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六、书面表达。(7分)
Peter和同学们在谈论各自的梦想，请根据思维导图和所给提示展开想象，以“Different dreams”为题，帮助Peter写一篇短文介绍他同学们的梦想并写一写Peter自己的梦想。不少于7句话，已给的内容不计入总句数。
## Different dreams
Different children have different dreams.
In our class, ___
To make their dreams come true, ___.
I ___ They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
Peter和同学们在谈论各自的梦想，请根据思维导图和所给提示展开想象，以“Different dreams”为题，帮助Peter写一篇短文介绍他同学们的梦想并写一写Peter自己的梦想。不少于7句话，已给的内容不计入总句数。
## Different dreamsDifferent children have different dreams.
In our class, ___
To make their dreams come true, ___.
I ___ They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
答案
示例：
Different dreams
Different children have different dreams.
In our class, Jack dreams of becoming a kind dentist. He wants to help children care about their teeth and teach them how to keep teeth strong and healthy. John hopes to be a famous basketball player one day. He practises every afternoon and dreams of playing in the NBA. Linda loves cooking and wants to be a good cook. She wants to cook nice food for people and enjoy the food with them.
To make their dreams come true, Jack will study science books carefully. John will do more sport and eat healthy food. Linda will watch cooking shows and go to cooking school.
They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
I want to be a brave policeman. I want to protect people from danger. To make my dream come true, I will read more books and do more exercise.
Different dreams
Different children have different dreams.
In our class, Jack dreams of becoming a kind dentist. He wants to help children care about their teeth and teach them how to keep teeth strong and healthy. John hopes to be a famous basketball player one day. He practises every afternoon and dreams of playing in the NBA. Linda loves cooking and wants to be a good cook. She wants to cook nice food for people and enjoy the food with them.
To make their dreams come true, Jack will study science books carefully. John will do more sport and eat healthy food. Linda will watch cooking shows and go to cooking school.
They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
I want to be a brave policeman. I want to protect people from danger. To make my dream come true, I will read more books and do more exercise.
解析
【分析】
首先要明确题目要求：以“Different dreams”为题，介绍同学们的梦想（包括职业、相关想法），再写大家为实现梦想的行动，最后阐述Peter自己的梦想及实现计划，且正文不少于7句话。
解题思路如下：
1. 先确定要介绍的同学及其梦想职业，为每个职业补充合理的动机，比如牙医可以写帮助孩子保护牙齿，篮球运动员可以写想进NBA，厨师可以写想给人们做美食，让内容更具体；
2. 针对每个同学的梦想，对应写出切实可行的实现计划，比如牙医要钻研相关知识，篮球运动员要坚持训练、健康饮食，厨师要学习烹饪技巧；
3. 最后写Peter的梦想，选择合适的职业（如警察），说明梦想的意义，再写出自己的努力方向；
4. 组织语言时要注意语句连贯，用通顺的句式连接内容，确保符合题目要求的篇幅。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开篇，依次介绍同学的梦想：
介绍Jack的梦想：点明职业是牙医，补充他想帮助孩子护牙、教孩子健齿的想法；
介绍John的梦想：说明他想成为篮球运动员，补充他坚持训练、渴望进NBA的内容；
介绍Linda的梦想：说明她想成为厨师，补充她喜欢做饭、想和人们分享美食的想法；
2. 承接“To make their dreams come true”，对应每个同学的梦想写具体行动：
Jack要认真学习科学书籍；
John要多运动、健康饮食；
Linda要看烹饪节目、上烹饪学校；
3. 过渡到Peter的梦想，点明职业是警察，说明想保护人们远离危险的动机，再写出自己要多读书、多锻炼的计划；
4. 将以上内容整理成连贯的短文，确保语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Different dreams
Different children have different dreams.
In our class, Jack dreams of becoming a kind dentist. He wants to help children care about their teeth and teach them how to keep teeth strong and healthy. John hopes to be a famous basketball player one day. He practises every afternoon and dreams of playing in the NBA. Linda loves cooking and wants to be a good cook. She wants to cook nice food for people and enjoy the food with them.
To make their dreams come true, Jack will study science books carefully. John will do more sport and eat healthy food. Linda will watch cooking shows and go to cooking school.
They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
I want to be a brave policeman. I want to protect people from danger. To make my dream come true, I will read more books and do more exercise.
【知识点】
1. 梦想类话题写作
2. 职业相关表达
3. 一般将来时运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，层次分明：先介绍三位同学的梦想及动机，再阐述他们实现梦想的具体计划，最后讲述Peter自己的梦想与努力方向。内容具体充实，语句通顺连贯，准确运用了与职业、梦想相关的表达和一般将来时，很好地完成了题目要求，能给读者清晰的信息传递。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先要明确题目要求：以“Different dreams”为题，介绍同学们的梦想（包括职业、相关想法），再写大家为实现梦想的行动，最后阐述Peter自己的梦想及实现计划，且正文不少于7句话。
解题思路如下：
1. 先确定要介绍的同学及其梦想职业，为每个职业补充合理的动机，比如牙医可以写帮助孩子保护牙齿，篮球运动员可以写想进NBA，厨师可以写想给人们做美食，让内容更具体；
2. 针对每个同学的梦想，对应写出切实可行的实现计划，比如牙医要钻研相关知识，篮球运动员要坚持训练、健康饮食，厨师要学习烹饪技巧；
3. 最后写Peter的梦想，选择合适的职业（如警察），说明梦想的意义，再写出自己的努力方向；
4. 组织语言时要注意语句连贯，用通顺的句式连接内容，确保符合题目要求的篇幅。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开篇，依次介绍同学的梦想：
介绍Jack的梦想：点明职业是牙医，补充他想帮助孩子护牙、教孩子健齿的想法；
介绍John的梦想：说明他想成为篮球运动员，补充他坚持训练、渴望进NBA的内容；
介绍Linda的梦想：说明她想成为厨师，补充她喜欢做饭、想和人们分享美食的想法；
2. 承接“To make their dreams come true”，对应每个同学的梦想写具体行动：
Jack要认真学习科学书籍；
John要多运动、健康饮食；
Linda要看烹饪节目、上烹饪学校；
3. 过渡到Peter的梦想，点明职业是警察，说明想保护人们远离危险的动机，再写出自己要多读书、多锻炼的计划；
4. 将以上内容整理成连贯的短文，确保语句通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Different dreams
Different children have different dreams.
In our class, Jack dreams of becoming a kind dentist. He wants to help children care about their teeth and teach them how to keep teeth strong and healthy. John hopes to be a famous basketball player one day. He practises every afternoon and dreams of playing in the NBA. Linda loves cooking and wants to be a good cook. She wants to cook nice food for people and enjoy the food with them.
To make their dreams come true, Jack will study science books carefully. John will do more sport and eat healthy food. Linda will watch cooking shows and go to cooking school.
They all have a dream and I have a dream too.
I want to be a brave policeman. I want to protect people from danger. To make my dream come true, I will read more books and do more exercise.
【知识点】
1. 梦想类话题写作
2. 职业相关表达
3. 一般将来时运用
【点评】
这篇短文结构清晰，层次分明：先介绍三位同学的梦想及动机，再阐述他们实现梦想的具体计划，最后讲述Peter自己的梦想与努力方向。内容具体充实，语句通顺连贯，准确运用了与职业、梦想相关的表达和一般将来时，很好地完成了题目要求，能给读者清晰的信息传递。
【难度系数】
0.6
