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世界上有很多珍稀动物需要人类保护，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该保护这些珍稀动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右。
【书面表达】
世界上有很多珍稀动物需要人类保护，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该保护这些珍稀动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右。
My favourite animals are pandas. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite animals are pandas. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
My favourite animals are pandas. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求依据思维导图提示写关于最想保护的动物的短文。解题思路如下：1. 确定描述的动物，优先选题目示例中的珍稀动物（如熊猫）；2. 按思维导图的三个模块组织内容：①介绍动物（外形、喜好、食性等）；②列出两点生存威胁；③提出两点保护建议；3. 注意词数要求（70左右），避免真实信息，语言通顺自然。
【解析】首先选定熊猫作为描述对象，符合珍稀动物主题。第一部分介绍熊猫：外形黑白，喜欢爬树、在森林活动，以竹子为食，很可爱；第二部分写生存威胁：一是繁殖率低，幼崽易死亡；二是竹林面积缩小；第三部分提保护建议：建立自然保护区、种植更多竹子，筹集资金。将这些内容串联成短文，控制词数，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My favourite animals are pandas. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物保护英语词汇
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先选定熊猫作为描述对象，符合珍稀动物主题。第一部分介绍熊猫：外形黑白，喜欢爬树、在森林活动，以竹子为食，很可爱；第二部分写生存威胁：一是繁殖率低，幼崽易死亡；二是竹林面积缩小；第三部分提保护建议：建立自然保护区、种植更多竹子，筹集资金。将这些内容串联成短文，控制词数，符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My favourite animals are pandas. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely.
But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don't have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller and smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant more bamboo in these parks so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope everyone can do something to protect these cute animals.
【知识点】英语书面表达、动物保护英语词汇
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整覆盖思维导图的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
