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假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Tom 对黄河很感兴趣。请你根据下表内容，给他写一封邮件，向他介绍黄河，并谈谈黄河的重要性以及你的看法。
· the second longest river in China
· provide water for daily life and farming
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名等信息；（3）不少于 80 词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
Yours，
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Tom 对黄河很感兴趣。请你根据下表内容，给他写一封邮件，向他介绍黄河，并谈谈黄河的重要性以及你的看法。
· the second longest river in China
· provide water for daily life and farming
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名等信息；（3）不少于 80 词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yellow River is over 5,400 kilometres long.It flows through nine provinces.It is the second longest river in China and one of the longest rivers in the world.The river gets its golden-yellow colour because of the soil it carries.We call it the Mother River because it is very important for us. It provides water for people's daily life and farming.It is also one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization and a symbol of national spirit.
I think the Yellow River is very beautiful and important.For people who love the big river，visiting the Yellow River is the dream of a lifetime!
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
【小试牛刀】
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yellow River is over 5,400 kilometres long.It flows through nine provinces.It is the second longest river in China and one of the longest rivers in the world.The river gets its golden-yellow colour because of the soil it carries.We call it the Mother River because it is very important for us. It provides water for people's daily life and farming.It is also one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization and a symbol of national spirit.
I think the Yellow River is very beautiful and important.For people who love the big river，visiting the Yellow River is the dream of a lifetime!（共107词）
Yours，
Li Hua
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yellow River is over 5,400 kilometres long.It flows through nine provinces.It is the second longest river in China and one of the longest rivers in the world.The river gets its golden-yellow colour because of the soil it carries.We call it the Mother River because it is very important for us. It provides water for people's daily life and farming.It is also one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization and a symbol of national spirit.
I think the Yellow River is very beautiful and important.For people who love the big river，visiting the Yellow River is the dream of a lifetime!（共107词）
Yours，
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇给外国朋友的英文邮件写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 明确写作任务：向外国朋友Tom介绍黄河，需涵盖表格所有要点（长度、中国第二长河、提供生活与农业用水、中华文明发源地），并表达个人看法，同时满足词数要求。
2. 梳理写作逻辑：先介绍黄河的基本概况（长度、地位、名字由来等可适当拓展），再阐述黄河的重要作用，最后表达自己对黄河的看法。
3. 语言风格：采用给朋友写信的轻松自然语气，确保语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先介绍黄河的基础信息：点明长度（over 5,400 kilometres long），补充流经区域、世界长河地位，解释黄河名字的由来，让内容更丰富。
2. 阐述黄河的重要性：结合表格要点，说明它为日常生活和农业供水，是中华文明的发源地，还可拓展为民族精神的象征，呼应“母亲河”的称呼。
3. 表达个人看法：从黄河的美感和重要性出发，写出对黄河的赞美，比如提及游览黄河是热爱它的人的梦想，完成观点表达。
4. 检查内容：确保所有表格要点都涵盖，词数达标，语言流畅，无真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yellow River is over 5,400 kilometres long.It flows through nine provinces.It is the second longest river in China and one of the longest rivers in the world.The river gets its golden-yellow colour because of the soil it carries.We call it the Mother River because it is very important for us. It provides water for people's daily life and farming.It is also one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization and a symbol of national spirit.
I think the Yellow River is very beautiful and important.For people who love the big river，visiting the Yellow River is the dream of a lifetime!
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，说明文写作，黄河英文表述
【点评】
本文严格贴合题目要求，完整涵盖所有给定要点，同时适当拓展了黄河流经区域、名字由来等内容，让文章内容充实饱满。语言风格自然亲切，符合给朋友写信的语境，逻辑清晰，很好地完成了介绍黄河并表达个人看法的写作任务，词数也符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇给外国朋友的英文邮件写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 明确写作任务：向外国朋友Tom介绍黄河，需涵盖表格所有要点（长度、中国第二长河、提供生活与农业用水、中华文明发源地），并表达个人看法，同时满足词数要求。
2. 梳理写作逻辑：先介绍黄河的基本概况（长度、地位、名字由来等可适当拓展），再阐述黄河的重要作用，最后表达自己对黄河的看法。
3. 语言风格：采用给朋友写信的轻松自然语气，确保语句通顺，符合英语表达习惯，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，先介绍黄河的基础信息：点明长度（over 5,400 kilometres long），补充流经区域、世界长河地位，解释黄河名字的由来，让内容更丰富。
2. 阐述黄河的重要性：结合表格要点，说明它为日常生活和农业供水，是中华文明的发源地，还可拓展为民族精神的象征，呼应“母亲河”的称呼。
3. 表达个人看法：从黄河的美感和重要性出发，写出对黄河的赞美，比如提及游览黄河是热爱它的人的梦想，完成观点表达。
4. 检查内容：确保所有表格要点都涵盖，词数达标，语言流畅，无真实信息。
【答案】
Dear Tom，
How are you? I know you are interested in the Yellow River. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yellow River is over 5,400 kilometres long.It flows through nine provinces.It is the second longest river in China and one of the longest rivers in the world.The river gets its golden-yellow colour because of the soil it carries.We call it the Mother River because it is very important for us. It provides water for people's daily life and farming.It is also one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization and a symbol of national spirit.
I think the Yellow River is very beautiful and important.For people who love the big river，visiting the Yellow River is the dream of a lifetime!
Yours，
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，说明文写作，黄河英文表述
【点评】
本文严格贴合题目要求，完整涵盖所有给定要点，同时适当拓展了黄河流经区域、名字由来等内容，让文章内容充实饱满。语言风格自然亲切，符合给朋友写信的语境，逻辑清晰，很好地完成了介绍黄河并表达个人看法的写作任务，词数也符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
