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俗话说“远亲不如近邻”，邻居在我们的生活中是非常重要的。请你根据下面的提示，以“My Neighbour”为题写一篇作文，词数不少于 70。
【要点】1. Who's your neighbour?
2. What does he/ she do?
3. What is he/ she like?
4. ...
【注意】1. 短文需包括以上要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 可展开合理想象，适当发挥。
My Neighbour
俗话说“远亲不如近邻”，邻居在我们的生活中是非常重要的。请你根据下面的提示，以“My Neighbour”为题写一篇作文，词数不少于 70。
【要点】1. Who's your neighbour?
2. What does he/ she do?
3. What is he/ she like?
4. ...
【注意】1. 短文需包括以上要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 可展开合理想象，适当发挥。
My Neighbour
As the saying goes, "Close neighbours are better than distant relatives". Neighbours are very important in our lives.
I am Simon. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter.
We live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor.
He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard.
He is kind and helpful. He can help people with all kinds of problems.
Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him.
So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour like him.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood.
I like my neighbours.
答案
One possible version
My Neighbour
As the saying goes, "Close neighbours are better than distant relatives". Neighbours are very important in our lives.
I am Simon. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor. He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard. He is kind and helpful. He can help people with all kinds of problems. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour like him.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like my neighbours.
My Neighbour
As the saying goes, "Close neighbours are better than distant relatives". Neighbours are very important in our lives.
I am Simon. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor. He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard. He is kind and helpful. He can help people with all kinds of problems. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour like him.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like my neighbours.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，我们可以按以下思路分步完成：
1. 先审题明确要求：主题是介绍自己的邻居，必须覆盖题干给出的核心要点，词数不少于70，语句通顺连贯，可适当补充细节。
2. 开篇引入：可以直接呼应题干提到的“远亲不如近邻”的俗语，自然点出邻居在生活中的重要性，快速切入主题。
3. 主体部分依次对应要点展开：首先介绍邻居的身份、居住位置，回答“他是谁”的问题；接着介绍他的职业和工作状态，对应职业相关要点；之后描述他的性格特质，补充相关的邻里相处细节，对应性格相关要点，让内容更真实饱满。
4. 结尾部分适当升华，表达自己对邻居的喜爱，点明邻里互助的正向主旨，完成全文。全程使用一般现在时即可，避免出现语法错误。
【解析】
本篇参考范文结构清晰，完全符合写作要求：
1. 首段直接引用对应英文俗语，呼应题干背景，开门见山点明邻居的重要性，完成开篇引入。
2. 主体段落依次覆盖所有核心要点：先引出邻居Peter，说明两人住在同一栋楼，明确邻居身份；接着介绍他是附近警局的警察，点明职业；之后描述他工作努力、善良热心，能帮大家解决各类问题，补充邻里都喜爱他的细节，内容充实连贯。
3. 结尾段升华主旨，提出邻里之间应当互相帮助，表达自己对邻居的喜爱，全文逻辑流畅，词数符合要求，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version
My Neighbour
As the saying goes, "Close neighbours are better than distant relatives". Neighbours are very important in our lives.
I am Simon. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor. He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard. He is kind and helpful. He can help people with all kinds of problems. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour like him.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like my neighbours.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，话题作文谋篇
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部写作要点，内容贴合生活实际，语句通顺自然，时态使用准确，篇幅符合要求。学生写作时可以参考该谋篇逻辑，将文中的邻居身份、职业替换为自己身边真实的邻居信息，还可以补充比如邻居曾帮自己解决困难的个性化细节，能让作文更有亮点，拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，我们可以按以下思路分步完成：
1. 先审题明确要求：主题是介绍自己的邻居，必须覆盖题干给出的核心要点，词数不少于70，语句通顺连贯，可适当补充细节。
2. 开篇引入：可以直接呼应题干提到的“远亲不如近邻”的俗语，自然点出邻居在生活中的重要性，快速切入主题。
3. 主体部分依次对应要点展开：首先介绍邻居的身份、居住位置，回答“他是谁”的问题；接着介绍他的职业和工作状态，对应职业相关要点；之后描述他的性格特质，补充相关的邻里相处细节，对应性格相关要点，让内容更真实饱满。
4. 结尾部分适当升华，表达自己对邻居的喜爱，点明邻里互助的正向主旨，完成全文。全程使用一般现在时即可，避免出现语法错误。
【解析】
本篇参考范文结构清晰，完全符合写作要求：
1. 首段直接引用对应英文俗语，呼应题干背景，开门见山点明邻居的重要性，完成开篇引入。
2. 主体段落依次覆盖所有核心要点：先引出邻居Peter，说明两人住在同一栋楼，明确邻居身份；接着介绍他是附近警局的警察，点明职业；之后描述他工作努力、善良热心，能帮大家解决各类问题，补充邻里都喜爱他的细节，内容充实连贯。
3. 结尾段升华主旨，提出邻里之间应当互相帮助，表达自己对邻居的喜爱，全文逻辑流畅，词数符合要求，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version
My Neighbour
As the saying goes, "Close neighbours are better than distant relatives". Neighbours are very important in our lives.
I am Simon. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the sixth floor. He is a policeman in a police station nearby. He works hard. He is kind and helpful. He can help people with all kinds of problems. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour like him.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like my neighbours.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，话题作文谋篇
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部写作要点，内容贴合生活实际，语句通顺自然，时态使用准确，篇幅符合要求。学生写作时可以参考该谋篇逻辑，将文中的邻居身份、职业替换为自己身边真实的邻居信息，还可以补充比如邻居曾帮自己解决困难的个性化细节，能让作文更有亮点，拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
