六、书面表达。
请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇有关 Alice 的故事。
提示：1. Alice 吃掉蛋糕后变得越来越高，有大约 9 英尺高。2. Alice 开始大哭起来，到处都是泪水。3. 她捡起一把扇子，身体竟又变小了，她不得不在自己的泪水中游。4. 途中，她遇到一只同在游泳的老鼠。5. Alice 想要跟它闲聊几句，结果却让它很生气。
要求：1. 须包括以上主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；2. 词数 70 左右。
参考词汇：tear（s）眼泪；angry 生气的。

One possible version:
Alice found a delicious cake. Alice got taller and taller after she ate up the cake. She was about nine feet tall. She was scared. She began to cry and soon there were tears all around. She picked up a fan. Strangely, she got small again. She had to swim in her own tears. On her way, she saw a mouse swimming near her. Alice wanted to chat with it, but that made the mouse very angry. Then Alice didn't know what to do next.

【分析】
这是一篇叙事类英语短文写作，解题时首先要明确核心思路：第一，确定全文时态为讲故事常用的一般过去时，保证时态统一；第二，逐一对应题干给出的5个情节提示，不能遗漏任何核心内容；第三，适当补充少量符合逻辑的细节让故事衔接更自然，同时控制总词数在70左右，把给出的参考词汇tears、angry合理融入文中，最后通读检查语法错误即可完成写作。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文为童话故事片段叙事，全程使用一般过去时，符合故事讲述的语境要求。
2. 按叙事逻辑排布内容：开篇先铺垫Alice发现美味蛋糕的小细节，接着依次展开所有提示情节：①吃完蛋糕后Alice越来越高，身高约9英尺；②Alice害怕得大哭，周围遍布泪水；③她捡到一把扇子后意外变小，只能在自己的泪水中游泳；④途中她遇到了同样在游泳的老鼠；⑤Alice想和老鼠闲聊，结果却惹得老鼠非常生气，最后补充一句简单收尾让故事完整。
3. 调整语句流畅度，核对所有要点全部覆盖，控制词数符合70左右的要求，检查所有谓语动词的过去式变形正确，无语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
Alice found a delicious cake. Alice got taller and taller after she ate up the cake. She was about nine feet tall. She was scared. She began to cry and soon there were tears all around. She picked up a fan. Strangely, she got small again. She had to swim in her own tears. On her way, she saw a mouse swimming near her. Alice wanted to chat with it, but that made the mouse very angry. Then Alice didn't know what to do next.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用；叙事类写作；要点信息整合
【点评】
本题是基础的故事类书面表达题，所有核心情节都给出明确提示，写作门槛较低，主要考察学生对一般过去时的掌握程度，以及将零散提示串联成连贯短文的能力，写作时注意不要遗漏给定要点，保证动词过去式变形准确，就能顺利完成符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7