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（二）书面表达
假设你市某报刊开设了一个英文专栏，准备举办以“Save Animals in Danger”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
（2）思路构建
假设你市某报刊开设了一个英文专栏，准备举办以“Save Animals in Danger”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
（2）思路构建
答案
（1）说明文；一般现在时；第三人称
One possible version:
Whales are among the largest animals on earth. They live in the sea and they eat a lot of small fish and other sea animals. They play an important role in keeping the ocean ecosystem lively and healthy.
However, whales are in danger now. First, some people hunt whales for their meat, fat and oil. Second, other problems such as ocean pollution and climate change also cause the number of whales to drop.
In order to protect them, strict rules should be made
to stop people from killing whales and throwing rubbish into the sea. Also, everyone should play a part in protecting whales and other animals in danger.
One possible version:
Whales are among the largest animals on earth. They live in the sea and they eat a lot of small fish and other sea animals. They play an important role in keeping the ocean ecosystem lively and healthy.
However, whales are in danger now. First, some people hunt whales for their meat, fat and oil. Second, other problems such as ocean pollution and climate change also cause the number of whales to drop.
In order to protect them, strict rules should be made
to stop people from killing whales and throwing rubbish into the sea. Also, everyone should play a part in protecting whales and other animals in danger.
解析
【分析】
本题为英文书面表达题，主题是“Save Animals in Danger”（拯救濒危动物）。解题时需先审题确定文体、时态、人称，再围绕主题构建写作思路，最后完成短文写作，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。具体步骤：1. 审题定调：明确文体、时态、人称；2. 思路构建：围绕濒危动物的基本情况、濒危原因、保护措施展开；3. 写作成文：紧扣主题，控制词数，语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：根据征文主题和要求，文体为说明文，时态选用一般现在时（描述现状、事实），人称以第三人称为主（描述动物及相关情况）；2. 思路构建：可按“介绍濒危动物→说明濒危原因→提出保护措施”的结构展开，如以鲸鱼为例，先说明鲸鱼的生态作用，再讲其濒危的原因，最后提出保护措施；3. 写作成文：注意语句连贯，词数控制在70左右，符合征文要求。
【答案】
（1）说明文；一般现在时；第三人称；（2）①介绍濒危动物的基本情况及生态作用；②说明该动物濒危的现状及原因；③提出保护该动物的具体措施；④呼吁公众参与保护濒危动物；⑤总结主题强调保护的重要性；One possible version: Whales are among the largest animals on earth. They live in the sea and they eat a lot of small fish and other sea animals. They play an important role in keeping the ocean ecosystem lively and healthy. However, whales are in danger now. First, some people hunt whales for their meat, fat and oil. Second, other problems such as ocean pollution and climate change also cause the number of whales to drop. In order to protect them, strict rules should be made to stop people from killing whales and throwing rubbish into the sea. Also, everyone should play a part in protecting whales and other animals in danger.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、说明文写作、濒危动物主题写作
【点评】
本题围绕“拯救濒危动物”主题考查英文写作能力，要求学生具备审题、构思及语言表达能力，贴近生活实际，易于学生结合所学知识完成，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英文书面表达题，主题是“Save Animals in Danger”（拯救濒危动物）。解题时需先审题确定文体、时态、人称，再围绕主题构建写作思路，最后完成短文写作，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。具体步骤：1. 审题定调：明确文体、时态、人称；2. 思路构建：围绕濒危动物的基本情况、濒危原因、保护措施展开；3. 写作成文：紧扣主题，控制词数，语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：根据征文主题和要求，文体为说明文，时态选用一般现在时（描述现状、事实），人称以第三人称为主（描述动物及相关情况）；2. 思路构建：可按“介绍濒危动物→说明濒危原因→提出保护措施”的结构展开，如以鲸鱼为例，先说明鲸鱼的生态作用，再讲其濒危的原因，最后提出保护措施；3. 写作成文：注意语句连贯，词数控制在70左右，符合征文要求。
【答案】
（1）说明文；一般现在时；第三人称；（2）①介绍濒危动物的基本情况及生态作用；②说明该动物濒危的现状及原因；③提出保护该动物的具体措施；④呼吁公众参与保护濒危动物；⑤总结主题强调保护的重要性；One possible version: Whales are among the largest animals on earth. They live in the sea and they eat a lot of small fish and other sea animals. They play an important role in keeping the ocean ecosystem lively and healthy. However, whales are in danger now. First, some people hunt whales for their meat, fat and oil. Second, other problems such as ocean pollution and climate change also cause the number of whales to drop. In order to protect them, strict rules should be made to stop people from killing whales and throwing rubbish into the sea. Also, everyone should play a part in protecting whales and other animals in danger.
【知识点】
英文书面表达、说明文写作、濒危动物主题写作
【点评】
本题围绕“拯救濒危动物”主题考查英文写作能力，要求学生具备审题、构思及语言表达能力，贴近生活实际，易于学生结合所学知识完成，能有效检验学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
