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Ⅱ. 书面表达。
下面图表是关于班级 50 名学生的业余活动的调查结果统计,请以“Free - time Activities”为题,用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表的内容,阐述自己的爱好及原因,并分享与爱好相关的故事。
要求：
(1)语言表达准确,内容连贯、通顺；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that _______
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
下面图表是关于班级 50 名学生的业余活动的调查结果统计,请以“Free - time Activities”为题,用英语写一篇短文,简要说明图表的内容,阐述自己的爱好及原因,并分享与爱好相关的故事。
要求：
(1)语言表达准确,内容连贯、通顺；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that _______
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
答案
One possible version:
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that fourteen students like listening to music. Sixteen students like doing sports and eight students like playing musical instruments. Six students like collecting things and six students have other hobbies.
As for me, I'm interested in travelling. It takes up most of my free time. By travelling, I can learn a lot about people, places and history. My mother took me to Beijing when I was 8 years old. I visited many places of interest, like Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square where I found the beauty of China.
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that fourteen students like listening to music. Sixteen students like doing sports and eight students like playing musical instruments. Six students like collecting things and six students have other hobbies.
As for me, I'm interested in travelling. It takes up most of my free time. By travelling, I can learn a lot about people, places and history. My mother took me to Beijing when I was 8 years old. I visited many places of interest, like Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square where I found the beauty of China.
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
解析
【解析】
1. 图表信息转述：依据柱状图准确提取各项业余活动对应的学生人数，用简洁清晰的句式依次表述，确保数据传递准确；
2. 个人内容拓展：选定一个个人爱好，说明其在自己业余生活中的占比，阐述喜爱该爱好的原因，并补充相关具体故事，让内容更具真实性与丰富性；
3. 全文整合：结合题目给出的开头与结尾，完成全文创作，保证内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that fourteen students like listening to music. Sixteen students like doing sports and eight students like playing musical instruments. Six students like collecting things and six students have other hobbies.
As for me, I'm interested in travelling. It takes up most of my free time. By travelling, I can learn a lot about people, places and history. My mother took me to Beijing when I was 8 years old. I visited many places of interest, like Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square where I found the beauty of China.
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
【翻译】
1. 图表信息转述
2. 话题类书面表达
3. 英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本文完全契合题目要求：首先精准清晰地转述了班级业余活动调查的图表数据，信息完整无偏差；随后通过介绍个人旅行爱好、喜爱原因及相关经历，丰富了文章维度，语言表达流畅自然，符合词数限定，结尾呼应主题，是一篇规范优质的话题类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.65
1. 图表信息转述：依据柱状图准确提取各项业余活动对应的学生人数，用简洁清晰的句式依次表述，确保数据传递准确；
2. 个人内容拓展：选定一个个人爱好，说明其在自己业余生活中的占比，阐述喜爱该爱好的原因，并补充相关具体故事，让内容更具真实性与丰富性；
3. 全文整合：结合题目给出的开头与结尾，完成全文创作，保证内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Free - time Activities
We did a survey about students' free - time activities in our class. It shows that fourteen students like listening to music. Sixteen students like doing sports and eight students like playing musical instruments. Six students like collecting things and six students have other hobbies.
As for me, I'm interested in travelling. It takes up most of my free time. By travelling, I can learn a lot about people, places and history. My mother took me to Beijing when I was 8 years old. I visited many places of interest, like Palace Museum and Tian'anmen Square where I found the beauty of China.
All in all, free - time activities are a good way to reduce stress and relax ourselves!
【翻译】
业余活动
我们对班级里学生的业余活动进行了调查。结果显示，有 14 名学生喜欢听音乐，16 名学生喜欢运动，8 名学生喜欢演奏乐器。还有 6 名学生喜欢收集物品，6 名学生有其他爱好。
就我而言，我对旅行很感兴趣。它占据了我大部分的业余时间。通过旅行，我可以了解到很多关于人、地方和历史的知识。在我 8 岁时，妈妈带我去北京。我参观了许多名胜古迹，比如故宫和天安门广场，在那里我领略到了中国之美。
总之，业余活动是减轻压力、放松自己的好方式！
【知识点】1. 图表信息转述
2. 话题类书面表达
3. 英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本文完全契合题目要求：首先精准清晰地转述了班级业余活动调查的图表数据，信息完整无偏差；随后通过介绍个人旅行爱好、喜爱原因及相关经历，丰富了文章维度，语言表达流畅自然，符合词数限定，结尾呼应主题，是一篇规范优质的话题类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.65
