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五、书面表达。
习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说：“世事变迁，和平发展始终是主旋律，合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月，希望中学正在开展以“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work”（团队合作让梦想成真）为题的英语征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次团队合作的经历，如体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，并谈谈你对团队合作的看法。
内容提示：
（1）事情的起因、经过、结果；
（2）你的收获和感想。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：fall behind 落后；advice sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说：“世事变迁，和平发展始终是主旋律，合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月，希望中学正在开展以“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work”（团队合作让梦想成真）为题的英语征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，分享一次团队合作的经历，如体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，并谈谈你对团队合作的看法。
内容提示：
（1）事情的起因、经过、结果；
（2）你的收获和感想。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：fall behind 落后；advice sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
答案
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two. At the beginning, every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. Then our teacher advised us to work together as a team. "You must know that basketball is a team sport," he said. We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game.
This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two. At the beginning, every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. Then our teacher advised us to work together as a team. "You must know that basketball is a team sport," he said. We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game.
This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要紧扣题目“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work”的主题，结合要求选择贴近学生生活的团队合作经历，比如篮球比赛这类体育运动，容易展开且符合提示范畴。接着按照内容提示梳理写作逻辑：先点明事件背景，再叙述比赛初期各自为战导致落后的起因，然后写老师指导团队协作的经过，最后呈现赢得比赛的结果，结尾点明团队合作的感悟。同时要控制词数，合理运用参考词汇，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：利用给定开头引出经历后，用“Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two.”直接点明具体事件。
2. 叙述问题：描述比赛初期队员的错误做法“every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others.”，并用参考词汇“fell behind”说明不良后果。
3. 转折解决：通过老师的建议“advised us to work together as a team”及话语点出篮球的团队属性，接着写队员听从建议的转变。
4. 结果与感悟：用“In the end, we won the game.”交代结果，最后用“This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.”点明团队合作的核心感悟，呼应主题。
5. 整体内容完整，涵盖起因、经过、结果与感想，词数符合要求，语言简洁规范。
【答案】
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two. At the beginning, every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. Then our teacher advised us to work together as a team. "You must know that basketball is a team sport," he said. We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game.
This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.
【知识点】
1. 英语记叙文写作
2. 团队合作主题表达
3. 提建议句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，选取篮球比赛的经历，完整呈现了事件的起因、经过和结果，结尾的感悟精准点明团队合作的重要性，符合题目所有要求。文中合理运用参考词汇，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，很好地呼应了开头引出的核心观点。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要紧扣题目“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work”的主题，结合要求选择贴近学生生活的团队合作经历，比如篮球比赛这类体育运动，容易展开且符合提示范畴。接着按照内容提示梳理写作逻辑：先点明事件背景，再叙述比赛初期各自为战导致落后的起因，然后写老师指导团队协作的经过，最后呈现赢得比赛的结果，结尾点明团队合作的感悟。同时要控制词数，合理运用参考词汇，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头：利用给定开头引出经历后，用“Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two.”直接点明具体事件。
2. 叙述问题：描述比赛初期队员的错误做法“every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others.”，并用参考词汇“fell behind”说明不良后果。
3. 转折解决：通过老师的建议“advised us to work together as a team”及话语点出篮球的团队属性，接着写队员听从建议的转变。
4. 结果与感悟：用“In the end, we won the game.”交代结果，最后用“This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.”点明团队合作的核心感悟，呼应主题。
5. 整体内容完整，涵盖起因、经过、结果与感想，词数符合要求，语言简洁规范。
【答案】
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
Teamwork is very important in our life and study. I learn this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Tuesday, we had a basketball match with Class Two. At the beginning, every player tried to show himself. We just ran around and didn't pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. Then our teacher advised us to work together as a team. "You must know that basketball is a team sport," he said. We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game.
This experience made me understand that one player doesn't make a team.
【知识点】
1. 英语记叙文写作
2. 团队合作主题表达
3. 提建议句型运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，选取篮球比赛的经历，完整呈现了事件的起因、经过和结果，结尾的感悟精准点明团队合作的重要性，符合题目所有要求。文中合理运用参考词汇，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，很好地呼应了开头引出的核心观点。
【难度系数】
0.6
