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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
全球知名的青少年科普网站Young Scientists' Wiki正式启动"自然探索者"专栏,现面向全世界学生征集人物词条。请你选择一位你最敬佩的自然探索者,为他/她撰写一篇约80词的英文词条。
内容包括:
1. 明确的推荐对象;
2. 推荐的理由(他/她的主要发现和探索精神)。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,逻辑连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
There are many great nature explorers in history, and
全球知名的青少年科普网站Young Scientists' Wiki正式启动"自然探索者"专栏,现面向全世界学生征集人物词条。请你选择一位你最敬佩的自然探索者,为他/她撰写一篇约80词的英文词条。
内容包括:
1. 明确的推荐对象;
2. 推荐的理由(他/她的主要发现和探索精神)。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,逻辑连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
There are many great nature explorers in history, and
Charles Darwin
is one of them.Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship. During the trip, he discovered lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time. Though he faced doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research.
His famous book unlocked the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life. Darwin's deep love of nature and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore more about the wonderful natural world.
答案
One possible version:
There are many great nature explorers in history, and Charles Darwin is one of them.
Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship. During the trip, he discovered
lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time. Though he faced
doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research. His famous book unlocked
the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life. Darwin's deep love of nature
and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore
more about the wonderful natural world.
There are many great nature explorers in history, and Charles Darwin is one of them.
Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship. During the trip, he discovered
lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time. Though he faced
doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research. His famous book unlocked
the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life. Darwin's deep love of nature
and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore
more about the wonderful natural world.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确题目核心要求：撰写约80词的英文自然探索者人物词条，需包含明确的推荐对象，以及涵盖主要发现和探索精神的推荐理由。
第一步，选择大众熟知、事迹清晰的自然探索者（如查尔斯·达尔文），便于展开内容；第二步，搭建文章结构：承接开头引出人物→介绍核心探索经历→阐述主要发现→点明探索精神（通过困难与坚持体现）→总结人物影响并升华主题；第三步，控制字数，确保语句通顺、语法正确，贴合科普词条的正式风格。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题目给定开头，直接点明推荐对象Charles Darwin，快速切入主题；
2. 用一般过去时描述达尔文的探索经历：“Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship.”，交代其探索的实践基础；
3. 阐述核心发现：“he discovered lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time.”，紧扣“主要发现”的要求；
4. 通过转折句式体现探索精神：“Though he faced doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research.”，突出他不惧质疑、坚持不懈的品质；
5. 说明人物影响：“His famous book unlocked the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life.”，点明其著作的科学意义；
6. 结尾总结精神并升华：“Darwin's deep love of nature and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore more about the wonderful natural world.”，呼应主题，完成词条撰写。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many great nature explorers in history, and Charles Darwin is one of them.
Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship. During the trip, he discovered
lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time. Though he faced
doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research. His famous book unlocked
the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life. Darwin's deep love of nature
and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore
more about the wonderful natural world.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作；一般过去时运用；科普话题词汇
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，内容完整：明确推荐达尔文，既详细介绍了他的核心探索发现，又突出了其不惧质疑、坚持不懈的探索精神。文章逻辑连贯，语言地道准确，符合科普词条的正式风格，且字数控制合理，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
首先，我们需要明确题目核心要求：撰写约80词的英文自然探索者人物词条，需包含明确的推荐对象，以及涵盖主要发现和探索精神的推荐理由。
第一步，选择大众熟知、事迹清晰的自然探索者（如查尔斯·达尔文），便于展开内容；第二步，搭建文章结构：承接开头引出人物→介绍核心探索经历→阐述主要发现→点明探索精神（通过困难与坚持体现）→总结人物影响并升华主题；第三步，控制字数，确保语句通顺、语法正确，贴合科普词条的正式风格。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题目给定开头，直接点明推荐对象Charles Darwin，快速切入主题；
2. 用一般过去时描述达尔文的探索经历：“Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship.”，交代其探索的实践基础；
3. 阐述核心发现：“he discovered lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time.”，紧扣“主要发现”的要求；
4. 通过转折句式体现探索精神：“Though he faced doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research.”，突出他不惧质疑、坚持不懈的品质；
5. 说明人物影响：“His famous book unlocked the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life.”，点明其著作的科学意义；
6. 结尾总结精神并升华：“Darwin's deep love of nature and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore more about the wonderful natural world.”，呼应主题，完成词条撰写。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many great nature explorers in history, and Charles Darwin is one of them.
Darwin spent five years traveling around the world on a ship. During the trip, he discovered
lots of unknown species. He found that life on earth has changed over time. Though he faced
doubts and difficulties from others, he never stopped his research. His famous book unlocked
the secret of nature and changed people's old beliefs about life. Darwin's deep love of nature
and strong perseverance made him a true role model. We should learn from him to explore
more about the wonderful natural world.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作；一般过去时运用；科普话题词汇
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，内容完整：明确推荐达尔文，既详细介绍了他的核心探索发现，又突出了其不惧质疑、坚持不懈的探索精神。文章逻辑连贯，语言地道准确，符合科普词条的正式风格，且字数控制合理，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
