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假设你叫王明，你的朋友李莉要去 Mary 家做客，特写信请你介绍一下在美国人家里做客时的注意事项。请根据提示写一封回信。
内容包括:1.问候;2.建议;3.表达祝愿。
要求:1.书写规范，逻辑清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2.词数 80 左右。
内容包括:1.问候;2.建议;3.表达祝愿。
要求:1.书写规范，逻辑清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2.词数 80 左右。
答案
标准提分版：
Dear Li Li,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to give you some suggestions about American customs.
Firstly, you're expected to shake hands for the first time. And you are supposed to bring a small gift, for example, some beautiful flowers or a nice album. Secondly, you should arrive on time. It's impolite to be there too early or too late. Thirdly, you could also show that you like the food very much. And after dinner, you'd better not stay there for too long. Don't forget to thank them for the invitation before saying goodbye to the family.
I hope that these tips are useful. Have a good time!
Yours,
Wang Ming
进阶优化版：
Dear Li Li,
Excited about visiting Mary? Here are some tips to help you feel at ease.
Remember to be on time. If you're 10 minutes late, call Mary's mum to show respect. It would be better to bring a small gift, like Chinese tea or cookies. They'll enjoy your culture. At dinner, wait for everyone to sit first. And if you don't like a dish, you could say, "It looks delicious, but I'm full. Thanks!" You'd better ask, "Would you like me to help clear the table?" However, if the hosts decline firmly, you should respect them.
Relax and be yourself. Hope you can enjoy your time with Mary's family!
Warmly,
Wang Ming
Dear Li Li,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to give you some suggestions about American customs.
Firstly, you're expected to shake hands for the first time. And you are supposed to bring a small gift, for example, some beautiful flowers or a nice album. Secondly, you should arrive on time. It's impolite to be there too early or too late. Thirdly, you could also show that you like the food very much. And after dinner, you'd better not stay there for too long. Don't forget to thank them for the invitation before saying goodbye to the family.
I hope that these tips are useful. Have a good time!
Yours,
Wang Ming
进阶优化版：
Dear Li Li,
Excited about visiting Mary? Here are some tips to help you feel at ease.
Remember to be on time. If you're 10 minutes late, call Mary's mum to show respect. It would be better to bring a small gift, like Chinese tea or cookies. They'll enjoy your culture. At dinner, wait for everyone to sit first. And if you don't like a dish, you could say, "It looks delicious, but I'm full. Thanks!" You'd better ask, "Would you like me to help clear the table?" However, if the hosts decline firmly, you should respect them.
Relax and be yourself. Hope you can enjoy your time with Mary's family!
Warmly,
Wang Ming
解析
【解析】
首先需遵循英语书信的规范格式，开头以问候回应朋友来信；接着围绕美国人家做客的礼仪给出具体建议，如初次见面握手、携带小礼物、准时赴约、用餐礼仪及告辞注意事项等，建议要符合英美文化习俗；结尾表达对朋友的美好祝愿，确保内容涵盖题目要求的问候、建议、祝愿三部分，控制词数在80左右，行文连贯逻辑清晰。
【答案】
Dear Li Li,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to give you some suggestions about American customs.
Firstly, you're expected to shake hands for the first time. And you are supposed to bring a small gift, for example, some beautiful flowers or a nice album. Secondly, you should arrive on time. It's impolite to be there too early or too late. Thirdly, you could also show that you like the food very much. And after dinner, you'd better not stay there for too long. Don't forget to thank them for the invitation before saying goodbye to the family.
I hope that these tips are useful. Have a good time!
Yours,
Wang Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作；英美社交礼仪；应用文写作规范
【点评】
本文严格遵循英语书信格式，内容完整覆盖题目要求的问候、建议、祝愿三部分，给出的建议贴合美国做客的实际礼仪，语言简洁流畅，逻辑清晰，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的应用文范文，有助于学生掌握跨文化交际场景下的写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先需遵循英语书信的规范格式，开头以问候回应朋友来信；接着围绕美国人家做客的礼仪给出具体建议，如初次见面握手、携带小礼物、准时赴约、用餐礼仪及告辞注意事项等，建议要符合英美文化习俗；结尾表达对朋友的美好祝愿，确保内容涵盖题目要求的问候、建议、祝愿三部分，控制词数在80左右，行文连贯逻辑清晰。
【答案】
Dear Li Li,
Thanks for your letter. I'm very glad to give you some suggestions about American customs.
Firstly, you're expected to shake hands for the first time. And you are supposed to bring a small gift, for example, some beautiful flowers or a nice album. Secondly, you should arrive on time. It's impolite to be there too early or too late. Thirdly, you could also show that you like the food very much. And after dinner, you'd better not stay there for too long. Don't forget to thank them for the invitation before saying goodbye to the family.
I hope that these tips are useful. Have a good time!
Yours,
Wang Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作；英美社交礼仪；应用文写作规范
【点评】
本文严格遵循英语书信格式，内容完整覆盖题目要求的问候、建议、祝愿三部分，给出的建议贴合美国做客的实际礼仪，语言简洁流畅，逻辑清晰，词数符合要求，是一篇规范的应用文范文，有助于学生掌握跨文化交际场景下的写作技巧。
【难度系数】
0.6
