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任务一:根据上面的文章完成下面的思维导图。
My Music Story
Topic—Music has a 1.
Two years ago,I suffered from a serious 2.
Experience
The song the doctor p
ed during the treatment gave me 3.
Music greatly helped me to recover and 4.
Conclusion—Music can help us when we feel 5.
My Music Story
Topic—Music has a 1.
strong
influence on my life.Two years ago,I suffered from a serious 2.
illness
and had to go through a medical treatment.Experience
The song the doctor p
ed during the treatment gave me 3.strength
.Music greatly helped me to recover and 4.
come back to life
.Conclusion—Music can help us when we feel 5.
sad or lonely
.答案
1. strong 2. illness 3. strength 4. come back to life
5. sad or lonely
5. sad or lonely
解析
【分析】本题为语境填词题，需结合每个空所在句子的语境、固定搭配及常用词汇确定答案。先明确思维导图主题是音乐对生活的影响，再逐句分析各空的语法和语境需求，进而匹配合适词汇。
【解析】1. 固定搭配have a strong influence on表示“对……有强烈影响”，此处需形容词修饰名词influence，故填strong；2. suffer from后接表示疾病的名词，a serious illness符合“患重病”的语境，故填illness；3. give sb sth结构中需填名词，结合语境治疗时音乐带来的感受，strength（力量）符合，故填strength；4. 结合音乐帮助恢复的语境，come back to life（重新振作）符合逻辑，故填come back to life；5. 结论说明音乐发挥作用的情境，sad or lonely（悲伤或孤独）符合语境，故填sad or lonely。
【答案】1. strong 2. illness 3. strength 4. come back to life 5. sad or lonely
【知识点】形容词修饰名词，名词词义，固定搭配
【点评】本题围绕音乐的影响展开，通过语境填词考查学生对常用词汇和固定搭配的掌握，难度适中，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 固定搭配have a strong influence on表示“对……有强烈影响”，此处需形容词修饰名词influence，故填strong；2. suffer from后接表示疾病的名词，a serious illness符合“患重病”的语境，故填illness；3. give sb sth结构中需填名词，结合语境治疗时音乐带来的感受，strength（力量）符合，故填strength；4. 结合音乐帮助恢复的语境，come back to life（重新振作）符合逻辑，故填come back to life；5. 结论说明音乐发挥作用的情境，sad or lonely（悲伤或孤独）符合语境，故填sad or lonely。
【答案】1. strong 2. illness 3. strength 4. come back to life 5. sad or lonely
【知识点】形容词修饰名词，名词词义，固定搭配
【点评】本题围绕音乐的影响展开，通过语境填词考查学生对常用词汇和固定搭配的掌握，难度适中，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】0.5
任务二:请对课文和语篇中的佳句进行仿写。
1. 课文佳句:I like music that has beautiful lyrics.
仿写:我喜欢节奏感强的音乐。
2. 课文佳句:Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad...
仿写:当我情绪低落时,它让我再次坚强。
3. 语篇佳句:It gave me strength and provided me with a chance to go through the darkness.
仿写:钢琴曲给我提供了一个保持平和的机会。
1. 课文佳句:I like music that has beautiful lyrics.
仿写:我喜欢节奏感强的音乐。
I like music that has strong beats.
2. 课文佳句:Music makes me happy when I am feeling sad...
仿写:当我情绪低落时,它让我再次坚强。
It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits.
3. 语篇佳句:It gave me strength and provided me with a chance to go through the darkness.
仿写:钢琴曲给我提供了一个保持平和的机会。
Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful.
答案
1. I like music that has strong beats.
2. It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits.
3. Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful.
2. It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits.
3. Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful.
解析
【分析】首先观察每道题的原句结构：第1题是“I like + 名词 + that引导的定语从句”，需将中文“节奏感强的”转换为定语从句的表达；第2题是“主语+使役动词+宾语+形容词+when引导的时间状语从句”，对应中文“情绪低落时”“再次坚强”的表达；第3题是“主语+给我提供某物+提供机会做某事”，对应中文“钢琴曲”“保持平和”的正确英语表达，仿写时要匹配原句的句式和语法结构，确保词汇准确。
【解析】1. 原句结构为“I like music that + 定语”，“节奏感强”对应“has strong beats”，故仿写为I like music that has strong beats；2. 原句结构为“主语+makes sb + 形容词+when...”，“情绪低落”是in low spirits，“再次坚强”是strong again，故仿写为It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits；3. 原句结构为“主语+provided sb with a chance to do sth”，“钢琴曲”是Piano music，“保持平和”是keep peaceful，故仿写为Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful。
【答案】1. I like music that has strong beats.
2. It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits.
3. Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful.
【知识点】定语从句、时间状语从句、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查英语句式仿写，需准确把握原句的语法结构，将中文语义转换为符合英语表达习惯的句子，难度适中，适合学生巩固基础句式。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 原句结构为“I like music that + 定语”，“节奏感强”对应“has strong beats”，故仿写为I like music that has strong beats；2. 原句结构为“主语+makes sb + 形容词+when...”，“情绪低落”是in low spirits，“再次坚强”是strong again，故仿写为It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits；3. 原句结构为“主语+provided sb with a chance to do sth”，“钢琴曲”是Piano music，“保持平和”是keep peaceful，故仿写为Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful。
【答案】1. I like music that has strong beats.
2. It makes me strong again when I'm in low spirits.
3. Piano music provided me with a chance to keep peaceful.
【知识点】定语从句、时间状语从句、固定搭配
【点评】本题考查英语句式仿写，需准确把握原句的语法结构，将中文语义转换为符合英语表达习惯的句子，难度适中，适合学生巩固基础句式。
【难度系数】0.5
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写作典范 主题:音乐的魔力
音乐是我们生活中不可缺少的精神食粮,它可以激发我们的斗志,也可以帮助我们放松身心。请以“The Magic of Music”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要求:1.讲述一个自己的故事;2.你的感悟。
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时、一般现在时
体裁:记叙文
The Magic of Music
[范文展示]
The Magic of Music
①Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times. ②For me, music is like a close friend who is always there when I need comfort.
③I still remember one afternoon when I did badly in a maths test. I felt so terrible that I didn't want to talk to anyone. Then I decided to listen to some music that my piano teacher often played. The gentle sound filled my room, and slowly, my heart became calm. The music seemed to understand my feelings and helped me forget my worries. After listening, I felt strong enough to try again.
④This experience showed me the magic of music. It can cheer us up and give us hope. Whenever I feel down, I will turn to music, and it always brings peace to my heart.
[名师点评]
①开篇点题,简要说明音乐的重要性。
②③文章多处运用定语从句、状语从句,起到了提升结构完整性、增强表达逻辑与丰富内容细节的作用。
④尾段首句承上启下,并呼应标题。
写作典范 主题:音乐的魔力
音乐是我们生活中不可缺少的精神食粮,它可以激发我们的斗志,也可以帮助我们放松身心。请以“The Magic of Music”为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
要求:1.讲述一个自己的故事;2.你的感悟。
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时、一般现在时
体裁:记叙文
The Magic of Music
[范文展示]
The Magic of Music
①Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times. ②For me, music is like a close friend who is always there when I need comfort.
③I still remember one afternoon when I did badly in a maths test. I felt so terrible that I didn't want to talk to anyone. Then I decided to listen to some music that my piano teacher often played. The gentle sound filled my room, and slowly, my heart became calm. The music seemed to understand my feelings and helped me forget my worries. After listening, I felt strong enough to try again.
④This experience showed me the magic of music. It can cheer us up and give us hope. Whenever I feel down, I will turn to music, and it always brings peace to my heart.
[名师点评]
①开篇点题,简要说明音乐的重要性。
②③文章多处运用定语从句、状语从句,起到了提升结构完整性、增强表达逻辑与丰富内容细节的作用。
④尾段首句承上启下,并呼应标题。
答案
The Magic of Music
Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times.
I still remember I did badly in a maths test months ago. I felt so upset that I refused to talk to anyone. Then I played the soft music my piano teacher recommended. The gentle melody calmed me down slowly, helping me forget all my worries. Soon I got enough courage to face my failure and work harder later.
This experience tells me music is really magical. It always cheers me up and gives me hope whenever I feel down.
Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times.
I still remember I did badly in a maths test months ago. I felt so upset that I refused to talk to anyone. Then I played the soft music my piano teacher recommended. The gentle melody calmed me down slowly, helping me forget all my worries. Soon I got enough courage to face my failure and work harder later.
This experience tells me music is really magical. It always cheers me up and gives me hope whenever I feel down.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为《The Magic of Music》，要求围绕“音乐的魔力”，结合个人故事与感悟完成100词左右的英语短文，需用第一人称，时态兼顾一般过去时（叙事）与一般现在时（感悟）。写作思路分三步：1. 开篇点题，简述音乐对生活的核心作用；2. 选取具体个人经历（如考试失利），详细描述音乐如何帮助自己走出低落；3. 总结感悟，升华音乐的魔力并呼应标题。写作时需注意语言简洁，符合字数要求，时态准确。
【解析】
写作步骤：①开篇：直接点明音乐是生活的重要部分，能带来快乐、帮助度过难关，呼应主题；②叙事：用一般过去时讲述数学考试失利后，听钢琴老师推荐的音乐平复心情、重拾勇气的经历，细节具体；③感悟：用一般现在时总结经历，点明音乐的魔力，表达遇到挫折时求助音乐的态度，呼应标题。整体结构清晰，符合题目所有要求。
【答案】
The Magic of Music
Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times.
I still remember I did badly in a maths test months ago. I felt so upset that I refused to talk to anyone. Then I played the soft music my piano teacher recommended. The gentle melody calmed me down slowly, helping me forget all my worries. Soon I got enough courage to face my failure and work harder later.
This experience tells me music is really magical. It always cheers me up and gives me hope whenever I feel down.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，通过真实个人经历体现音乐的魔力，结构清晰（开篇点题-叙事支撑-感悟升华），时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，符合题目对字数、内容、人称的全部要求，是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作主题为《The Magic of Music》，要求围绕“音乐的魔力”，结合个人故事与感悟完成100词左右的英语短文，需用第一人称，时态兼顾一般过去时（叙事）与一般现在时（感悟）。写作思路分三步：1. 开篇点题，简述音乐对生活的核心作用；2. 选取具体个人经历（如考试失利），详细描述音乐如何帮助自己走出低落；3. 总结感悟，升华音乐的魔力并呼应标题。写作时需注意语言简洁，符合字数要求，时态准确。
【解析】
写作步骤：①开篇：直接点明音乐是生活的重要部分，能带来快乐、帮助度过难关，呼应主题；②叙事：用一般过去时讲述数学考试失利后，听钢琴老师推荐的音乐平复心情、重拾勇气的经历，细节具体；③感悟：用一般现在时总结经历，点明音乐的魔力，表达遇到挫折时求助音乐的态度，呼应标题。整体结构清晰，符合题目所有要求。
【答案】
The Magic of Music
Music is a wonderful part of our lives. It can not only bring us joy but also help us get through hard times.
I still remember I did badly in a maths test months ago. I felt so upset that I refused to talk to anyone. Then I played the soft music my piano teacher recommended. The gentle melody calmed me down slowly, helping me forget all my worries. Soon I got enough courage to face my failure and work harder later.
This experience tells me music is really magical. It always cheers me up and gives me hope whenever I feel down.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，通过真实个人经历体现音乐的魔力，结构清晰（开篇点题-叙事支撑-感悟升华），时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，符合题目对字数、内容、人称的全部要求，是一篇优秀的英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
