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你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about Me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 你的爱好；
2. 你的优点和缺点；
3. 用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. ...
(2009年广州市中考书面表达)
▲参考范文
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've
collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think
I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-
working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends.
Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important
exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about Me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 你的爱好；
2. 你的优点和缺点；
3. 用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. ...
(2009年广州市中考书面表达)
▲参考范文
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've
collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think
I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-
working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends.
Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important
exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
答案
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends. Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends. Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
解析
【分析】
写作时需围绕主题“All about Me”，严格覆盖题目要求的三个要点：1. 爱好；2. 优点和缺点；3. 用具体事例说明某个优点或缺点。首先开篇点明个人基本信息（姓名、班级）；接着阐述爱好并补充具体细节（如收集CD、写作业时听音乐）；然后说明自身优点（如性格开朗，受朋友欢迎）；再点明缺点（如不够勤奋）并列举具体事例（周末看电影、考前熬夜看电视、运动）；最后补充父母的态度及自身成绩情况，使内容完整连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇：介绍身份“My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3.”，简洁明了；
2. 爱好部分：说明喜欢流行音乐，用“collected a lot of CDs”“do my homework with music on”补充具体细节，让内容更真实；
3. 优点部分：通过朋友的看法“I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me”体现性格开朗的优点；
4. 缺点部分：点明不够勤奋，用“go to movies during weekends”“watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams”具体事例说明；
5. 结尾补充父母的态度“parents feel worried about me”及自身成绩“still do well at school”，使文章结构完整，逻辑连贯。
【答案】
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends. Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中考英语写作、要点式作文
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体生动，语言符合初中生英语水平，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，是一篇优秀的中考书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作时需围绕主题“All about Me”，严格覆盖题目要求的三个要点：1. 爱好；2. 优点和缺点；3. 用具体事例说明某个优点或缺点。首先开篇点明个人基本信息（姓名、班级）；接着阐述爱好并补充具体细节（如收集CD、写作业时听音乐）；然后说明自身优点（如性格开朗，受朋友欢迎）；再点明缺点（如不够勤奋）并列举具体事例（周末看电影、考前熬夜看电视、运动）；最后补充父母的态度及自身成绩情况，使内容完整连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇：介绍身份“My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3.”，简洁明了；
2. 爱好部分：说明喜欢流行音乐，用“collected a lot of CDs”“do my homework with music on”补充具体细节，让内容更真实；
3. 优点部分：通过朋友的看法“I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me”体现性格开朗的优点；
4. 缺点部分：点明不够勤奋，用“go to movies during weekends”“watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams”具体事例说明；
5. 结尾补充父母的态度“parents feel worried about me”及自身成绩“still do well at school”，使文章结构完整，逻辑连贯。
【答案】
All about Me
My name is Li Hua and I'm from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I've collected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I'm not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends. Sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot, even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中考英语写作、要点式作文
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体生动，语言符合初中生英语水平，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，是一篇优秀的中考书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
