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广州的秋天天气宜人。你校英语节将举办以“Autumn and me”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下的内容提示，写一篇英语短文参加征文活动。
1. What is the weather like in autumn in Guangzhou?
2. Why do you like autumn? (two reasons)
3. What activities do you usually do with your friends and family? (two activities)
字数要求：60词左右。
1. What is the weather like in autumn in Guangzhou?
2. Why do you like autumn? (two reasons)
3. What activities do you usually do with your friends and family? (two activities)
字数要求：60词左右。
Autumn and Me
Autumn in Guangzhou is cool and pleasant. The temperature is around 20−28℃, and the air feels fresh after the hot summer.
I love autumn for two reasons. First, the weather is perfect for outdoor activities. Second, it’s the harvest season when we enjoy tasty fruits like pears and oranges.
My family and friends often go hiking in Baiyun Mountain and have picnics in parks. It’s really relaxing when we get to the top of the mountain. We also celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival by eating mooncakes and admiring the bright moon together.
Autumn brings joy and happy moments to everyone!
答案
Autumn and Me
Autumn in Guangzhou is cool and pleasant. The temperature is around 20−28℃, and the air feels fresh after the hot summer.
I love autumn for two reasons. First, the weather is perfect for outdoor activities. Second, it’s the harvest season when we enjoy tasty fruits like pears and oranges.
My family and friends often go hiking in Baiyun Mountain and have picnics in parks. It’s really relaxing when we get to the top of the mountain. We also celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival by eating mooncakes and admiring the bright moon together.
Autumn brings joy and happy moments to everyone!
Autumn in Guangzhou is cool and pleasant. The temperature is around 20−28℃, and the air feels fresh after the hot summer.
I love autumn for two reasons. First, the weather is perfect for outdoor activities. Second, it’s the harvest season when we enjoy tasty fruits like pears and oranges.
My family and friends often go hiking in Baiyun Mountain and have picnics in parks. It’s really relaxing when we get to the top of the mountain. We also celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival by eating mooncakes and admiring the bright moon together.
Autumn brings joy and happy moments to everyone!
解析
【分析】
首先明确征文主题为“Autumn and me”，需紧扣三个提示要点完成写作：一是描述广州秋天的天气，二是说明喜欢秋天的两个原因，三是写出和家人朋友的两个活动，同时要控制字数在60词左右。构思时先点明广州秋天的气候特点，再依次阐述喜欢的理由、相关活动，最后收尾点题，确保语言贴合广州实际，表达准确流畅。
【解析】
按照提示要点依次组织内容：先介绍广州秋天凉爽宜人的气候，再说明喜欢秋天的两个理由（适合户外活动、是丰收季），接着写和亲友的活动（爬白云山、野餐，过中秋节吃月饼赏月），最后点题表达秋天带来的快乐，形成符合要求的英语短文。
【答案】
Autumn and Me
Autumn in Guangzhou is cool and pleasant. The temperature is around 20−28℃, and the air feels fresh after the hot summer.
I love autumn for two reasons. First, the weather is perfect for outdoor activities. Second, it’s the harvest season when we enjoy tasty fruits like pears and oranges.
My family and friends often go hiking in Baiyun Mountain and have picnics in parks. It’s really relaxing when we get to the top of the mountain. We also celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival by eating mooncakes and admiring the bright moon together.
Autumn brings joy and happy moments to everyone!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作
【点评】
这篇征文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，融入了广州的地域特色，情感真挚，符合英语征文的写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确征文主题为“Autumn and me”，需紧扣三个提示要点完成写作：一是描述广州秋天的天气，二是说明喜欢秋天的两个原因，三是写出和家人朋友的两个活动，同时要控制字数在60词左右。构思时先点明广州秋天的气候特点，再依次阐述喜欢的理由、相关活动，最后收尾点题，确保语言贴合广州实际，表达准确流畅。
【解析】
按照提示要点依次组织内容：先介绍广州秋天凉爽宜人的气候，再说明喜欢秋天的两个理由（适合户外活动、是丰收季），接着写和亲友的活动（爬白云山、野餐，过中秋节吃月饼赏月），最后点题表达秋天带来的快乐，形成符合要求的英语短文。
【答案】
Autumn and Me
Autumn in Guangzhou is cool and pleasant. The temperature is around 20−28℃, and the air feels fresh after the hot summer.
I love autumn for two reasons. First, the weather is perfect for outdoor activities. Second, it’s the harvest season when we enjoy tasty fruits like pears and oranges.
My family and friends often go hiking in Baiyun Mountain and have picnics in parks. It’s really relaxing when we get to the top of the mountain. We also celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival by eating mooncakes and admiring the bright moon together.
Autumn brings joy and happy moments to everyone!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点式写作
【点评】
这篇征文紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言流畅自然，融入了广州的地域特色，情感真挚，符合英语征文的写作规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
