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Ⅳ. Think and say.
Find out what is happening in your school and make it into a piece of news. Try to make use of the notes in Exercise Ⅲ.
Find out what is happening in your school and make it into a piece of news. Try to make use of the notes in Exercise Ⅲ.
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Ⅳ. Think and say.
Here is a piece of news about an event happening in our school:
News Report
This week, our school organized a charity sale to raise money for the local children's hospital. The event took place in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon. Many students brought their old books, toys, and handmade crafts to sell. Some students also baked cookies and cakes to sell at the event.
The headmaster, Mr. Li, opened the charity sale with a speech. He encouraged everyone to contribute generously. After his speech, the students started selling and buying items enthusiastically. The atmosphere was lively and warm.
In the end, the event raised over 3,000 yuan. All the money will be donated to the children's hospital to help sick children. We are proud of what we achieved and hope to organize more such events in the future.
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Ⅳ. Think and say.
Here is a piece of news about an event happening in our school:
News Report
This week, our school organized a charity sale to raise money for the local children's hospital. The event took place in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon. Many students brought their old books, toys, and handmade crafts to sell. Some students also baked cookies and cakes to sell at the event.
The headmaster, Mr. Li, opened the charity sale with a speech. He encouraged everyone to contribute generously. After his speech, the students started selling and buying items enthusiastically. The atmosphere was lively and warm.
In the end, the event raised over 3,000 yuan. All the money will be donated to the children's hospital to help sick children. We are proud of what we achieved and hope to organize more such events in the future.
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解析
【解析】
本题为英语写作任务，要求结合校园实际事件创作一篇新闻报道，需运用练习Ⅲ中的笔记，写作时需涵盖新闻的核心要素：时间、地点、事件主体、过程及结果，可选取校园常见活动，按照新闻的结构（开篇点明事件、中间详述过程、结尾说明成果与展望）来组织内容，使用符合语境的英语表达完成创作。
【答案】
Here is a piece of news about an event happening in our school:
News Report
This week, our school organized a charity sale to raise money for the local children's hospital. The event took place in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon. Many students brought their old books, toys, and handmade crafts to sell. Some students also baked cookies and cakes to sell at the event.
The headmaster, Mr. Li, opened the charity sale with a speech. He encouraged everyone to contribute generously. After his speech, the students started selling and buying items enthusiastically. The atmosphere was lively and warm.
In the end, the event raised over 3,000 yuan. All the money will be donated to the children's hospital to help sick children. We are proud of what we achieved and hope to organize more such events in the future.
【知识点】
校园新闻写作，英语记叙文结构，活动类英语表达
【点评】
范文选取校园慈善义卖这一典型活动展开新闻创作，结构清晰完整，涵盖了新闻的关键要素，语言平实自然，符合校园新闻的写作风格，有效运用了相关词汇与句式，为同类英语新闻写作提供了清晰范例。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语写作任务，要求结合校园实际事件创作一篇新闻报道，需运用练习Ⅲ中的笔记，写作时需涵盖新闻的核心要素：时间、地点、事件主体、过程及结果，可选取校园常见活动，按照新闻的结构（开篇点明事件、中间详述过程、结尾说明成果与展望）来组织内容，使用符合语境的英语表达完成创作。
【答案】
Here is a piece of news about an event happening in our school:
News Report
This week, our school organized a charity sale to raise money for the local children's hospital. The event took place in the school hall on Wednesday afternoon. Many students brought their old books, toys, and handmade crafts to sell. Some students also baked cookies and cakes to sell at the event.
The headmaster, Mr. Li, opened the charity sale with a speech. He encouraged everyone to contribute generously. After his speech, the students started selling and buying items enthusiastically. The atmosphere was lively and warm.
In the end, the event raised over 3,000 yuan. All the money will be donated to the children's hospital to help sick children. We are proud of what we achieved and hope to organize more such events in the future.
【知识点】
校园新闻写作，英语记叙文结构，活动类英语表达
【点评】
范文选取校园慈善义卖这一典型活动展开新闻创作，结构清晰完整，涵盖了新闻的关键要素，语言平实自然，符合校园新闻的写作风格，有效运用了相关词汇与句式，为同类英语新闻写作提供了清晰范例。
【难度系数】
0.4
