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Ⅳ. 阅读校报并完成任务。
Dear students,
Do you like celebrating your birthday? We are making a column about birthdays for our school newspaper. When is your birthday? Who do you usually celebrate your birthday with? How do you usually celebrate it and why? What will you do next birthday? Please write a passage about your next birthday and send it to us!
Editor from School News
请写一篇文章给校报投稿,介绍一下自己的生日吧!
Dear editor,
Yours,
Dear students,
Do you like celebrating your birthday? We are making a column about birthdays for our school newspaper. When is your birthday? Who do you usually celebrate your birthday with? How do you usually celebrate it and why? What will you do next birthday? Please write a passage about your next birthday and send it to us!
Editor from School News
请写一篇文章给校报投稿,介绍一下自己的生日吧!
Dear editor,
Yours,
答案
One possible version:
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to introduce how I celebrate my birthday.
My birthday is on 20th July. I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and friends. On my birthday, I usually eat noodles with eggs to wish for a long life. Every year, my parents have a birthday party for me. We play games together. I always have fun with my family and friends at the party. Celebrating my birthday with them makes me feel happy and warm. But next birthday, I want to do something different. I want to take a trip to learn something new. I think it is really meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to introduce how I celebrate my birthday.
My birthday is on 20th July. I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and friends. On my birthday, I usually eat noodles with eggs to wish for a long life. Every year, my parents have a birthday party for me. We play games together. I always have fun with my family and friends at the party. Celebrating my birthday with them makes me feel happy and warm. But next birthday, I want to do something different. I want to take a trip to learn something new. I think it is really meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求给校报写一封投稿信介绍自己的生日。解题思路：首先明确书信格式，开头用称呼、结尾署上姓名；其次围绕题目给出的四个核心问题（生日时间、庆祝对象、庆祝方式及原因、下一个生日计划）组织内容，确保覆盖所有要求要点；最后保证语句通顺、用词准确，符合学生的英语表达水平。
【解析】1. 遵循书信格式：开头写称呼Dear editor，结尾写Yours及署名；2. 开篇点明写作目的，说明是来介绍自己的生日情况；3. 依次说明生日日期、通常和家人朋友庆祝，具体的庆祝方式（吃长寿面、办派对、玩游戏）及原因（感到开心温暖）；4. 说明下一个生日的计划（去旅行学习新东西，认为有意义），完成内容构建。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to introduce how I celebrate my birthday.
My birthday is on 20th July. I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and friends. On my birthday, I usually eat noodles with eggs to wish for a long life. Every year, my parents have a birthday party for me. We play games together. I always have fun with my family and friends at the party. Celebrating my birthday with them makes me feel happy and warm. But next birthday, I want to do something different. I want to take a trip to learn something new. I think it is really meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达（生日）
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的生日话题，考查英语书信写作能力，要求覆盖题目指定的所有要点，贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的语言组织和应用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 遵循书信格式：开头写称呼Dear editor，结尾写Yours及署名；2. 开篇点明写作目的，说明是来介绍自己的生日情况；3. 依次说明生日日期、通常和家人朋友庆祝，具体的庆祝方式（吃长寿面、办派对、玩游戏）及原因（感到开心温暖）；4. 说明下一个生日的计划（去旅行学习新东西，认为有意义），完成内容构建。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear editor,
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to introduce how I celebrate my birthday.
My birthday is on 20th July. I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and friends. On my birthday, I usually eat noodles with eggs to wish for a long life. Every year, my parents have a birthday party for me. We play games together. I always have fun with my family and friends at the party. Celebrating my birthday with them makes me feel happy and warm. But next birthday, I want to do something different. I want to take a trip to learn something new. I think it is really meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题表达（生日）
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的生日话题，考查英语书信写作能力，要求覆盖题目指定的所有要点，贴近学生生活，易于学生发挥，能有效考查学生的语言组织和应用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
