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七、(2024·南通市如皋市模拟)书面表达(本题满分 25 分)
71. 为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄,生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……学校英文报将以"A hero in my heart"为题进行征文,请根据思维导图提示谈谈你心目中的英雄并分享你的体会。
Who is your hero?
A hero in my heart
What can you learn from him/her?
What did he/she do?
...
注意:(1) 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;(2) 词数 90 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
A hero in my heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart.
71. 为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄,生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……学校英文报将以"A hero in my heart"为题进行征文,请根据思维导图提示谈谈你心目中的英雄并分享你的体会。
Who is your hero?
A hero in my heart
What can you learn from him/her?
What did he/she do?
...
注意:(1) 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;(2) 词数 90 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
A hero in my heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart.
Some heroes can be great people, while other heroes may be common people. As for me, my father is my hero.
My father is an English teacher. He is tall with short hair. Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth.
I once failed my final exam. I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. My father was very angry, but not for my failure. He told me that I should face my problems bravely.
He helped me find out my weaknesses, and think about ways to overcome them. From then on, I knew the true meaning of courage. It doesn't mean that I am not afraid of anything but I can face my problems bravely instead of running away.
Thanks to my father, my hero, I can face all the problems bravely and become a person like him.
答案
71.One possible version:
A hero in my heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart. Some heroes can be great people, while other heroes may be common people. As for me, my father is my hero.
My father is an English teacher. He is tall with short hair. Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. I once failed my final exam. I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. My father was very angry, but not for my failure. He told me that I should face my problems bravely. He helped me find out my weaknesses, and think about ways to overcome them. From then on, I knew the true meaning of courage. It doesn't mean that I am not afraid of anything but I can face my problems bravely instead of running away.
Thanks to my father, my hero, I can face all the problems bravely and become a person like him.
A hero in my heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart. Some heroes can be great people, while other heroes may be common people. As for me, my father is my hero.
My father is an English teacher. He is tall with short hair. Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. I once failed my final exam. I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. My father was very angry, but not for my failure. He told me that I should face my problems bravely. He helped me find out my weaknesses, and think about ways to overcome them. From then on, I knew the true meaning of courage. It doesn't mean that I am not afraid of anything but I can face my problems bravely instead of running away.
Thanks to my father, my hero, I can face all the problems bravely and become a person like him.
