Ⅰ Translation.
1. 几天前,我朋友从上海给我寄来了一双鞋。(send sth. to sb.)
2. 我儿子十个月大,还不能独立行走。(on one’s own / by himself / alone yet)
3. 尽管安娜比汤姆的经验少,但她工作更努力。(less... than)
4. 这项新的工作似乎不可能在一周内完成。(seem + adjective + to + verb)
5. 你确定约翰打算来中国旅行? (be certain that)

My friend sent a pair of shoes to me from Shanghai a few days ago.
My son is ten months old, he can't walk on his own/by himself/alone yet.
Although Anna has less experience than Tom, she works harder.
It seems impossible to complete the new task within a week.
Are you certain that John is going to visit China?

Ⅱ 你校正在举办英语故事征文大赛,主题是弘扬中国传统文化。你想在比赛中讲述巾帼英雄花木兰替父从军的故事。你的初稿中有10处错误,请你指出并改正这些错误,同时在括号中标注错误类型(gr = grammar mistake, sp = spelling mistake, p = punctuation mistake)。
| Once upon a time, there lived a girl in antient China named Mulan. One day, some people sent to Mulan’s village. They said, “The war was coming and man were needed for the army.” So there should be one man from each family to join the army, encluding Mulan’s father. | 1. ancient (sp) |
| However. Mulan’s father was old and weak. Mulan wanted take her fathers’ place, but women were not allowd in the army. The next morning, Mulan dresses up as a man and joined the army. | |
| On my opinion, Mulan was a good daughter and a real hero. | |

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