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【写作任务】
假如你是李华，上周末你和你的同学一起参加了学校郊游。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一封邮件发给你的美国网友 Bob，向他简要介绍学校郊游的情况，并谈谈你的感受。80 词左右。
【要点】(1) How was the weather? (2) Where did you go? (3) Who did you go with? (4) How did you get there? (5) What did you do there? (6) How long did you stay there?
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题。
本文为应用文。人称以 为主，时态以 为主。
第二步 列提纲。
1. 引出话题——介绍上周末的学校郊游
I'd like to tell you something about ...
列提纲
2. 详细介绍学校郊游的情况
(1) I went on ... with ...
(2) In the morning, we ...
(3) In the afternoon, we ...
(4) In the evening, the farmer ...
3. 表达感受
... a great weekend!
第三步 列出主要的短语。
1. 学校旅行
2. 玩得很开心
3. 摘草莓
4. 番茄植株
5. 为……如此努力工作
第四步 扩连改。
Dear Bob,
How's it going? I'd like to tell you something about 1. (I) school trip last weekend.
It was sunny last weekend. I went on 2. school trip to a farm with my classmates. It wasn't very far, so we went there 3. bike. We 4. (stay) there for a whole day and had great fun. In the morning, we 5. (pick) strawberries. In the afternoon, we learnt to cut branches and 6. (leaf) from tomato plants. Then we watered them 7. picked some fresh vegetables. In the evening, the farmer helped us 8. (cook) dinner with vegetables we picked ourselves. They 9. (certain) tasted good! I guessed the reason was that we worked so hard for them. 10. a great weekend!
Yours,
Li Hua
【一展身手】
假如你是李华，请你根据下表内容，用英文写一篇短文，描述上周六你们班去黄山旅行的情况。80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It was sunny last Saturday.
假如你是李华，上周末你和你的同学一起参加了学校郊游。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一封邮件发给你的美国网友 Bob，向他简要介绍学校郊游的情况，并谈谈你的感受。80 词左右。
【要点】(1) How was the weather? (2) Where did you go? (3) Who did you go with? (4) How did you get there? (5) What did you do there? (6) How long did you stay there?
【思路点拨】
第一步 审题。
本文为应用文。人称以 为主，时态以 为主。
第二步 列提纲。
1. 引出话题——介绍上周末的学校郊游
I'd like to tell you something about ...
列提纲
2. 详细介绍学校郊游的情况
(1) I went on ... with ...
(2) In the morning, we ...
(3) In the afternoon, we ...
(4) In the evening, the farmer ...
3. 表达感受
... a great weekend!
第三步 列出主要的短语。
1. 学校旅行
2. 玩得很开心
3. 摘草莓
4. 番茄植株
5. 为……如此努力工作
第四步 扩连改。
Dear Bob,
How's it going? I'd like to tell you something about 1. (I) school trip last weekend.
It was sunny last weekend. I went on 2. school trip to a farm with my classmates. It wasn't very far, so we went there 3. bike. We 4. (stay) there for a whole day and had great fun. In the morning, we 5. (pick) strawberries. In the afternoon, we learnt to cut branches and 6. (leaf) from tomato plants. Then we watered them 7. picked some fresh vegetables. In the evening, the farmer helped us 8. (cook) dinner with vegetables we picked ourselves. They 9. (certain) tasted good! I guessed the reason was that we worked so hard for them. 10. a great weekend!
Yours,
Li Hua
【一展身手】
假如你是李华，请你根据下表内容，用英文写一篇短文，描述上周六你们班去黄山旅行的情况。80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It was sunny last Saturday.
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【写作任务】
第一步：第一人称；一般过去时
第三步：1. school trip 2. have great fun 3. pick strawberries 4. tomato plants 5. work so hard for...
第四步：1. my 2. the 3. by 4. stayed 5. picked 6. leaves 7. and 8. cook 9. certainly 10. What
Dear Bob,
How's it going? I'd like to tell you something about my school trip last weekend.
It was sunny last weekend. I went on the school trip to a farm with my classmates. It wasn't very far, so we went there by bike. We stayed there for a whole day and had great fun. In the morning, we picked strawberries. In the afternoon, we learnt to cut branches and leaves from tomato plants. Then we watered them and picked some fresh vegetables. In the evening, the farmer helped us cook dinner with vegetables we picked ourselves. They certainly tasted good! I guessed the reason was that we worked so hard for them. What a great weekend!
Yours,
Li Hua
【一展身手】
It was sunny last Saturday. All the teachers and students of our class went to Mount Huangshan. We started at 7:30 in the morning and went there by bus. We climbed the mountain first. On the top, we saw the beautiful sea of clouds. We took many photos there. We had a great time. Though we felt a little tired, we were very happy.
第一步：第一人称；一般过去时
第三步：1. school trip 2. have great fun 3. pick strawberries 4. tomato plants 5. work so hard for...
第四步：1. my 2. the 3. by 4. stayed 5. picked 6. leaves 7. and 8. cook 9. certainly 10. What
Dear Bob,
How's it going? I'd like to tell you something about my school trip last weekend.
It was sunny last weekend. I went on the school trip to a farm with my classmates. It wasn't very far, so we went there by bike. We stayed there for a whole day and had great fun. In the morning, we picked strawberries. In the afternoon, we learnt to cut branches and leaves from tomato plants. Then we watered them and picked some fresh vegetables. In the evening, the farmer helped us cook dinner with vegetables we picked ourselves. They certainly tasted good! I guessed the reason was that we worked so hard for them. What a great weekend!
Yours,
Li Hua
【一展身手】
It was sunny last Saturday. All the teachers and students of our class went to Mount Huangshan. We started at 7:30 in the morning and went there by bus. We climbed the mountain first. On the top, we saw the beautiful sea of clouds. We took many photos there. We had a great time. Though we felt a little tired, we were very happy.
