十一、“成长直播”即将开讲!你将作为分享嘉宾,向全班介绍上学期的精彩旅程。请根据思维导图,写一篇短文,分享你的收获。要求:不少于5句话。(5分)

Last term was wonderful and I learnt a lot. I learnt many facts about planets and stars and drew beautiful pictures of the Moon and Earth. I also learnt to manage money. I kept a spending notebook and saved pocket money for useful things. Besides, I took environmental actions. I saved water and electricity at home and used reusable bags. I really grew a lot last term.
答案
示例:Last term was wonderful and I learnt a lot. I learnt many facts about planets and stars and drew beautiful pictures of the Moon and Earth. I also learnt to manage money. I kept a spending notebook and saved pocket money for useful things. Besides, I took environmental actions. I saved water and electricity at home and used reusable bags. I really grew a lot last term.
解析
写作思路
1. 开篇总述上学期收获满满。
2. 中间依次介绍太空科学、理财、环保三大核心内容,每部分简述具体行为。
3. 结尾总结自身成长,贴合主题,语句连贯、层次清晰。
写作注意事项
1. 时态统一:全文描述上学期经历,主要使用一般过去时。
2. 要点齐全:完整覆盖思维导图的所有核心要点,不遗漏信息。
3. 内容完整:不少于5句话。
解析
写作思路
1. 开篇总述上学期收获满满。
2. 中间依次介绍太空科学、理财、环保三大核心内容,每部分简述具体行为。
3. 结尾总结自身成长,贴合主题,语句连贯、层次清晰。
写作注意事项
1. 时态统一:全文描述上学期经历,主要使用一般过去时。
2. 要点齐全:完整覆盖思维导图的所有核心要点,不遗漏信息。
3. 内容完整:不少于5句话。
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