写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D31
「2026江苏南通田家炳中学月考」
随着家庭生活水平的提高，同学们或多或少会有一些零花钱，请结合要点提示，以“How to Spend My Pocket Money”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1.How do you get your pocket money?
2.What do you usually use your pocket money to do?
3.What other things do you think you can do with your pocket money?
注意：
1.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文语言连贯、通顺。
2.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
How to Spend My Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money.

主题写作专项
基础版范文
How to Spend My Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money. I usually get my pocket money by doing some housework, like cleaning my room or washing dishes.
I often use my pocket money to buy snacks and school things. Sometimes, I buy my favourite comic books. But I think I can do more meaningful things with it. For example, I can save some money for future use. I can also buy small gifts for my parents on their birthdays. What's more, I can donate some to help poor children.
In this way, I can learn to manage my money well and make it more valuable.
进阶版范文
How to Spend My Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money. I usually make it by doing housework, like cleaning the house and watering plants. It also makes me understand the value of labor.
I spend most of my pocket money on school things and my favourite books. Sometimes, I buy some snacks. However, I think I can use pocket money in more meaningful ways. For example, I can save some for future use. I can also buy small gifts for my family at festivals. What's more, donating a little to help those in need is a good choice.
Let's learn to manage our pocket money well. It not only helps us develop good habits but also makes our life more meaningful.

【分析】首先审题，明确本次写作是英语话题作文，主题为“How to Spend My Pocket Money”，需覆盖三个核心要点：零花钱的获取方式、日常用途、其他有意义的使用方式；其次，结合已给出的开头，按照“来源→日常用途→其他用法→总结”的逻辑组织内容，注意词数80左右，避免提及真实校名和姓名，语言需连贯通顺。
【解析】围绕三个要点展开写作：1. 零花钱来源：通过做家务（如打扫房间、洗碗）获得；2. 日常用途：购买零食、学习用品、喜爱的漫画书；3. 其他用法：储蓄备用、给父母买生日礼物、捐赠给贫困儿童；最后总结合理规划零花钱的意义，确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】How to Spend My Pocket Money
As families are now living a better life, we kids can have some pocket money. I usually get my pocket money by doing some housework, like cleaning my room or washing dishes.
I often use my pocket money to buy snacks and school things. Sometimes, I buy my favourite comic books. But I think I can do more meaningful things with it. For example, I can save some money for future use. I can also buy small gifts for my parents on their birthdays. What's more, I can donate some to help poor children.
In this way, I can learn to manage my money well and make it more valuable.
【知识点】英语话题写作、零花钱相关表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，既体现了对零花钱的合理规划，又传递了感恩与助人的积极价值观，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.6