五、书面表达。
星期天的上午,天气晴朗,Alice来到她家附近的公园骑自行车。公园里有很多人。有的在湖边散步或慢跑,有的在练功夫或看书,有的在遛狗,有些孩子在一起玩耍……请你用英文写一篇短文,描述Alice看到的情景。
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70词左右。
星期天的上午,天气晴朗,Alice来到她家附近的公园骑自行车。公园里有很多人。有的在湖边散步或慢跑,有的在练功夫或看书,有的在遛狗,有些孩子在一起玩耍……请你用英文写一篇短文,描述Alice看到的情景。
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70词左右。
答案
It is a fine Sunday morning. Alice goes to the park near her home to ride her bike. There are lots of people in the park. Some are walking or jogging by the lake. Some are doing kung fu or reading books under big trees. Others are walking their dogs. Some little kids are playing games happily together. All of them enjoy the nice morning.
解析
【分析】这是一篇提示类英语书面表达,解题思路如下:1.确定时态:描述当天的场景用一般现在时;2.梳理所有要求要点:周日上午、晴朗天气、Alice去家附近公园骑车、公园内不同人群的活动(湖边散步/慢跑、练功夫/看书、遛狗、孩子玩耍);3.用合适句式组织内容,如用there be引出场景,用some...some...others...结构列举人群活动,确保覆盖所有要点,词数控制在70左右,适当添加细节使语句通顺。
【解析】写作步骤:1.开篇点明时间、天气、人物及行为:It is a fine Sunday morning. Alice goes to the park near her home to ride her bike. 2.用there be句型引出公园的人群:There are lots of people in the park. 3.用“some...some...others...”结构分别描述不同人的活动:Some are walking or jogging by the lake. Some are doing kung fu or reading books under big trees. Others are walking their dogs. Some little kids are playing games happily together. 4.结尾添加总结句使内容完整:All of them enjoy the nice morning. 这样既覆盖所有要点,又符合词数要求。
【答案】It is a fine Sunday morning. Alice goes to the park near her home to ride her bike. There are lots of people in the park. Some are walking or jogging by the lake. Some are doing kung fu or reading books under big trees. Others are walking their dogs. Some little kids are playing games happily together. All of them enjoy the nice morning.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、场景描述
【点评】该作文紧扣题目所有要点,时态运用准确,句式丰富多样,语句通顺自然,符合70词左右的要求,是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤:1.开篇点明时间、天气、人物及行为:It is a fine Sunday morning. Alice goes to the park near her home to ride her bike. 2.用there be句型引出公园的人群:There are lots of people in the park. 3.用“some...some...others...”结构分别描述不同人的活动:Some are walking or jogging by the lake. Some are doing kung fu or reading books under big trees. Others are walking their dogs. Some little kids are playing games happily together. 4.结尾添加总结句使内容完整:All of them enjoy the nice morning. 这样既覆盖所有要点,又符合词数要求。
【答案】It is a fine Sunday morning. Alice goes to the park near her home to ride her bike. There are lots of people in the park. Some are walking or jogging by the lake. Some are doing kung fu or reading books under big trees. Others are walking their dogs. Some little kids are playing games happily together. All of them enjoy the nice morning.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般现在时、场景描述
【点评】该作文紧扣题目所有要点,时态运用准确,句式丰富多样,语句通顺自然,符合70词左右的要求,是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.7
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