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Ⅲ. 书面表达。
在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他(她)的感谢，请你根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。
要求：
(1)语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
(2)文中应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(4)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
This is a thank - you note to
在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他(她)的感谢，请你根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。
要求：
(1)语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
(2)文中应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(4)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
This is a thank - you note to
答案
Ⅲ. One possible version:
This is a thank-you note to Amy, my best friend in junior high school. I really want to thank her for her support and warm-heartedness.
At the beginning of the school, I was shy and hardly made new friends. Amy was the first one to talk to me and our friendship started from here. She has been a helpful friend all the way through. She listens to me patiently whenever I have problems. She encourages me to be brave and speak out my thoughts. She gives me advice on my study and helps me make progress.
It's Amy who makes me a better person. I want to take this chance to thank her and wish this warm-hearted girl a bright future. Thank you again, Amy!
This is a thank-you note to Amy, my best friend in junior high school. I really want to thank her for her support and warm-heartedness.
At the beginning of the school, I was shy and hardly made new friends. Amy was the first one to talk to me and our friendship started from here. She has been a helpful friend all the way through. She listens to me patiently whenever I have problems. She encourages me to be brave and speak out my thoughts. She gives me advice on my study and helps me make progress.
It's Amy who makes me a better person. I want to take this chance to thank her and wish this warm-hearted girl a bright future. Thank you again, Amy!
解析
【解析】
这是一篇感谢信类书面表达，需围绕思维导图的三个核心维度展开：
1. Who：明确感谢对象，可简单描述其外貌、性格等特征；
2. Why：具体讲述对方帮助自己的事件，体现感谢的缘由；
3. How：表达自己的行动决心或对对方的美好祝愿。
写作时需结合题目要求，保证语言连贯、内容完整，词数符合要求，同时避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
This is a thank-you note to Amy, my best friend in junior high school. I really want to thank her for her support and warm-heartedness.
At the beginning of the school, I was shy and hardly made new friends. Amy was the first one to talk to me and our friendship started from here. She has been a helpful friend all the way through. She listens to me patiently whenever I have problems. She encourages me to be brave and speak out my thoughts. She gives me advice on my study and helps me make progress.
It's Amy who makes me a better person. I want to take this chance to thank her and wish this warm-hearted girl a bright future. Thank you again, Amy!
【知识点】
感谢信写作、时态综合运用、情景情感表达
【点评】
范文严格贴合写作要求，完整覆盖思维导图的三个要点，内容充实，情感真挚，语言表达流畅自然，时态运用准确，符合校园广播站投稿的正式且温暖的风格，是一篇规范的感谢信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇感谢信类书面表达，需围绕思维导图的三个核心维度展开：
1. Who：明确感谢对象，可简单描述其外貌、性格等特征；
2. Why：具体讲述对方帮助自己的事件，体现感谢的缘由；
3. How：表达自己的行动决心或对对方的美好祝愿。
写作时需结合题目要求，保证语言连贯、内容完整，词数符合要求，同时避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
This is a thank-you note to Amy, my best friend in junior high school. I really want to thank her for her support and warm-heartedness.
At the beginning of the school, I was shy and hardly made new friends. Amy was the first one to talk to me and our friendship started from here. She has been a helpful friend all the way through. She listens to me patiently whenever I have problems. She encourages me to be brave and speak out my thoughts. She gives me advice on my study and helps me make progress.
It's Amy who makes me a better person. I want to take this chance to thank her and wish this warm-hearted girl a bright future. Thank you again, Amy!
【知识点】
感谢信写作、时态综合运用、情景情感表达
【点评】
范文严格贴合写作要求，完整覆盖思维导图的三个要点，内容充实，情感真挚，语言表达流畅自然，时态运用准确，符合校园广播站投稿的正式且温暖的风格，是一篇规范的感谢信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
