。
3. 阐述餐桌礼仪差异：用过渡句"Table manners are also different."引出第二个要点，分别说明中国人用筷子，主人会热情劝客人多吃，用餐时发出一点声音是正常的；英国人用刀叉，用餐安静，不会劝他人多吃，用but衔接两国不同点。
4. 直接衔接题干给出的结尾内容，整体行文连贯，所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in cultural differences between China and the UK. Let me share some with you.
There are interesting differences in greeting ways. In China, we usually shake hands or nod when meeting. We often say "Have you eaten?" as a greeting. However, in the UK, people often hug or kiss cheeks when meeting friends. They like talking about weather when greeting.
Table manners are also different. We Chinese use chopsticks to eat. The host will warmly ask guests to eat more food. It's okay to make some sounds while eating. But in Britain, people use knives and forks. They eat quietly and don't push others to eat more.
These differences make our cultures special. Would you like to know more?
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
文化差异表达
对比逻辑衔接
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题目要求，两个指定要点全部完整覆盖，行文用also、however、but等衔接词串联内容，对比关系清晰明了，语气自然符合笔友日常交流的场景，用词准确地道，词数控制在要求范围内，没有出现无关信息和违规内容，是一篇符合初中英语写作评分标准的优秀参考例文。学生写作时可以注意将两个要点分开阐述，用对比连接词凸显两国差异，避免内容混杂逻辑混乱。
【难度系数】
0.6
