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四、书面表达。
"少年智则国智，少年富则国富；少年强则国强，少年独立则国独立……"青少年要为实现中华民族伟大复兴的中国梦贡献力量，所以我们要自律自强，成为栋梁之材。请你以 "How to Be a Good Student" 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何自我约束，成为一名新时代的好学生。
内容提示：
（1）在校：遵规守纪，尊敬师长，友善同学……
（2）在家：及时完成作业，做力所能及的家务……
（3）其他方面：多阅读，少看电视，少打游戏……
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数70个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：be kind to ... 对 …… 友好；become 成为；in time 及时
How to Be a Good Student
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student.
"少年智则国智，少年富则国富；少年强则国强，少年独立则国独立……"青少年要为实现中华民族伟大复兴的中国梦贡献力量，所以我们要自律自强，成为栋梁之材。请你以 "How to Be a Good Student" 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何自我约束，成为一名新时代的好学生。
内容提示：
（1）在校：遵规守纪，尊敬师长，友善同学……
（2）在家：及时完成作业，做力所能及的家务……
（3）其他方面：多阅读，少看电视，少打游戏……
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数70个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：be kind to ... 对 …… 友好；become 成为；in time 及时
How to Be a Good Student
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student.
As students, we should follow some rules.
First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other.
Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home.
Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.
Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.
答案
How to be a Good Student
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student. As students, we should follow some rules.
First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other. Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home. Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.
Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student. As students, we should follow some rules.
First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other. Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home. Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.
Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.
解析
【分析】
首先，明确这是一篇说明文写作题，主题为“How to Be a Good Student”，需围绕题目给出的三个提示维度展开。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，点明成为好学生需遵循一定准则，自然引出下文具体做法；
2. 用First、Second、Third这类逻辑连接词分点阐述：第一点写在校的行为规范，涵盖遵规守纪、尊师友善；第二点写在家的要求，包括及时完成作业、承担家务；第三点写课余生活，突出多阅读、少沉迷电子娱乐；
3. 结尾简洁总结，呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，避免出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 开头衔接：用“As students, we should follow some rules.”承接给定开头，顺畅引出后续具体内容；
2. 分点论述：
在校层面：“First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other.”完整覆盖题目要求的遵规守纪、尊师友伴要点；
在家层面：“Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home.”落实及时完成作业、做力所能及家务的提示；
课余层面：“Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.”对应多阅读、少看电视和游戏的要求；
3. 结尾收束：“Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.”简洁有力，呼应主题，完成写作。
【答案】
How to be a Good Student
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student. As students, we should follow some rules.
First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other. Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home. Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.
Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.
【知识点】
1. 英语说明文写作
2. 日常行为类词汇运用
3. 连贯表达技巧
【点评】
本文采用总分总的结构，逻辑清晰连贯，用First、Second、Third串联各要点，完整覆盖题目所有提示内容，用词准确地道，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，明确这是一篇说明文写作题，主题为“How to Be a Good Student”，需围绕题目给出的三个提示维度展开。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，点明成为好学生需遵循一定准则，自然引出下文具体做法；
2. 用First、Second、Third这类逻辑连接词分点阐述：第一点写在校的行为规范，涵盖遵规守纪、尊师友善；第二点写在家的要求，包括及时完成作业、承担家务；第三点写课余生活，突出多阅读、少沉迷电子娱乐；
3. 结尾简洁总结，呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，避免出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 开头衔接：用“As students, we should follow some rules.”承接给定开头，顺畅引出后续具体内容；
2. 分点论述：
在校层面：“First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other.”完整覆盖题目要求的遵规守纪、尊师友伴要点；
在家层面：“Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home.”落实及时完成作业、做力所能及家务的提示；
课余层面：“Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.”对应多阅读、少看电视和游戏的要求；
3. 结尾收束：“Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.”简洁有力，呼应主题，完成写作。
【答案】
How to be a Good Student
It's important for us to learn about how to be a good student. As students, we should follow some rules.
First, we must follow rules at school. We should respect our teachers and be kind to our classmates. We need to help each other. Second, we should do our homework in time after school. Also, we should help with housework at home. Third, we need to read more in our free time. We must not play computer games or watch TV for a long time.
Follow these rules, and we'll become good students.
【知识点】
1. 英语说明文写作
2. 日常行为类词汇运用
3. 连贯表达技巧
【点评】
本文采用总分总的结构，逻辑清晰连贯，用First、Second、Third串联各要点，完整覆盖题目所有提示内容，用词准确地道，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
