三、书面表达。
在英语课上,老师请每个人写下自己的生活习惯。你的同学李磊也写了一份(见下表)。请你以“Li Lei’s Lifestyle”为题用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 你认为李磊的生活习惯是否健康?为什么?(给出至少两个理由)
2. 你觉得如何改善?(给出至少两条建议)

要求:1. 短文须包含以上内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Lei’s Lifestyle
It is important to have a good lifestyle, but some people don’t care about this.
In short, health is very important for us all. All of us should do more useful things to keep healthy.
在英语课上,老师请每个人写下自己的生活习惯。你的同学李磊也写了一份(见下表)。请你以“Li Lei’s Lifestyle”为题用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1. 你认为李磊的生活习惯是否健康?为什么?(给出至少两个理由)
2. 你觉得如何改善?(给出至少两条建议)
要求:1. 短文须包含以上内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语言表达要准确,语句通顺,行文连贯;
3. 词数80左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Lei’s Lifestyle
It is important to have a good lifestyle, but some people don’t care about this.
In short, health is very important for us all. All of us should do more useful things to keep healthy.
答案
I don't think Li Lei has a healthy lifestyle. He eats too much meat for three meals every day, and he also often eats junk food like chocolate, chips and hamburgers. He hardly eats any vegetables at all. Besides, he only takes walking to school as his daily exercise, and he always stays up late, which is really bad for his body.
I think he should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables, and stop eating too much junk food. Also, he should go to bed early to get enough sleep, and do more sports after school to make himself stronger.
I think he should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables, and stop eating too much junk food. Also, he should go to bed early to get enough sleep, and do more sports after school to make himself stronger.
解析
本题为七年级英语书面表达题,解题可按以下步骤完成:
1. 先明确核心要求:首先判断李磊的生活习惯不健康,给出至少2个支撑理由:①他饮食结构不合理,摄入大量肉类,还常吃巧克力、薯片这类垃圾食品,几乎不吃蔬菜;②他的运动量严重不足,仅靠走路上学锻炼,还经常熬夜,无法保证充足睡眠。
2. 再给出至少2条可行的改善建议:①调整饮食结构,多吃新鲜蔬果,减少垃圾食品的摄入;②改掉熬夜的坏习惯,保证充足睡眠,课余时间多做跑步、打球等运动。
3. 行文衔接已给出的开头和结尾,使用七年级已学的简单词汇和句式,控制总词数在80左右,保证语句通顺连贯。
1. 先明确核心要求:首先判断李磊的生活习惯不健康,给出至少2个支撑理由:①他饮食结构不合理,摄入大量肉类,还常吃巧克力、薯片这类垃圾食品,几乎不吃蔬菜;②他的运动量严重不足,仅靠走路上学锻炼,还经常熬夜,无法保证充足睡眠。
2. 再给出至少2条可行的改善建议:①调整饮食结构,多吃新鲜蔬果,减少垃圾食品的摄入;②改掉熬夜的坏习惯,保证充足睡眠,课余时间多做跑步、打球等运动。
3. 行文衔接已给出的开头和结尾,使用七年级已学的简单词汇和句式,控制总词数在80左右,保证语句通顺连贯。
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