三、书面表达。
假设你是李明,你的英语笔友Peter最近很失落,因为他的父母拒绝给他买心仪的篮球鞋,认为价格太贵。请你写一封回信,讲述你攒钱买心爱之物的一次经历和感受,以此鼓励他靠自己的努力获得想要的东西。
写作提示:
1. What did you want to buy? Why did you want it?
2. How did you save money and make extra money?
3. What did you learn from this experience?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含写作提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
3. 80—100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
I can understand your sadness. Your parents refuse to buy the basketball shoes for you because they think they are too expensive. We shouldn't always ask our parents for expensive things. Let me tell you my story about saving up for something I loved.
Stick to your goal and try your best. I'm sure you will get the basketball shoes soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
假设你是李明,你的英语笔友Peter最近很失落,因为他的父母拒绝给他买心仪的篮球鞋,认为价格太贵。请你写一封回信,讲述你攒钱买心爱之物的一次经历和感受,以此鼓励他靠自己的努力获得想要的东西。
写作提示:
1. What did you want to buy? Why did you want it?
2. How did you save money and make extra money?
3. What did you learn from this experience?
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含写作提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
3. 80—100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
I can understand your sadness. Your parents refuse to buy the basketball shoes for you because they think they are too expensive. We shouldn't always ask our parents for expensive things. Let me tell you my story about saving up for something I loved.
Stick to your goal and try your best. I'm sure you will get the basketball shoes soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
Last year, I wanted a pair of professional running shoes very much, because I joined the school running club and my old shoes were too worn to support my daily training. I stopped buying snacks every day to save pocket money, and I also made extra money by walking dogs for neighbors and helping little kids with their homework on weekends. After three months, I finally got the shoes. I learned that things we get through our own effort are much more precious, and the process brings me great satisfaction.
解析
这是一封写给笔友的劝慰回信,写作需要覆盖全部给定的三个提示要点:1. 首先点明自己当初想要购买的心爱物品和对应的原因,符合日常学生生活场景即可;2. 介绍自己攒零花钱、赚取额外收入的具体可行的方式;3. 分享这次攒钱经历得到的感悟,传递靠自身努力获得物品的正向感受。行文要贴合八年级的词汇语法难度,语气真诚,词数控制在要求范围内,不得出现真实个人信息。
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